Open Mic: Sworded Stylez Diss Response

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    Posted: 17 August 2015 at 5:32pm

I just got somethin to say..

Biting you? Thats righteous dude.. fuck bein ya prospect
Why would I be guided by the wings of a lame rock 'ject?
But its fine, ill kindly play along with ya facade of king vs rook
My barsll leave you sound congested like all of ya singing hooks
Dont fuck wit me, ill bust ya "keys" n quickly give you long days
Give ya 100 hits wit bars, somethin you NEVER see on song plays
You n me are 2 worlds, completely bred of different scenes but
Only time you up me's when ya writin LA quittin speeches
If you had a prob with me, why was confrontin me neglected?
Stead you came back n snatched me in ya joke of a "collective"
If you bagged these feelins up for months then why the fuck'd you work wit me?
Calling ME fake just seems like nothing but a worthless plea
To get these forums 'hind ya back, but all ya rants just lack the truth
Cus not 2 weeks ago you told me to fuckin collab with you
It seems ya fuckin loopy bro, wired up wit shifty gears
Ya views on me be changin worse than attitudes of Britney Spears
Im spittin wicked flows and rippin foes soon as the beat drops
Ya long awaited tape has taken traits of fuckin Detox
Sittin in ya mod spot, only addin to the snotty staff
The only time ya "break ya wrist's" from throttling on Scottys shaft
Like the Jacksonville Jags, this fag dont show up for game day
Might get burnt from the sun if he ever stepped outta CHAINs shade
Got wrestlin jokes? Shit son you desperate for hope
You was steppin wit text but now ima hex what ya wrote
Fuckin whack, its fact ya fag, if you's a vet, im the Pope!
Im fuckin hangin, im lynchin, so try n "flex" from this rope
You a "lord of storms"? you boring, bland, aint laced wit tha raw
Claim you underrated... dude, nobody rates you at all
Take the loss before ya pay the cost for scoffin at me
Cus its a bloody mess, ya best hope that ya coffin is clean
Ita funny ya collab with H4ZE is called Forgotten
Cus everything you spit is somethin thatll only live far in my conscious
Real deal, you whack fuck, youll get dismembered wit grace
Youll be "Forgotten" faster after all the memories fade
Seems like dissin kids is ya promotional thing...
While on the side, you inheriting Shawns emotional swings
This is my time to reign, your not as deserving
My waves of heat'll have ya runnin back to ya flop of a "tourney"

So when ya make ya mind up on whether or not you like this kid
Just keep in mind, ya repetoires gotten NOTHING worth me biting, bitch
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whoaaaaa bihhh. you snapped super hard lmao. came with some hard ass punches, nice flow. and those bars about me and SS's track. flames bih. you should be rattle bapper. dope ish.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Elite Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 August 2015 at 5:45pm
lmao @ rattle bapper
 
thanks for the feed bro
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Red-B Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 August 2015 at 5:49pm
... Man El1te wasn't playing no games with this one. It was one hard line to another hard line you really went super hard and smashed on this track. Not much else to say but this was super dope.
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Elite this right here is Dope. AR
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Red-B Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 August 2015 at 2:44am
What pathetic feed back ^ "thanks for leaving AR he might not of known who left that shitty feed if you didn't"
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Wait sword ed dissed you??
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote JBrenn Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 August 2015 at 10:05pm
the personals here are way good the wp was a bit weaker but the flow and multis where the best I've read from you by far!!! Elite you did your thing here.. this is a 5 star drop... nice.
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Thanks for the feed brenn, glad you enjoyed
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Wow, haven't seen anybody who punched SS this hard(maybe because i'm new) ... one of those people whom i always hope to learn from. Dope scripts as always
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Elite Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 August 2015 at 12:31am
thanks for the read bro glad you enjoyed it. Preciate it
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