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    Posted: 08 March 2015 at 11:27pm
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This World (2k13)


https://soundcloud.com/quentin-themusicman-barber/this-world

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This song was written, recorded, produced by myself a while ago for a project that I decided to scrap in its entirety. I have been thinking bout reviving said project but until that thought matures beyond thought, I'll be releasing my favorite tracks from it while I prepare new material... Hope you enjoy...

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Elite Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 March 2015 at 12:14am
yea this was pretty decent track. your flow was nice and you had some good lyrics but the vocals were really low to me, just turn them up and the track would have been better. nice track nonetheless
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Pretty damn nice. beat is dope. Flow and lyrics were on point but as elite said vocals were definitely low coulda used 2-3db boost at the least. Nice song all in all
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I feel your flow man. Your hooks need more work I can tell verses are your bread and butter. but overall I feel it just the hook was underwhelming.
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Very nice homie, I thought the content and delivery of the track was A+ a different type of music and that's always a bonus in this day and age. The hook was low key but your voice and vibe made it work, quality was pretty good.. All in all man pretty tight track..
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This was unique. I liked this shit a lot. Great on the beat and this is one of the first drops ive listened from you. Great content and concepts. One thing is I wish you were a little more aggressive on the mic. I was waiting for you to tear into the beat or to progress with a more hard hitting delivery. Still liked this shit a lot. Keep at it brothaman

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