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 Topic: So You Think You Can Rap?Posted: 23 March 2015 at 7:38pm |
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Welcome to this competition meant to see if you can rap Well son if you have a written pull it out and spit from that Sadly half of what they write is pointless just to make a rhyme All the time I see them try I laugh when they ask, "This alright?" No it's not and actually you suck at rap you fat textcee You think cuz you can key a couple rhymes that your a mad emcee? You're whack and please next time you try to rap you do not have to bite My Appetite is peaked just at the thought of you attacking my Crew you haven't proved a thing the truth is you are unprepared You cannot improve you speak with useless words I'm far from scared Every time you're on the mic you provide us with comedy You think you're great and haven't learned to take comments with modesty You should take a hint and learn to come at me more cautiously Problem is that often we don't think before we walk in deep You get scared and wet the bed if you just have a thought of me You been roasted 20 times you're nothing like a raw emcee Fall asleep they're calling me the best you're just a wanna be Possibly the longest streak of murder cases all this week Check the commas properly my name is on them all you freak Blood stains on my wall from all the fakes I slaughtered aw it reaks Dark and bleak don't start to speak I want to know how ya'll compete When it's survival of the fittest and you haven't hit the gym since August '03 After weighing in the options, all contestants here this winter I have found you all have lost it, I proclaim myself the winner |
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Posted: 23 March 2015 at 9:47pm |
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Welcome to this competition meant to see if you can rap Well son if you have a written pull it out and spit from that Sadly half of what they write is pointless just to make a rhyme All the time I see them try I laugh when they ask, "This alright?" No it's not and actually you suck at rap you fat textcee You think cuz you can key a couple rhymes that your a mad emcee? ^^^^^^^^^^^^ Lmao @ that fat textcee part, funny as fuck. I am sure if SS is seeing this, he is gonna be so happy with the content part here, Though I would've liked to see a content with deeper meaning but this was funny, and as you actually 'spit' , the flow was bond to be decent. Nice work here You're whack and please next time you try to rap you do not have to bite My Appetite is peaked just at the thought of you attacking my Crew you haven't proved a thing the truth is you are unprepared You cannot improve you speak with useless words I'm far from scared Every time you're on the mic you provide us with comedy You think you're great and haven't learned to take comments with modesty ^^^^^^^^^^^^ Lmao, again some self hype, I am the real spitter or I am the super spitter man concept. But again the content read was funny, I somewhat stumbled with the flow here a bit. It wasn't as good as what you require to actually 'spit' lol You should take a hint and learn to come at me more cautiously Problem is that often we don't think before we walk in deep You get scared and wet the bed if you just have a thought of me You been roasted 20 times you're nothing like a raw emcee Fall asleep they're calling me the best you're just a wanna be Possibly the longest streak of murder cases all this week ^^^^^^^^^^^^ You used the same multis throughout !! Nice stuff , tight flow here and again the self hype fuckin MC concept. I could have given the content and concept props if It was something other than the self hype. But nothing that decent else than your flow. Check the commas properly my name is on them all you freak Blood stains on my wall from all the fakes I slaughtered aw it reaks Dark and bleak don't start to speak I want to know how ya'll compete When it's survival of the fittest and you haven't hit the gym since August '03 After weighing in the options, all contestants here this winter I have found you all have lost it, I proclaim myself the winner ^^^^^^^^^^^^ Lmao, August '03 ?? was that some personal or just a generalized statement thats supposed to be funny, I assume it to be the latter. Content again was the same self hype stuff. Fine flow again and sorry if its rude but content wasn't something 'standout' type. Overall, you could've easily had some nice or atleast better concept for your OM, I don't think self hype is something very unique, I give props to your flow throughout and concept in the first few bars was nice or atleast meaningful but later, it was all self hype ! It was funny read for first few bars but then it simply wore out ! I think you prolly wrote this verse for the crew stuff and if that was the case then its fine but I would surely look forward for you to do an OM that has a better concept Peace
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Posted: 24 March 2015 at 12:25am |
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Thanks for the detailed feed Axy. First, i forgot to mention this is a keystyle I typed up in 5 minutes on my lunch break. It was more for comedy than anything so sorry for the disappointment contentwise. The fat emcee and august 03 lines are both personal and comedy but i wont say who it's towards as they are a member here. This is just a warm up as I will be starting to post Oms again so thanks for the feedback and don't worry I'll be coming with some different content on my writtens.
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Posted: 24 March 2015 at 12:31am |
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I wanna know who the fat guy is. Key was ok.
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Posted: 24 March 2015 at 12:47am |
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Very well, Exoduzt. And if Exo wanna beef I'm open to battle but yep thats the fat guy
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Posted: 24 March 2015 at 1:43am |
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fat guy? lmao im 6'2 228 lbs...not sure why you think im fat. did dizzle tell you that? haha but if your still obsessed with me I can KO you AGAIN. I'll give this proper feed tomorrow
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Posted: 24 March 2015 at 3:06pm |
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This was ok. Your flow really picked up at the end. Your content wasn't that good tho. There was really no stand out lines in this at all. You have never seen me in chat and to say you have is a lie. The august 03 line isnt a personal cus it doesnt make any sense. what are you talking about lol. I like how we havent even talked shit to each other for a while then you come up with this. I havent even been in the chat for weeks lol. I mean between your fans in the projects in miami to your fans in france, The dude you made up Ben Dennis asking you to do shows. Your fake beef with someone named realistic. Your claim that your better than drake. And the way you claim your friend gave you the black card so you can drop the N bomb. not to mention your crew coming over here to beat everyone. (where are they) No one believes you or takes you serious.
This was ok as comedy and you stepped ya flow up. But there was nothing personal. I have no problem doing a picture battle with you any time you want
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Posted: 24 March 2015 at 3:24pm |
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haha well thank u for the feed, not fans in france, a member in france. And I don't wanna do a picture battle, i want to do normal text or if you had the balls, like beans, an audio. And anyway this was just a keystyle to get back into the flow of Oms so thanks for the feed.
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