Open Mic: Old Man Flows Yeah I Got Some Of Those

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    Posted: 04 February 2016 at 4:33pm
For anybody wonderin’ if I can still kick it
For sure...
So don’t try feed on me, cos I ain’t no meal ticket
I am ill with it, certified G on text
Testin’ me aint a leap of faith… Nah, that’s a leap of death
Body you for sure, words swing an’ll dissect beneath the neck
Condolences to your fam but let em know they can keep the head
I bring respect, homie see the elders know I’m hella cold an’
My return is basically a sign that hell has frozen
I bring those better moments, I am Godly with text
Words are scripture, this basically another prophecy read
Moment of silence to honour a vet… Sick Witted
Best memories are those of hearin’ the kid spittin’
Mr. Sick Wit’ It, me an’ Chain still rep you dude
An’ that respect was earned, best believe the rest salute
Never forget the crew, better believe that
So, I’ll end my last bar wit’ free Sass

RIP Sick
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Jay bro this was good, you had a nice flow and everything. Of course though you know this, I liked how you repped Sick Witted and Sass. You had some hella nice metas here. Good to see ya around and a nice way to announce a return. Stay up homie
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Neek Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 February 2016 at 5:20pm
as I said before hand bro..


Homi the peoples champ.

glad to see you drop my brother.

shit flowed beautiful, the transition on better moments was precise. and from there on it just got iller.

definitely an RIP to Sick, he was always a cool headed cat.

and most definitely free the homie Sass

that family tree always was deep rooted. glad to still see yall around.
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I enjoyed this. Nice shaking the rust off peace, cool content and wording. Good shit.
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Some of that went over my head. I don't know Sick Witted and don't know what happened with Sass, but I can guess from what you wrote there. What I can say is this is same old Jay as far as I can see. Keeping it straight, depth through simplicity, no wasted words, hella cold an' / hell has frozen / better moments was lovely, just felt like a tight verse throughout.

Hoping to see more from you in the near future.
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Cool piece. I love a real read. Writing comes from a real place. Mechanics standard, nothing fancy but consistent. Your persona gives you a unique and enjoyable angle at things. Leap of death bar came across. Nicely. I liked the contrast in transition in the hell is frozen / godly with texts concepts. Cool drop, a blast from the past. Hope to see more soon! 
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Cheers.
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1.Praise Ethiopia

2.Respect the Hunger

3.Salute the General Jay Hom.

4.SickWitted Forever

5.Free Sass

6.That 'keep the head' bar was mean.

7.Welcome back.

You ate it.






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*salutes*

You always drop very readable open mics because you have that real talk / simplistic vibe that means you don't mess around and just say what you gotta say. Which is highly respectable. That was HG though, through and through. Glad to see you back and dropping man.
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Originally posted by Cuba Cuba wrote:

*salutes*

You always drop very readable open mics because you have that real talk / simplistic vibe that means you don't mess around and just say what you gotta say. Which is highly respectable. That was HG though, through and through. Glad to see you back and dropping man.


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Short, sweet, and dope. Flowed real nice. This had a great style and rhythm to it. I didn't know him personally as he was here before me, but I'm glad to see everyone continuing to show respect to a lost member of LA. Hope you stick around man, and continue to give us slick stuff to read. 
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aight aight aight, I see you old man. Flexing doughs 12 inch biceps while doing water polo with the French bitches. Nice verse sonz. Keep flexing bruh. Keep flexing
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