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Storm $hadow 
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 Topic: Fuck Rap Daemon.Posted: 10 January 2016 at 5:51am |
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Damn!!!
Very plain and straight forward man.. You really brought a flame with you with this.. I finally found some time to relax and write I get to look around to see past ya lies And the only reason I can't free half the time? Yo, man, its simple: D has a life This was a very good, decent and mature starter.. Not just going straight in attacking the opponent or bragging about yourself.. If you think this the path for you, why you say your handling vets? Never seen anyone get beat so hard and manage to flex You ducked Rutter, thinking that wouldn't damage your cred But who ever thought street cred transfers to text? Clever attack with personels which was effective.. "I've never lost in real life" I've never heard a whacker statement And you said you do audio but have a stagnant playlist Giving out your tips for it but you lack the basics And on the OM's if it ain't your craft, you hate it hahahaha.. Another personels here which dealt a great blow and the first 2 lines were funny.. Good one!.. Thought the issue with you both died.. Daemon, are you gonna let this slip away? |
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 10 January 2016 at 7:15pm |
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Decent diss here with a few hard punches...
First off this bar was dope, feel ya: Whether they're right or wrong vets say they smash the noobs That leaves me asking dudes what happened to the classic feuds That's tough right there bruh... But this part here you throw hard shots: If you think this the path for you, why you say your handling vets? Never seen anyone get beat so hard and manage to flex You ducked Rutter, thinking that wouldn't damage your cred But who ever thought street cred transfers to text? Thought the rhyme scheme was smooth too. Nice diss |
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Mission
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Posted: 10 January 2016 at 7:21pm |
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Those lines trizzy quoted had me take a step back. You killed him on this. Flow was really smooth and consisten as well as the rhymescheme. I like the backstory you did and the build up to the actual diss and punches. Great drop right here.
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The Rap Daemon
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Posted: 11 January 2016 at 1:01am |
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Well, this is pretty damn good and I've got to admit that.. Long-awaited this is as well.
Your second to last bar stood out to me. Straight fire with no bullshit and straight to the point. The only thing you got wrong was saying I ducked Rutter (I never).. But strong showing nonetheless.. I'll be sure to respond as well. |
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Posted: 11 January 2016 at 3:44pm |
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Ive gotta say, you are improving.
Some smooth wording. Good stuff. |
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Beans
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Posted: 12 January 2016 at 2:10am |
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If you think this the path for you, why you say your handling vets?
Never seen anyone get beat so hard and manage to flex You ducked Rutter, thinking that wouldn't damage your cred But who ever thought street cred transfers to text? http://cdn1.theodysseyonline.com/files/2015/06/27/6357096057258823811184687051_post-32842-ron-swanson-yep-gif-yes-yup-fu-qhg3.gif" /> nice shit flamer. felt you started off slow then brought the heat....keep it up
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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JackBarz
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Posted: 12 January 2016 at 3:53am |
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Lol flame nice man flow was dope
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Posted: 12 January 2016 at 7:44am |
What profound feedback to give Anyway, the set was good. What really stood out was the elegant transitions, as far as I could see none of them came off as forced. The beginning worked smooth as an intro, middle part was decent and the last 10 lines did the most damage. It's interesting that you wrote a diss without trying to employ any special punchlines, just cutting right to matter at hand. Favorite segment: vets say they smash the noobs That leaves me asking dudes what happened to the classic feuds And Daemon, I'm not making habits to attack your crew It's okay to rap and lose, but you fuck up when you say half the truth If you think this the path for you Now that's how you use rhymes. |
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