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Bazooka bastard
Groupie Joined: 30 December 2015 Status: Offline Points: 108 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-0 Form: WL |
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Posted: 30 December 2015 at 7:42pm |
I started therapy sessions in hope of eradicating my main vice,
Then realised I could get a gram of pure for the same price, I'm new to this site but past the novice steps, So you better warn a brother like doctor x, I'm on a rocket flex, up close? Not the best, But I'll still Indiana Jones it when I pop ya chest, Im a deadly assassin more than ready for action, Am a one man mother fuckin terrorist faction, I play with blonde bitches like a member of Hanson, And rip em on screen like Jeremy paxman, So I'm on lyrical assault, British in revolt, But they cut my race so I'm ready for em tippin in the salt |
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Neek
Site Moderator Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3862 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: LWWW |
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flow was fairly solid, content was pretty sporadic. you guys pay alot for blow if a gram costs the same as a therapy session.
the tie in for Indiana Jones and Popping a Chest was smooth. but a pirate would have worked better since most of Indys shit was taken from shrines and tombs... the hanson bar was similiar. I get they are blonde..you fancy them bitches and if you were a member youd be playing with dem bidchez. but by sporadic its not that you dont have solid content you just have no real direction and I get its a "keystyle" but running with a solid theme shows more ability than inserting random punchlines. imo atleast. solid drop, keep em coming. |
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Bazooka bastard
Groupie Joined: 30 December 2015 Status: Offline Points: 108 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-0 Form: WL |
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Safe bredbin, I am a bit all over the shop in general, appreciate the feedback still
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Concrete
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Pretty decent intro piece I guess, concise flow, straightforward rhyming and no fancy schmancy fuzz, some funny lines. Liked the opening bar and the chest thing best. Keep dropping, perhaps something bigger next time. Good luck onwards and such.
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JackBarz
Groupie Joined: 30 November 2015 Location: Eestern Cape Status: Offline Points: 214 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-3-1 Form: LLNL |
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JackBarz
Groupie Joined: 30 November 2015 Location: Eestern Cape Status: Offline Points: 214 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-3-1 Form: LLNL |
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Lol dope ma nig
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