Open Mic: All she wrote

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   Ahem

So..

I've been slacking like my bare nuckz took a bashing

I wasn't aware D’s still rapping, faggot suck on deez nutz

You suck harder than the canucks but at least they get paid in bucks

You still think I don't give zero fucks? Of course you do, that's dumb luck

You better check your game cuz you faggots sound the same

You probably still mutter my name…

Murder? More like D’s still a bitch and that's all she wrote 

“That fucking Barry kids a joke” but dude at least I work, at least I ain't broke

Oh but checks slinging coke

Let's pause for minute

What I'm trying to say is, this fat fuck drank too much cola

High off his on product, this dude's cancerous! oh wait... He's ebola

Bitch is like, I thought I fooled ya? Aw that's cute 

Ya fucking fruit cake, Id rather join mission at his next wake

I'd rather listen to Blake “sheldon” 

So your cancerous and I have a monstrous brain

Didn't you say I was from the big bang?

At least that dude knows big fame

Like I said bitch, check your game

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barrybondz Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 09 June 2014 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1440 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L	Post Options Post Reply Quote barrybondz Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: All she wrote Posted: 23 April 2016 at 8:18pm
	Ahem So.. I've been slacking like my bare nuckz took a bashing I wasn't aware D’s still rapping, faggot suck on deez nutz You suck harder than the canucks but at least they get paid in bucks You still think I don't give zero fucks? Of course you do, that's dumb luck You better check your game cuz you faggots sound the same You probably still mutter my name… Murder? More like D’s still a bitch and that's all she wrote “That fucking Barry kids a joke” but dude at least I work, at least I ain't broke Oh but checks slinging coke Let's pause for minute What I'm trying to say is, this fat fuck drank too much cola High off his on product, this dude's cancerous! oh wait... He's ebola Bitch is like, I thought I fooled ya? Aw that's cute Ya fucking fruit cake, Id rather join mission at his next wake I'd rather listen to Blake “sheldon” So your cancerous and I have a monstrous brain Didn't you say I was from the big bang? At least that dude knows big fame Like I said bitch, check your game


Crimson Juice Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Crimson Juice Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 24 April 2016 at 1:54am
	OK well yeah it flowed OK your punches to be honest were in the being a little on the basic side,but this does seem directed at a certain individual,your aggression was the highlight here,and in ny opinion helped in leaps and bounds,other than that you had nothing,your wordplay was almost if not none existenced,and to be fair,it was also a little to generic,or I wouldn't be questioning who it was aimed at...and also the tempo was decent here,I remember just before x-mas joining this site and you was getting a shit load of grief,then you seemed to disappear untill now,and that's your best in 4 months,smh,you got some learning to do fella,in. fact that.Canucks line was your best line here,stay up and no hate. .peace.
	"You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance".

daydizzle89 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote daydizzle89 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 24 April 2016 at 2:29am
	Whoever you are dissing, you should be more direct and actually rhyme. Ill feed this when i have time

barrybondz Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 09 June 2014 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1440 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L	Post Options Post Reply Quote barrybondz Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 24 April 2016 at 3:59am
	Y'all never heard of murder she wrote? It was a quick key. I actually haven't sat down and wrote much in 6 months. Lazy and not very inspired.