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TNT I Tomski
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Posted: 28 June 2016 at 10:52am |
https://soundcloud.com/thomas-crank-abbott/nothing-on-me Check it out on Soundcloud Edited by Neek - 30 June 2016 at 9:03pm |
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Neek
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I embedded this for you and moved it to Audio Mic. welcome to the site and the Audio Mic.
ill try and give this a listen soon time friend. |
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#Bananas
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TNT I Tomski
Newbie Joined: 27 June 2016 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 4 |
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Thanks for the props, new one coming tomorrow, promise.
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Would like to hear you over a beat. This is alright, you need more emphasis on emotion during certain parts where you lyrics call for it. "anger" when you said that you should have let your balls drop and let them know they don't want none. Then you got church mouse quiet near then end when you were suppose to be cocky with your "wait a minute whose next....". You Should've been like "man wait a minute?!?! WHOSE NEXT!" You need to believe in your own bars before anyone can or will ever believe in them. Try to pause a bit more you got somewhat nasal-ly. But this isn't bad for starters, lets get you on a beat & messing with the EQ's on a software program.
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ch3kkgame
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This was ok. Sounds like you are just getting into audio. The advice I would give you that I feel is the most important is conneciting with your lyrics. If I can tell your reading them you haven't connected with them yet. Rap is about emotion and raw feeling. Rather it be rage, or sorrow. It doesn't mafter it is all transfered through how you deliver them. The dopest bars can be delivered in such a way that it hurts your soul listening to it. The same thing applies Visce versa. Keep dropping a dress next time go ahead and finish the leap. Get on a beat and starte your grind homie.
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