Open Mic: [WD#2] Less Is More

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    Posted: 25 March 2016 at 5:10am
I'm unmitigated with ya hatred and reputation
Been impatient, instigated by their regulations
I'm ebola how my flows cause rappers to emaciate
I'll debunk the deficit, suture the hands of fate
Politicians are debonair, with a silver platter
My lectures be for rest like sylvan natter
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Neek Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 March 2016 at 12:26pm
Renegades stand the fuck up :)

thata boy Stal...

didnt get the tree talk line..but im stupid so thats normal.

the politicians line and the hands of fate lines were nasty tho.

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Ok Ok OK


5 bars you sonna bitch. Thats dope. Great use of words and you used them very well. AND IN 5 LINES. Whats Next? 2 lines?

I'm ebola how my flows cause rappers to emaciate
I'll debunk the deficit, suture the hands of fate
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THATS DOPE SHIT


good work and you can keep the vet status cuz you deserve it bruh
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Thanks for the feed guys. Appreciate it
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Cool start to what should be a much more complete piece. I have a feeling that's what it is though, just the beginning?
Imagery so vividly intrinsic you might miss it..
Though you never even had the chance to witness it
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