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Just Belief
Groupie Joined: 03 June 2016 Location: L.A County Status: Offline Points: 54 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L |
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Posted: 07 June 2016 at 4:36am |
Intent on invention, an incident's my mention,
In debt of deception, never met my reflection, West Coast LA Reppin, left most Dre Day steppin, Its a may-day weapon, Pray thay heaven, May thy lesson..See then Reckon What am im seeing right here, smoke clears there's no cheers, Feel like a Pisano with no beers, Dr. Manhattan there's no years, You can only be, NO close, or SO near, to this energy here, A model of communication, while you in a bottle of lubircation, Could give a fuck less, who sucks and who's sick, I'll judge for myself, Keep all your rubricks, I already know who you'll pick, Some Grudge for the Wealth, There's always somebody else, As of late, Lately it's too late to see, But I'm gratefully waiting, Pacing,...Statement fully Explainaing, Then causally walk off like BP, I just laugh when mothafuckas hate me, |
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Onecleanlaser
Banned Joined: 30 May 2016 Location: California Status: Offline Points: 36 |
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This is all around dope. I'm still not the one to pick out mistakes! But I am curious if this is supposed to be read slow or if I am just not reading right! I can spit it double I just pause and drag in my own way! Still an inspiration..
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Just Belief
Groupie Joined: 03 June 2016 Location: L.A County Status: Offline Points: 54 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L |
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each stanza has a diffrent rhyme scheme and flow. Thx for the feed.
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