Open Mic: Ego Altered -- Slip diss

Whoa,I've just woke up to this scene,i feel both of you's are a little
touchy today eh,well no matter and as for your piece here,it was well
aimed,lacked any hard aggression though,came off as a rant more than
an attack,your tempo was good as too the contents,a decent parting shot
here,I liked the fact you trawled to get info,it shows your tenacious,
not sure what Slip will make of it or do about it,but let me say this,
whatever escalates between you guys from here,it's between you guys,I
personally don't have time to waste on beef,so now I'm going to grab
the popcorn and watch this play out,interesting...peace.

Lmao I'll give this proper feed in the morning but u just murdered slip

This escalated quickly.

This was pretty good though I gotta say. I thought you used you material well here. I thought you crowned him well. The quotes where gold tbh just lol at slip trying to act all tough in his pm's over such petty shit. The lost 80% couplet was my favourite here, but there was lots to like about this. It had a bit of everything, not punch heavy but a cohesive diss piece that was well aimed and put together. Good shit.

Lol thanks for the feedback fellas.
This is just for the spirit of writing and battling.
I mean, he did act like an idiot about the situation and something like this was well deserved in my opinion, but I'm not seriously mad at the idiot. I just call them how I see them.
As for the rest of AE, you all are respectful and cool cats. No shots intended to be fired your say personally. It's just too bad one of your leaders is an idiot.
Thanks again for everyone's feedback.

This was great.

And don't let anyone tell you this didn't hit hard.

I can't think what's worse than being exposed as someone who takes this forum shit seriously, lol.

Ohhh shit BOSS! Yes, I hear what you sayin. Loud and clear!
......Bwahh!!! Son you're a fucking joke to me! ... fuck outta here!
Great way to open humorous touch on a personal y'all had when u was in the crew good way to start

see, I had to leave bro, couldn't be an alter ego. Cos I aint like you;
don't get mad at my crew, for dumb shit, and give them strikes too.
Continuing from the beginning bar liked the flow

Hahaha! One strike? BITCH you must be plum drunk off some fine brew
mad I corrected your grammar. mannn fuck you! .. wups ..Guess that's strike 'to'.
Straight clowning here

Ya shoulda never been dealt the hand of leader, I speak real!
somebody need to, reshuffle the deck, and redeal.
Nice personal hit great flow to it

what kinda reputation you think your leadership channels
when peeps tune in and see you've lost 80% of your battles?
This was a nice personal but to me the channels an battles end ryhme threw it off a bit I'm just not picking I see alot of potential in you though so I'm gonna be harsh lol

Fucking garbage truck! Starting stuff with vets like Fuck and then tryin Tre
they shoulda been like some broke clocks and not give your bitch ass the time of day.
This seemed a bit stretched in the punchline but really clever concept

I'm way above you. You lost. In this battle world you a retard foreigner
callin cats internet gangsters. tell us, Is that worst than being a keyboard warrior?
This had me rolling bruh why u do slip like that

You lackin skill to back it. And you're right about my talent. So you don't want it with me bro!
Listen hoe, my punch land so hard it'll turn your hat sideways like in your dumb ass video
Another hard hitting funny bar

And I dig dirt like I'm a dog diggin for bones, then deliver pain
So who ya kiddin mayne? ya just a 27 year old illiterate Canadian wigger, Shane.
Ouch


should have never fucked with me, I bring the slaughter til I see you falter
And fuck your Alter Ego's. I'm on a higher level, so this ego's altered.
Great way to close


and I''m just gettin started

Overall this was filled with great concepts an personal hits with a humorous touch I'd like to see you play a bit with word play multies an internals an see what u can conjure up either way this is a solid diss good shit keep writting fam stay up

by the way. When I mentioned he ducked the audio call out. I was referring to the one where I called out Slip. Dope shit again tho.

Bumping so slip can see this exquisite diss