Open Mic: Started From The Top

Scraping the bottom of the barrel, we're the "homeless ones"
The mothers that are poor? We are their hopeless sons
Not paying taxes, maintaining the greed; then throw us crumbs
'Corporations are free and fair' - they know thats spun
You was at the top and then you slumped to third
I can be ignorant too - I can 'Trump' your words
So face it bitch you're spitting some basic shit
But I get it... The consumers embrace the hits
You Twits are just copying, Following Trends
Following God; I don't need to be following friends
Rhymes are heard in hard times - get a clique, quick
"Lines" are "Blurred", I'm back to 'robbing' 'thick' shit!
I'm conflicted, but am a product of my environment
Just what happens when you put product in the-lions-den
In East London it's rough, I could be entering crime
In the 'mean time' - out in Greenwich, centre of time!
Get it? - oh I forgot, you don't listen to words
Whipping Nae-Nae's with Drake - wishing for nerds
You-say he sold; fuck that,I'm with Lupe and Cole
Jay and Nas too, them O.G's - true-say that's old
Bow to Benjamin's, Barack failed the Presidents test
Let's just hope we're yet to see the Presidents best
The part thats great, is where I spark debate
Obama is 'Noah' but 7 years in his 'Arc' is late.

Nothing to neg here.. The flow was smooth, and the rhymes were good, and the message was strong and simple (not over-complicated)..

Good job here

Edited by Real Hip Hop - 03 September 2015 at 7:18am