Open Mic: [KOTOM] Digital Prophecy

solid drop man, I enjoyed the approach you took to the topic bringing an almost sci-fi feel to the modern day aspect of it. also appreciated the kind of awkward truth that something cold and purely logic based would be able to see how we're destructing the planet whereas we, as organic and natural beings, are largely blind or ignorant of it.. or unwilling to change even in sight of the answer which is perhaps even more unsettling again.

Ima super computer consuming unbiased truths from consumers The producer of super humans manufactured from digital tumors Programmed the lunars with zero's and one's to mass produce ya A biological tuner giving you the user tools to rule her  Mother nature you abuse bruh, castrated her like shes neutered You Humans are bruisers, You used earth as if its was a sewer

Glad to see you employing a wide array of stylistic approaches. I'm fond of the core concept of this. 

TittySucker wrote: some of it make no sense to me at all but it was pretty dope

Anyways....


Diz this was creative. Some cool wording which boosted the imagery and smoothness of the verse. The middle felt like you hit your stride. Sometimes writers get lucky I guess...lol jokes. This was a solid verse and feel you should stick to these topical types.

a modern day profit, i calculate logic with caution 
an atomic concious with robotic limbs n a brain of toxins
Arsenic concocted electronics committing chaos N'
Im agnostic, emotionless but can foresee the catastrophic

this is my shit - the arsenic concocted electronics commiting chaos.. bruh..fully believe electricity will be societys 'apocalypse' so I am fully engaged with this as a reader - real badass opener bro

Fuck a dooms day clock bitch, Im laced with fiber optics 
I cant promise shit, i only acknowledge data nd' sub-sets
Im a composite of lithium ions nd plugged in to 'ah socket

im liking where this is headed. really raw shit here, this is some next level iRobot shit lol

I sit in an office and can predict the future 
Ima super computer consuming unbiased truths from consumers
The producer of super humans manufactured from digital tumors
Programmed the lunars with zero's and one's to mass produce ya
A biological tuner giving you the user tools to rule her 
Mother nature you abuse bruh, castrated her like shes neutered
You Humans are bruisers, You used earth as if its was a sewer 
Fossil fuel producers, my analysis shows models that are alarming

again - real raw.. hasnt caught me up yet.. I feel the flow is venomous, but the content is lethal as fuck. the binary code play was slick

The dirt on this earth soon wont be able to handle the farming 
Magnitude 8 quakes will rattle LA and apartments
Karma, you spit on this planet instead of guarding it
 garden of Eden is sparring against targets that disbelieve 
people are diseased with deceit from a bombardment of Tv

this shit is foretelling as all hell. ive long described your writing as relentless, and this is so no different

i harness the gift to take electricity n decrypt the prophecies jargon
humans harvest the power to harness clean energy but love tar pits
Its 103 degrees and the reality is they cant stop what they started
pull me from my plug before i could tweet this to the human market

nice ending - alot of conspiracy theories tied in to factual evidence. it was a well crafted and woven piece. I felt like in the amount of bars you used that you really covered alot of ground. I loved your angle. I know im late - but I really love to digest the ill shit, a quick key you can glance at..but I feel these doper pieces you really gotta give em a couple reads and really take in the words. real nice drop my friend.