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iLL ScriptureZ
Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
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Posted: 03 February 2016 at 10:42pm |
"Aww shit, I am a nightmare walking Psychopath talking The real, hip hop Aww shit, the science I drop is real heavy The real, hip hop Bring it back, come rewind" [CHAIN] I had to talk to 'em Haunt ‘em… Monster’s Ball, I am Bronson, Charles Lines they connect like a conference call. It’s time to reflect with these conscious bars Y’all ‘would’ get it twisted like Bonsai bark. Me, I’m feeling like: ‘fuck’s wrong with y’all??’ Y’all looking like Jake in Alonzo’s car. The bondage of trends will keep y’all restrained The see-saw of change can con your thoughts. The nonsense starts, it’s beyond the charts Fuck the 1% that sponsors art. Owns it, pimps it, tricking all the makers Kids ain’t innovative ‘cause the content’s off. Fuck the elitists hitting me with that… “When’s the last time you went to a concert” talk. Awkward pause, man their songs ain’t hard Never made woofers in no Hondas cough. Featherweight sugar for Beyonce blogs You’re supposed to have hitters on your entourage. Blahzay blah, I see yawning broads Hip hop’s no longer just a Bronx Tale, dawg. The genre’s lost, “that trap beat’s garbage” Me, I don’t agree, they just rap re-tarded. We the type of kids that the back streets harvest High, we pass the bar like trapeze artists. We’re taking it back. "Aww shit, I am a nightmare walking Psychopath talking The real, hip hop Aww shit, the science I drop is real heavy The real, hip hop Bring it back, come rewind" [iLL] Lemme talk to'em Haunt'em Yeah... I put the laughter in manslaughter Grim Reaper my hype man behind the camcorder All about my lines like a gram snorter Spill blood on my palms like a hand warmer If it's dope I gotta get CHAIN to spit Muhfucka can take Reggie to a strain of Piff 2 legends flow hotter than a Haitian piss Sportin' dual weapons, Bo in '86 Pull the plug & crush dreams at Make A Wish ...A nightmare walking, psychopath talking... Pay homage or I'm finna burn somebody LeBron before LeBron 100, word to Scottie Zero remains left, join the searchin' party No remorse or fucks given to a worthless heartbeat This is more gruesome than what my fam wrote SKS tickle ribs, notta damn joke Grind up bones 'til they bread crumbs, panko Each collab iLL unchain CHAIN no Django! Muhfucka want beef I want a full fork BBQ a fuckin' pig make'em pulled pork It ain't me if I don't hit'em full force Grab ya skull & snap the neck with a bulls torque. ...ahahahaha |
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DressToKill
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Chain that opening bar was fucking cutthroat, the same rhyme scheme for the majority of the verse thing is so under rated..like I don't think people recognize the difficulty because you do it every fucking drop. Making it look like a walk in the park..
Ill - opener was deadly, I loved it and it really captured the title of the peice. I thought you stayed neck and neck with chain, very on point. Very well done Killed it guys |
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The original comeback kid
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Neek
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ice-t ftw...
but this was outstanding gents. chain - alonzos car..concert talk and entourage ill - the full fork was my shit and any reference to Bo Jackson get a thumbs up from me...less lines than chain and I felt you were just warming up dope tho |
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#Bananas
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Gambino
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Lol sorry bout that... Wrote a breakdown in my notepa in my phone an thought I copied it so I clicked paste and immediately clicked post..lol one minute
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Gambino
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Chain-Nice ass verse...The flow was spot on and the metaphors were endless and actually had me laughing great work
ILL-Your name says it all...great work.Your opener was the start to an aggressive and clear cut piece. A great combo Overall-Solid piece.Great verses.An the theme around it was interesting.. great read |
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Beans
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this was dope imo. you both worked well together and tbh, two of my favorite OM writers. would love to hear this on an audio. im not going to break it down but this was dope. i think a KIKI would have fit in nice with this as well.
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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HP1
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Beautiful piece...punchlines were on fire
Chain you Eminem spitting mofo lmao Favorite line : that trap beats garbage, I don't agree, they just rap retarded ROFL...lmaoo Ill....you sick bastard, horror core goretext ish is what I fuk with. Favorite line from u: pulled pork own lmao easy.. Sick piece guys , makes me glad to be part of LA. |
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daydizzle89
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Yup
My two favorite writers on this site. One has the technical capabilities that most mainstream artists wish they had and you have Grimey ass Scripts with the flow and content that would make a priest cut his tongue off and smack the pope with it. This shit was nice guys. From a technical aspect there is no need for me to go in depth. It was dope. Really well played here Chain - I don't know how you mix your vocabulary into a rhyme scheme like that. Its farfetched for me. Its insane. Dope work here fellow Scripts - Grind up bones 'til they bread crumbs, panko Each collab iLL unchain CHAIN no Django! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ The fuq is this scripts. TELL ME!!!!!!!
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Wow great feed from everyone. CHAIN has talent unmatched here and I think we blend well together. Dizzy, lol django unchained is that movie, thought it played well with his name, and when he's let loose he fucks ppl up at the end!
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Endeavor
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I can't go too in depth unfortunately, but for what it's worth:
Chain: "Fuck the 1% that sponsors art. Owns it, pimps it, tricking all the makers Kids ain’t innovative ‘cause the content’s off" I like what you did here "The genre’s lost, “that trap beat’s garbage” Me, I don’t agree, they just rap re-tarded."Another quotable. -------------- ILL: "Grim Reaper my hype man behind the camcorder" I fuck with this. Love the image of it. "No remorse or fucks given to a worthless heartbeat This is more gruesome than what my fam wrote"You threw me off here, I wasn't able to pick the flow back up during this part. "Each collab iLL unchain CHAIN no Django!" Nice. "Muhfucka want beef I want a full fork BBQ a fuckin' pig make'em pulled porkIt ain't me if I don't hit'em full force Grab ya skull & snap the neck with a bulls torque" Strong closer. All in all, very solid drop yo.
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#Bananas
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CHAIN
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Smh.
I almost thought you couldn't do it. But you did it. lol This was your 'own shit' but u still murdered it Cam'ron on 'I really Mean it' style Cam'ron : see what I just did? Took a few bars off let Just live. That Django line should have been mine. |
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iLL ScriptureZ
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LOL good work CHAIN
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