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    Posted: 10 June 2016 at 5:40am
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People need to learn how not to comment on things they know nothing about. You know what it means when you assume. 
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There's something wrong with the link bro, the embed ting don't work. The track is dope as fuck though. Your delivery is and remains brutal as fuck. Flow is insane. Beat is dope as fuck.

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Edit: What's the beat yo, the samples are mad dope!


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It's drakes beat 4pm in Calabasas. Appreciate the feed
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This was cool bro, you had some nice metaphors in there. Not a fan of the sneak dissing, I feel like that's kind of weak, and not cuz it's a sneak but because they weren't really any hard hitting bars. But overall I thought this was a decent remix, definitely a nice flow, good rhymescheme. Would like to see you on a full length original track. Oh and on the mixing i would say take a little off the low end for the vocals, make them brighter. That's about it for my feed. Nice track.
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Saying I'll jack E(jackie) like mila kunis is direct. And he knows I'm talking to him. So it's whatever anyone can get it at this point. Also it's funny thag yo don't like sneak dissing but that's all drake does....interesting.
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Yeah man I liked it,nice bouncy beat coupled with well delivered
lyrics,I noticed you had some aliases in this also,didn't feel like
a Diss track though,still this took nothing away from the ambience
of the track overal,I also thought you displayed some real nice
mic presence here too,you kept on the flow throughout which made
it sound like a polished track,all in all an enjoyable audio,and
your voice seemed to complement the beat to be honest,well done
with this...peace.
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Appreciate the feed crim
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Yeah, Neek said the same thing so here I am still wondering of Doom dissed me or not. If so, read my response! If not, read my response and specifically the last line lol
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You by your own admission don't fw drake so it doesn't make sense for you to do exactly what he does. Idk, ya'll my fam, I don't like seeing the amnimosity between everybody, elite definitely got you with his response tho. I'm really sayin if you're gonna diss at all, bring better bars because I know you got more than that in you.
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Cut the hoe shit out. There's is no family there. Elite is a manipulator that u let play you wayy too many times. And I'm not worried about shit his comes out with
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pretty good stuff. ..had some nice stretches of flow. what software you use?

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Originally posted by D.Von Doom D.Von Doom wrote:

Saying I'll jack E(jackie) like mila kunis is direct. And he knows I'm talking to him. So it's whatever anyone can get it at this point. Also it's funny thag yo don't like sneak dissing but that's all drake does....interesting.



That's dope tbh
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If it was all bars like that I'd say this was fire, but that was the only stand out punch to me. And no one's maniputating me, I know what's going on with everyone I involve myself with, I'm playin my cards for the long game, it's all love man.
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Originally posted by D.Von Doom D.Von Doom wrote:

Audacity


that's pretty solid for audacity. nice use of some of the vsts.

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Thanks I appreciate that
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Dude... I said it many times before...your presence and delivery be on point. This was nice

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confession booth woulda sounded crisp. i really enjoyed this man, youre at the level where i could listen to this on shuffle and enjoy. i feel your delivery has been impressive but youve stepped up the pen game here. Some solid punches, very well executed wordplay, and smooth flow/transitions. Really nice verse 

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Appreciate the feed. Didn't know you listened to my work
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