Open Mic: Game of cards

A king, A queen, Jack and joker in that regard

It wasn't my intetion to get to be the king

I just didn't want anyone to see me being pinned

to the ground-cornered, just wanted to get the honor

like it was my destiny when my eyes laid on her

From the corner of my sight yeah cliche right!

And the next thing I remember she was there by my side

Nothing can possibly go wrong right? 

There it was my big day, I was prepared to be crowned

I was the king now, I thought she'll be my queen and how

will I be spending my days ruling everyone, the sparkling crowd

There I was mistaken and my kingdom was taken

they told me I was unfit to rule the thing that I helped making

bullshit! they would never find a better one they gotta be faking

I wanted to rebel but I kept chokin' my mouth open

my life escaping, through my eyes I tried to rope in

I heard the crowd, they were laughing out loud

My heart sank, I knew I was the one being joked about

the sound grew louder and now I felt my knees - shakin

my heart aching but.. but I was the so called king

I saw my queen standing next to the new king

Fuck! My nightmares' comin true! I am being pinned

My lady in red ! Its too much pain to handle

I just can't be the victim and you just can't be the vandal

Bitch! I'll rise again I promise as long as I am breathing

but next moment my heart starts heating and shortly stops beating

My life races in front of my eyes, all my regrets, all the lies

I curse her! Hope he pounds you all the time with no love and no ties

 

Yet she was my world, all that I had and..

I don't understand after all this why? just why? I am the one crying

when you're the one being cursed then why I am the one dying?

First off, the topic is nice, and I like how you incorporated it as a form of an "extended" metaphor, visible throughout your verse. Scheme-wise, this was very decent. You kept a rather continuous, linear structure throughout, but it made for a quite easy and smooth read, partially due to your short line length. The structure also contributed well to the content, making it the focal point here. Rhyme scheme was also rather simple, but it all worked well within the overall composition of this. You had some spelling mistakes, which made the some of the lines appear to be rushed, but again, that's a rather minor point here. 

As for the content, I'd like to see you really expanding it in form of a series. I think that the ending was the highlight of the verse, since you had a very strong emotional appeal incorporated in your last two lines, which evoked a relatable feeling to the reader. Your overall approach was quite creative, but I thought it was slightly linear at the same time. I would have liked to see you elaborating on the circumstances a bit further, rather than focusing almost entirely on the scenery depiction, as you did towards your middle section. I understand that you were limited in your line length here, but it would have made for a nice "challenge" if your verse had some more details to it. I guess you're going to incorporate those aspects in the next verses, though. Overall, nice work!