Open Mic: CHAIN x Endeavor - "July the Four-Fifth"

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    Posted: 05 July 2016 at 1:06pm
CHAIN:

Shame on you retarded ass Facebook journalists
Me, I check niggas like payroll services.
Ferguson in bar form, hardcore verbalist
I'ma kick a riot off while smoking like a turbo drift.
Do us all a solid and ask me what I'm working with
Or why the leave voters do not know the Bilderberg exists.
Murderous, fa' sho it is, had to keep the flow lit
Crash Bandicoot, I'm an animal in dope kicks.
GOAT shit, I'm Black Phillip reading bible verses
You can use these bars for reverse image searches.
Perfect are the visuals, it's CGI enhancement
The movies that I wrote are now E.Coli to clansmen.
Proving I'm a pro to those glossing over me
Students of my flow have earned a nautical degree.
Plausible indeed, this my cardio routine
I'm Barcelona's team under Guardiola, please.
The party's over here and we are dining like brutes
Grill all red like Michael Knight's coupe.
Dynamite proof, I'm with a dime that writes too
The finest since Mya in Carolina light blue.
I'm kinda like Zeus and these sluts are not Hera
Might run up in my funeral to snuff the pallbearers.
Looking at these simps that love this thot era
Grooming side pieces like a mutton chop wearer.
 
...juggernaut nigga.


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Ya'll talk slick but lackin' proper structure won't get you far
I get my CHAIN on, link the iron and let that metal spark
A beast leashed, grab ya'lls forks and pitch ya favorite talk
Which craft ya'll hate wont matter, magic don't cater to ya'll
And Frank, tore down a German stone with words and thoughts
Tesla coils and rapid flows... Still wonder who's the best or not?
The lines are hollow cause.. This ain't for the faint of heart
Check the reference, ya'll souls get dark once the flame is lost
I'm blazing hot.... Guess all these props gassed you up
I reenact war crimes, a filthy job but ya'll need that scrub
The B-42 bomber, tell Flex to drop additional bombs on it
Call it a conflict, all ya allies can't measure my axis-
-So them hatchets get dropped quick...
All you gon' hear is "talk yo shit, Sway" when Heather B responding
I out bar em... 4 by 4 the roughest beat or terrain
Ask Neek, that's the only time he'll mention my name-
-and not talk about the work I keep getting by son, god fucking damn
Easy.


...buggin' out, ninja.
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My man trading bars with the CHAIN monster. That's why I wanted you in crew.

CHAINizzle. Youre killing these collabs. Reference king. Favourite was you comparing yourself to Peps Barca team. Brutal.

End, you kept up with the craziness well. Brought your own style and substance. The German stone bar was fire.

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This was nice.
I like the first verse best.
The second verse kinda struggled to keep up to the calibre of the first but it held in there.
Nice collab overall.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Crimson Juice Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 July 2016 at 7:35pm
CHAIN that was nice from your tempo to your wordplay,from structure to contents,but then you know this already,other wise you wouldn't of put
it out there,and especially when doing a collab too,this piece brought
along its own character due to your plays,they were fresh and delivered
with sprite,they seemed to just roll off my inner voice on reading,a
job well done here..Ripe.

Endeavor your verse here was nice and subtle,that to be honest takes
a short time,or a re-read to contemplate and grasp for some on reading,
I did enjoy your verse and abstract lines/bars and references,the
Frank/German thoughts (= diary) and the Tesla line,nicely played,and
like CHAIN your tempo and plays,down to contents was Ripe also,and
the opening lines with you getting your CHAIN on was a nice inclusion,
gave you verse a real sense of a partnership here,I thought your drop
complemented CHAINS well,also Ripe verse..

Good work guys I really did enjoy all the aspects of this collab,it
was a smooth read from both,job well done..always keep that nib
moving..Peace..

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Thanks for the feed, gents. Also got a Frankenstein reference hidden in there, don't miss it!
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^^lol found it,and yeah I did miss it to be honest,we'll played
sir,well played and disguised..peace.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Neek Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 July 2016 at 8:13pm
this shit was live.

I dug the best of me video reference.

as well as the tesla coils.

not much really to touch up on that hasnt been caressed lovingly already.

expected nothing less.
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Whoa whoa whoa fellas fellas.. Comin in heavy with this shit. CHAIN is my favorite artist bar-none on here bro and my dude went typical off his CHAIN shit. This mug said mutton shop wearer. I'm done! End you came correct too bro. I've read some of your pieces recently and you got mad talent fam. The delivery and flow between both y'all was smooth as a baby's ass. It made it effortless to grab the vibe and really spit the lyrics with emotion and character. Something we all strive to do. Dope shit
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Damn, two of the top tier guys - it can't be nothing short of great. And you really lived up to your very own standards. 
So, almost everything has been said already, but there were several highlights in this. 

CHAIN - you're always demonstrating a very unique approach in every aspect, the rather unconventional rhythmic patten as well as the intriguing and very different references. Black Phillip and Barcelona references were a highlight, as well as your opening segment. 

End - I knew you were a very versatile writer, but this verse highlights your rather unique approach incredibly well. I loved the subtle schemes you had, along with the relevant and rather abstract references. Frank and Tesla coils were also my favourite ones, along with your opening segment. 

Overall, I think you both complemented each other pretty well, you both had different, interesting approaches and schemes which were rather unconventional. Thanks for sharing. 


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Thanks for the love everyone!
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Would feed this when i get the time, thought Endea was without punches. A surprise.
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This is hot. The styles are different but both are mesmerizing. Great collab fellas, i enjoyed the flow most.

"A beast leashed, grab ya'lls forks and pitch ya favorite talk
Which craft ya'll hate wont matter, magic don't cater to ya'll"


lol favorite bar. I liked the witchcraft play funny shit bruh
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I didn't see this collab coming at all. Chain killing it as usual! Im not going to pick a favorite line
from his verse cause I liked it all, to be honest with you. As for Endeavor, you surprised me on
how hard you came in on this. Lol! Didn't expect that at all. The opening bar & the "hollow cause" line were my favorites. Overall, this was an entertaining read.

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This was super dope and the rhyme scheme was awesome throughout... felt the pieces were both expoltentialy well put together and fit together nicley as one two make this drop. super dope nice job yahll
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Chain- As always, you did excellent. The self hype thingy is just pinned to your head, this remind me of 'Power 101'


Proving I'm a pro to those glossing over me
Students of my flow have earned a nautical degree.


Flow excellently and well structured. Felt the internals there between the 'pro/flow. In summary, the whole verse was amazing.









Endeavour-

This hit me as a surprise because i haven't seen something like this from you. And it's amazing how you paced up with chainz himself


A beast leashed, grab ya'lls forks and pitch ya favorite talk
Which craft ya'll hate wont matter, magic don't cater to ya'll.

I don't know but is this me seeing a double entendre in the second line?(Which craft- witch craft). Love it how you made the both words to relate to the line, still with the 'magic' words to resurface a bit of idea on the witch craft.




This is a pro work, good verse from the both.
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Yeah bro!

The scheme is basically; A leashed beast > Pitchforks while spewing hatred. Witchcraft and magic (as in the uniqueness of the collab) don't cater to "they". But also "which craft ya'll hate" as in either hating my or Chain work, it don't matter cuz the collab too dope.

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Smh, Fuck you Chain... That flow is stupid.. I can actually spit that out loud word for word and it flows well and after reading the lines a few times it's butter smooth. I can't hate on good writing. Dope shit.
Even though we sort of bumped heads. I've always thought you were one of the more skilled writers I've seen. You and the dude SS have ridiculous writing ability. I'm attempting to take my dick head hat off right now. 

"Proving I'm a pro to those glossing over me
Students of my flow have earned a nautical degree.
Plausible indeed, this my cardio routine
I'm Barcelona's team under Guardiola, please."

Was the highlight of your verse for me bruh..

Endeav, bruh. I fucks with you. You going right at it. Constantly improving, I respect the grind. I'm just thinking forward to another collab with you two in about a year. "July the Four - Fifth 2017" or some shit. 
Yall work it out. Lol, good shit tho. Smh, Fucking Chain.. 
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Chain - I prefer this audio actually. Once you hear it, reading it is boring. 

Endeavour - first off, props for being one of the few LA text heads who can actually hold a solid 4/4 count with his lines. Flow's decent, could be a little more movement in there to keep it interesting but it's all on point. It's a tough call to follow Chain for anybody really and you hold your own well here. I'd say I'll look out for your work but I'm out after today so I'll just say keep at it and try not to pick up any of the bad habits of the texthead guys here. Also start recording because you're good enough to be doin more than just the lyric side of emceeing. Stay up.
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Thanks S, I'm actually gonna drop a collab with Neek and Ch3kk. That'll motivate me to record my other shits as well, it's been too long.
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