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Jay Homicide
Standard Member Joined: 11 November 2009 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 1329 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-3-0 Form: WWLWWW |
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Posted: 04 February 2016 at 4:33pm |
For anybody wonderin’ if I can still kick it
For sure...
So don’t try feed on me, cos I ain’t no meal ticket
I am ill with it, certified G on text
Testin’ me aint a leap of faith… Nah, that’s a leap of death
Body you for sure, words swing an’ll dissect beneath the
neck
Condolences to your fam but let em know they can keep the
head
I bring respect, homie see the elders know I’m hella cold an’
My return is basically a sign that hell has frozen
I bring those better moments, I am Godly with text
Words are scripture, this basically another prophecy read
Moment of silence to honour a vet… Sick Witted
Best memories are those of hearin’ the kid spittin’
Mr. Sick Wit’ It, me an’ Chain still rep you dude
An’ that respect was earned, best believe the rest salute
Never forget the crew, better believe that
So, I’ll end my last bar wit’ free Sass RIP Sick
#FreeSass
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
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Jay bro this was good, you had a nice flow and everything. Of course though you know this, I liked how you repped Sick Witted and Sass. You had some hella nice metas here. Good to see ya around and a nice way to announce a return. Stay up homie
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Neek
Site Moderator Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3862 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: LWWW |
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as I said before hand bro..
Homi the peoples champ. glad to see you drop my brother. shit flowed beautiful, the transition on better moments was precise. and from there on it just got iller. definitely an RIP to Sick, he was always a cool headed cat. and most definitely free the homie Sass that family tree always was deep rooted. glad to still see yall around. |
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#Bananas
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Rutter knows best
Senior Moderator Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4529 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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I enjoyed this. Nice shaking the rust off peace, cool content and wording. Good shit.
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#bananas
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Venomonology
Standard Member Joined: 23 October 2012 Status: Offline Points: 674 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-2-0 Form: WWLWWW |
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Some of that went over my head. I don't know Sick Witted and don't know what happened with Sass, but I can guess from what you wrote there. What I can say is this is same old Jay as far as I can see. Keeping it straight, depth through simplicity, no wasted words, hella cold an' / hell has frozen / better moments was lovely, just felt like a tight verse throughout.
Hoping to see more from you in the near future.
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Nigma
Site Moderator Joined: 25 March 2013 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 4077 Crew: Elision |
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Cool piece. I love a real read. Writing comes from a real place. Mechanics standard, nothing fancy but consistent. Your persona gives you a unique and enjoyable angle at things. Leap of death bar came across. Nicely. I liked the contrast in transition in the hell is frozen / godly with texts concepts. Cool drop, a blast from the past. Hope to see more soon!
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Jay Homicide
Standard Member Joined: 11 November 2009 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 1329 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-3-0 Form: WWLWWW |
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Cheers.
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CHAIN
Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW |
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1.Praise Ethiopia
2.Respect the Hunger 3.Salute the General Jay Hom. 4.SickWitted Forever 5.Free Sass 6.That 'keep the head' bar was mean. 7.Welcome back. You ate it. |
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12329 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
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*salutes*
You always drop very readable open mics because you have that real talk / simplistic vibe that means you don't mess around and just say what you gotta say. Which is highly respectable. That was HG though, through and through. Glad to see you back and dropping man. |
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CHAIN
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The Law
Site Moderator God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
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Short, sweet, and dope. Flowed real nice. This had a great style and rhythm to it. I didn't know him personally as he was here before me, but I'm glad to see everyone continuing to show respect to a lost member of LA. Hope you stick around man, and continue to give us slick stuff to read.
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daydizzle89
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aight aight aight, I see you old man. Flexing doughs 12 inch biceps while doing water polo with the French bitches. Nice verse sonz. Keep flexing bruh. Keep flexing
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