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    Posted: 23 February 2016 at 9:14pm
inspired by LA's audio heads, I made a soundcloud channel and shared my first rap lol I had it on CD and it was so badly scratched that i could only salvage the first verse. but word, let me know what yall think, guys. thanks in advance.


(I don't know how to insert soundcloud so if someone can help me with that?)




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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Neek Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2016 at 9:21pm
I got you!!

PLUS IM EXCITED TO HEAR THIS!!
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delivery is live - this your first shit?

you can feel the 50 influence. madddd dope! you like a raw ass Troy Ave

I love this shit bro.

real dope.
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how'd u do that? thanks, neek!


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Aye Sammy, I'm feeling this shit. The delivery ison point. Doesn't sound like your first time. 
You sound nice on mic. Smooth vocals. Crisp delivery and nice lyrics. I hope you get to record some new stuff.
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This id pretty dope sammy , good mix presence nice beat. Reminded me of movies for the blind by cage. Impressed, you sound legit man.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Neek Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2016 at 9:31pm
brackets with soundcloud broham

same as an img or tube for youtube
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its the first legit rap i recorded. but i did record songs before this one. mostly with friends and shit ha. Thanks for the word Chhek and Rutter. means alot coming from u guys.


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this is sick nice flow delivery was on point son ,
would def listen to some more of this get it poppin

" who dozent walk that blurred line of lies and illusion "
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This is ya first rap? thanks for making me feel like shit. 
But jokes aside, this is good . This was dope delivery wise. Liked the beat aswell and lyrics were better than decent. Nobody pisses me off more than a dude who can rap but dont. So get some fresh shit recorded, i would love to listen. Also, share some of your old stuff if ya have any. 
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@slip @titu, thanks yall. I'll see if i can find some older raps lol. its not pretty but i don't mind sharing it lol


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Wow, I'm intrigued by this. Your delivery is great, as far as I can tell, and so is your beat choice. Thought that the lyrics were also quite nice, and your voice matches to the overall, intended tone here. Definitely looking forward to hear some more, Sammy. Nice work! 
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This was hard Nigga

Straight up!

I agree with Neek about the Troy Ave comparison. You got the same sort of Slick Rick flow he does...just with a grittier edge to it.

You're Obviously skilled on the Mic. I can tell by how effortlessly you switch up your flow patterns and voice inflections. Dope cadence, diction, delivery...all that.

Lyricall...you got bars son.


Nice track...


Peace...
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@alice oh shit never even knew you replied to this! Thanks, sister. Really appreciate the kind words as always :)

@Self honestly didn't eve know who troy ave was until Neek mentioned the dude and i've been listening to his shit for the last couple weeks lmao! Good loox, my brutha.


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well youre welcome Sammy :)


I been fiending for the restore the feeling beat

id massacre that shit
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Tried to listen to this like 10 times some reason it wont work on my phone
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great job the first thing i hear on here cuz am new but it was dope af
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Finally got it to play love the beat
You was flowing like water here bro the hook was deep an you got really lyrical with it keep dropping them I'd like to see what you can do now looking forward to more audios from you
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Feeling this.. flow is good, you fit this beat very well. Hook was good too. Shit fit the beat real good. You got a real calm relaxed flow. I was feeling it. Presence on the mic seemed natural. If this was your first, I look forward to hearing much more from you. Keep it up.
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