Audio Mic: The Wild (Feat. Jacashes) |
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 Topic: The Wild (Feat. Jacashes)Posted: 27 April 2015 at 2:52am |
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Posted: 27 April 2015 at 8:22pm |
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So this one is hard for me, I don't want to be negative but I gotta give honest feed here so hopefully its constructive. I love the beat, it's a great concept with the song and really matches the energy you went for. Your flow was decent, had alot of parts were it was broken or a word too short, i felt like you kinda got lazy lyrically because it's a love song, rhyming "wine, dine," and so on, I feel you could have been more creative. Alot of simple 2 syllable end rhymes.
As for content, it was good. Clearly understood everything you were saying, though it wasnt a very vivid picture you gave it was more vague comments. Mixingwise, verses are pristine. The hook is well written and i like the idea for it, however, i think the execution and way it was mixed outright sucks. The guy who sung it obviously can sing, but the key he sung in is way out of his range. I feel like the whole hook could have use some voice layering and even a harmony. And it's way too Up Front, needs to have more of a high pass on it cuz it sounds way too simple for such a mainstream hook. Overall, I liked the song, i just didn't enjoy the hook much due to the way it was performed and mixed. I'd give this song 3 stars, keep working at it bro.
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Posted: 27 April 2015 at 9:36pm |
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Thanks for the feed but this song had been removed due to too many dislikes mostly concerning the singing he's a dope singer but maybe its just the key NEW MUSIC SOON
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Posted: 27 April 2015 at 9:38pm |
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Lol I was gonna drop you some feed too.
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