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Exoduzt 
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 Topic: Tongue Punch Ya Mother's Fart Box Volume 6Posted: 24 March 2015 at 7:40pm |
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Feat: Law, Elite, Nigma Law: Turn my expresso on instant crazy cause I'm always sinning daily Dropping my pants and practicing shots on every one of those infant babies I've been feeling different lately, biting chunks of skins with bits of gravy Vividmaybe? with vicious rabies mixing soup bowls for dinner with shit and scabies Wicked and I'm getting hazy, watching hannibal lector, inducing these tasteful replicas Twisted, literally insane with nebulas, handing out little boys and girls anal enema's I mean fuck it, I've been insane for days, leaving my victims in a giant waste and I was gonna try and taste some stein and mase but i've been in a defying phase Dancing around juggling kidneys and lungs and using intestines as hawaiin leis Despise me?? Great! Cause I've been fucking outlets just to get a fatal conductor Diving into these stars like I got galilieo' covered and it's on my payroll to touch it Then slide off her thong and use her discharge as condiments like mayo and mustard That sandwich covered... I'm loving this kitchen and I always wanted another nutrition "I'll take regurgitated regurgitation on my dishes" yumm... That's fucking delicious!! My diet is fucking malicious, It's gotten me hung, looking at the youngest cleavages and since this little bitches not experience and her tongue doesn't touch penises I've been strolling down the block with a carriage holding 100 n sum fetuses Showing people my tiny babies, you can watch as I take my son out to eat Chew it up, then spit it at these fuckers feet like sunflower seeds So was my cannibal worth it? I'm sickly, ill willed, it's been my animus purpose The cats on the mouse, the dogs on the cat, I broke free and made these manacles work it hopped on the back of of that furry train and turned it to a fucking animal circus Elite: I dragged my nuts across a table of spikes while shankin my wife Stabbed my baby, hung em both up on a wall that said "family for life" I put gorilla glue on my hands and squeeze my balls, damn this is crude! Grab the lube and begin to jack off to my sisters nudes I slash and gash my ass cheeks, eating leeches and bugs Murder 40 women and children while Ma$e preaches to us I braid my pubes, eat pussy, strap a bomb to my taint It'll declare nuclear war by the time it drops in Kuwait I stick my dick in my dogs ass, getting the smell of lingering shit dick Squirt vaginal enzymes in my neighbors hair, fuck and finger their infant Y'all are disgraceful sacks of faggot shit, drink sour milk from saggin' tits Bite the tip of your penis, while raiding your ass with plastic dicks Shoot penis blood into a cup like it's fruit punch and guzzle it Your a virgin by choice like Mission if ya don't fuck with this This is volume 6, punch a box full of farts Lick my scrotum, homos! As I ram my cock through your hearts!! Nigma: if i had it my way.................................................................... id worship the ocean, own four ships and fist whores with sword tips cause dwarven orgies get me horny as performers in nordic porn flicks i'd tie my daughters hair while using hymens as elastics then ill lead a revolution wiping white skins from the planet my ass is clenched and I clasp my fists, im in the back of my kitchen and pinching one in my hand, then sniff it, lick it then i laugh a bit it makes me gasp like massive kid dicks, happily snappin shit pics legit, i know we're different, i've got formed and oiled cheeks with shits, im fascinated with sitting on warm toilet seats sometimes i visit children while im dressed up like an ER surgeon when they go to take a breath I exhale meth into their breathing units im seen as smooth, a basketcase whose penis oozes sap thats tastey ill give my shaft a shave with a nasty razor and snap the blade raise my hands in praise from the savage ways of my masterbation when the veins expand i will brand her face with the hand of jason and aint feel bad when i splash her, maybe ejaculate in the lacerations im manson crazy, lacking his pads, restraints and his aging groin and still i hate you like a child raping father hates a baby boy Exoduzt: I love to play as a winner or a sinner check the way I tie her hands... I bend her and skin her, blasting Lynyrd Skynyrd I'm a simple kind of man... i designed a plan to sniff the finest grams out of the crack of ya infants butt hole... I'll degrade a sluts soul, When I tear her ass with my Salami making my cuts cold... I'm a diamond in the rough so don't neglect my clarity... Fuck a children's hospital as I write fake checks to charity... Get their hopes up, Then laugh when these dick heads stare at me... I pull my pockets inside out to watch a penny drop I can't get meaner... Then I pick it back up and say fuck you yall ain't getting that either!... Leukemia? Fuck that I just call it a common cough... Stop being a fucking pussy and just walk it off... Molatav cocktails inside of vaginas and windows of mini vans... It's still my plan, to take it to new heights and kill ya fam.. With pills in hand, drinking cheap booze screamin' I'm still the man!... till I piss hard in ya retina now thats black eyed peas like Will.I.Am... My bucket list is to fuck a bitch until I puncture ribs... I love it when she sucks it quick and is loving dick then grabs it like a musket grip.... then re enact 2 bitches and that fucking cup of shit!... then feed it to your infant so she can have her lunch with it... Yall can hate on this series but I just concider this some fun bars... Rate it what you will but I'm giving it a BIG fucking mud star! (butthole for the non knowing) |
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Posted: 24 March 2015 at 8:28pm |
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Law I think you had the longest lines here I totally threw out the idea of reading whilst playing a beat but man the comedy in your verse was really entertaining you brought in your knowledge of the horrocore scene and brought in some nasty shit
Elite you had some funny shit there too the mission reference the family shit and a couple more I liked your flow it was pretty solid and the verse over all was nice Nigma I just choked up and coughed whilst reading your verse there alot of mind fucking ideas I wonder what your writing process looks like everything from the technical side of it to the creative side you had sone mind blowing flow there the schemes in particular were my favorite Exo first of all congrats for keeping this shit running I must say your verse had some interesting lines wording of the highest order and some pretty nice schemes I liked the end half more than the first half but all in all everything was thought provoking good shit over all real nice collab here some funny shit to read and it was higly entertaining good work fuys
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Exoduzt
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Posted: 25 March 2015 at 2:52am |
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just bumping this so its above smooth's bitten OM
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Posted: 25 March 2015 at 1:09pm |
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Law - Lets first say. Holy smokes. You had long lines and was able to keep I've been feeling different lately, biting chunks of skins with bits of gravy That sandwich covered... I'm loving this kitchen and I always wanted another nutrition ___________________________________________________________________________________
Elite- Your improvements is second ta none. This was nice from you. You got really I dragged my nuts across a table of spikes while shankin my wife
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and pinching one in my hand, then sniff it, lick it then i laugh a bit im seen as smooth, a basketcase whose penis oozes sap thats tastey ___________________________________________________________________________________ FRENEMIE - You know your one of the best writers on the site currently. I respect I love to play as a winner or a sinner check the way I tie her hands... I'm a diamond in the rough so don't neglect my clarity... With pills in hand, drinking cheap booze screamin' I'm still the man!... My bucket list is to fuck a bitch until I puncture ribs...
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Posted: 25 March 2015 at 2:49pm |
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Law - You definitely went longer with your bars here but I don't think it affected your verse too much. I knew going into this the type of content to expect and you definitely stayed to the topic. You really can rhyme man. I liked where you kept the internal multis matching the external finishing ones. Thats something I like to do as well and you executed that well. Hawaiian leis line was clever but i really liked the disgusting bar about the condiments. That really put an image into the head that made you shiver in disgust. The baby stroller with 100 fetuses was pretty cool as well. Gave you again another image of you just walking down the street showing off a terrible thing as if it were great. Overall, from you this was something I expected and a really disturbing intro to what I expect from this collaboration.
Elite - First and foremost I liked your flow. That was a positive in your verse. I have to admit though, every bar involving dicks and some type of penetration was kind of played the whole time. The opening bar about was good though. But literally it seems like every bar was about your dick. I understand the brutality we are going for and the harshness but there is always other ways. For instance, you had the idea with Kuwait and it worked out i thought pretty well. Bringing in a relevant topic and still kept the shock value to an extent. Listen, i'm all for shock value and saying crude shit but when I read the 13 dick references in a 16 it runs its course. Overall, I think you could've brought more to the table but your flow was definitely a savior here. Nigma - LOL that hymen hair tie line was pretty clever and disturbing. A little change outta you without the long extended lines I normally see from you. Kind of refreshing but I like how you usually pack metas and internals. You did put in some internals in your verse but I do have 1 complaint. I was going on into your verse and you dropped that ER Surgeon/Breathing unit. Didn't work. The concept you had going was cool, kind of visioned you as Robin Williams as patch adams going in but evil as fuck. Loved the idea, just thought the finishing execution didn't work for me. Everything was really good Nigs... seem like a lot of people have brutal minds. Exo - Every single of these collabs you have going get more raunchy, disturbing, disgusting but also in the same breath, dare i say, awesome? I mean everyone has a line, even me, and I like how you guys dare to cross it. Lynard Skynard reference was dope as hell, little wordplay/meta in there which i really dug. Little bit of comedy with the fake checks to charity, but heres the part that urked me about the scheme.. It was a 3 bar scheme?! The delivery was so boss on those 3 bars I was hoping for a hard closer, and you go and change the scheme to "cant get meaner" I was kind of left hanging there. The rest was normal Exo-esk quality, but that one scheme really pissed me off lol...
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GiliganDillinger
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Posted: 25 March 2015 at 3:55pm |
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I was reading this earlier while i was at work. I loved the idea of just being very childish/gruesome at the same time with the horrorcore element. law started off nice, great flow and closed it out well, elite was very gruesome loved it, nigma murdered it, whole shit was bannanas, then exodus had a very funny last verse all together shit was a 10/10 despite the subject matter.I have to say in my humble opinion nigma killed it but everyone did there thing here
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Posted: 27 March 2015 at 11:59pm |
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Law, welcome. You brought an eloquence with your wording that was both something new and something welcome. lol @ shit and scabies, lol @ fucking outlets, lol @ most of your verse tbh. the wording in the 100 n sum babies bar was tight. You fit in, good shit man really enjoyed your take on this.
Elite, even though your dick is an innie and you masterbate to liam neisson movies, you killed this collab. Since Exo takes 9 months to write a verse and I have a nonexistent memory I had forgotten the all the concepts from your (and my) verse. I laughed out loud for the majority of yours and have already given you props so go fuck yourself. Exo, shout out to sniffing crack off youthful mudstars. Shout out to ruthlessly bashing leukemia. The Will.I.Am bar mad just enough sense for me to love it. Lastly, thank you for carrying out my request with that last bar. This collab is clearly 5 mudstar caliber and if it isn't already rated I will oblige. I'd be honored to bounce off the walls in padded rooms next to any of you cunts. Seeya next time
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Elite
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Posted: 28 March 2015 at 12:03am |
OHHH no you didn't........... bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!! ill fuckin end your entire career with one word, step in TC and see me with the bars you chick-flick, lego loving Bohemian Prius driving crack head
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Posted: 28 March 2015 at 2:32am |
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You all fucking suck.
<3 Especially Nigma |
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Posted: 28 March 2015 at 2:41am |
<333
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Posted: 30 March 2015 at 10:04pm |
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highlights and/or red flags
0 points lol It was dope though, but this isn't me lol |
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Posted: 31 March 2015 at 1:55pm |
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Congrats on creating a new genre
pedocore
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cant fuck with my click, you no adam sandlers, we catching more cases than baggage handlers...
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Posted: 01 April 2015 at 7:33pm |
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Posted: 02 April 2015 at 1:02am |
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#GOAT
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Posted: 02 April 2015 at 2:24am |
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This whole thing was sick. As in upsettingly inappropriate. I can say however I'm not supprised. It was a matter of time before Exo took this topic there. Lol still the flow was good and the bars though deeply inappropriate were constructed masterfully. Good work. Would like to see you four collab more often!
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