Open Mic: Revelations 6:66

The bible aint complete disciples left us secrets
From vices of our jesus to lies they form n feed us
Heightened wars knives and swords violence more than peace
The shysters are our leaders whom society believe in
Blinding hordes in sequence applied with a strategic
Plan to make man think his fighting for a reason
The cycles of Gehenna as idle as my tea cup
Feminist divinity the mighty gods athena
The lightning rods be gleamin the sight beyond appealing
A psyche torn from demons that fight thee for ya freedom
My mind recalls a dream one of great importance
Places my brain recorded using pain to paint a portrait
Where souls have snakes absorbing it and a lake is scorchin
vapours forming where you can't escape the torment
Tectonic plates in portions and the sky's hue
As dark as a Cloud thats packed with ice cubes
I had my eyes glued to her it was quite rude
She said her name is lucy heavens bridegroom
Assuming she was lying she'll fool me jus to sign shit
Photos of god and her now proof just has been sighted
She said they were lovers the music was a side gig
That heaven is her place and soon she'll get inside it
And that once she's in no human gets invited
Theres no need for worship with music that she writes

"The bible aint complete disciples left us secrets
From vices of our jesus to lies they form n feed us
Heightened wars knives and swords violence more than peace
The shysters are our leaders whom society believe in
Blinding hordes in sequence applied with a strategic
Plan to make man think his fighting for a reason"

^Bro, whenever you get a chance I want you to read my piece titled The Devil's Testimony. I think you'll really did The content and I'm curious as to what your thoughts on it might be.

Now...back to your intro

Jesus H. Christ! This was fuckin' dope! I loved how you wove the scheme together. It was like a lyrical tapestry of tightly nit rhymes. Also, the content was hard-hitting and socially concious. It was definitely the type of stuff I love reading about. I really dug your transitions as well...they kept the read liquid and fluidly moving from line to line. Impressive stuff Medic.

"The cycles of Gehenna as idle as my tea cup
Feminist divinity the mighty gods athena
The lightning rods be gleamin the sight beyond appealing
A psyche torn from demons that fight thee for ya freedom
My mind recalls a dream one of great importance
Places my brain recorded using pain to paint a portrait.

^I love ancient knowledge. Like Nigma I'm intrigued by the mystic side of things. Almost all of my piece incorporate some form of reference to mythology similar to what you have here. Again, I'm also still digging the scheme. It's exceptional. Oh, and, the line in bold is sick dude. Perfectly worded and expressed.

"Where souls have snakes absorbing it and a lake is scorchin
vapours forming where you can't escape the torment
Tectonic plates in portions and the sky's hue
As dark as a Cloud thats packed with ice cubes
I had my eyes glued to her it was quite rude
She said her name is lucy heavens bridegroom"

Not to nitpick but you do know a "bridegroom" is a man on his wedding day, right? Unless you meant to say she/he was androgynous -- which would be kind of weird, unless you're into that of course. No judgement. Lol.

OAN

The imagery was insane. Loved the "packed with ice cubes" line.

"Assuming she was lying she'll fool me jus to sign shit
Photos of god and her now proof just has been sighted
She said they were lovers the music was a side gig
That heaven is her place and soon she'll get inside it
And that once she's in no human gets invited
Theres no need for worship with music that she writes"

I got another piece titled Her Gnostic Gospel that talks about the feminine aspect/energy of God/creation. It parallels what you have here in certain instances.

In any case

I gotta say this entire piece is kind of deep. I think I need to read it a few times to truly grasp it all. This is like some ying&yang stuff or good vs evil duality type of vibe. Also, mentioning music makes it even deeper when you understand waves, frequencies, strings, rhythm, ect..., on a quantum or metaphysical level.


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Great post Medic.

I think it's a 5 star drop.

Peace...

Gotta say I loved the theme/concept that you presented here. That first bar was an absolutely perfect way not only to line up what we were expecting from the title but also to catch the readers attention right away. What stood out for me was the slick flow and rhyme schemes throughout the verse. The Gehenna reference was nice. Also the imagery of the 'dream of great importance' was done very well also.