Open Mic: Ya gotta let 'em know

ah shiet!! ROOTER FLOWS SEX!!

Rutter knows best wrote: Its been a while... On that other level my statements take opiates, Grown man shit, always keep my pages age appropriate, Moldin finesse, i'm steady rollin the spokes are set, No matter witch way its poison, i keep my potions blessed, Nowadays an Ezekiel be enough to stake a kosher death, Left ghost instead, these Dudes don't even know their dead, Showing no missions impossible, i try to motion sense, Puttin emo to bed, the way forward remains emotionless, Holdin down center court while ya'll just hold the bench,

rawzilla tho..your wordplay game is on point here. why dont you do shit like this when you battle? its some straight forward shit, but here you actually flexing!! first three lines were wtf and it just kept pace. dope man.

Broken bread to broken men, i gotta get those quota's met, Behold its doper yet, colder than the oceans depths, Boasts on deck, reeling you in so i can choke ya neck, Lifting the lid on you basket cases, u should show respect Ya'll snakes charming but i ain't listening like the cobra's head, I'm not amused, i'm more a muse to mold ya text, Hell I'm owed some cred, L.A owe me a topical "An Ode To Debt"

some slick shit in here too. the oceans depths was cool, but being alot is unexplored, what if its warm as fuck? like the deeper you go..the hotter it gets. wtf do we know really. but in this context, I definitely got it. I wish you kept with the fishing/ocean theme atleast for another bar (la style) or two (normal style) but none the less, rocking. got the charming play, but missed the cobras head one. from the basket onward I see it..but totally dont get the cobras head line. the amused/ a muse was my shit. and the ending was well done and played. I liked it Ruttster. keep flexing bro.

ah ok..yeah..I remember watching a documentary where they tried to prove/dispel the myth that cobra's come for revenge.. so they had cobra's in these containments.. and theyd play audio of different sounds..like distressed... fornicating...etc.. and they had no reaction.. so thats dope. thanks for clarifying too bro.

but humans hear at a different frequency..so who even knows if it was audible to them lol.

I don't really think you need any feedback from me. I mean, shit, your work speaks for itself. Now I'm not at all familiar with your work, but just by looking at this you don't look rusty at all.

Rut Rut Rut....fresh verse bro...

That middle section was on point!

Nowadays an Ezekiel be enough to stake a kosher death,
Left ghost instead, these Dudes don't even know their dead
^^^^^....real witty bar here. A lot going on in those 2 lines


Holdin down center court while ya'll just hold the bench,
Broken bread to broken men, i gotta get those quota's met,
Behold its doper yet, colder than the oceans depths,
Boasts on deck, reeling you in so i can choke ya neck
^^^^^....you flex'in on them here man

These are my kinds verses cuz it keep the sword sharp. Battle verses in what I do, goin for peoples heads This was the type of verse thrown together sayin "I got another one in the chamber" lol

...Empire!!

Rutter my Man that's dope as could be honestly it's the best I've seen from you so far. Keep it up my U.K homie.

This is my type of shit..the putting emo to bed bar was raw as hell. Whole thing had a real nice tone to it, the only thing I wish is that it was longer. I don't remember your writing so this is a nice intro peice for me, so kudos.

Honestly there's no critisism needed here, the verse was dope. It had flow and wit and just enough sleight to give truth to the title.