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    Posted: 01 August 2016 at 2:00pm

MAJOR KEY ALERT....


I GOT THE KEYS KEYS KEYS
I GOT THE KEYS KEYS KEYS
I GOT THE KEYS KEYS KEYS


{Beans}

See..

I'll Free TOP Text, All raw hits, Jus watch Beans Off heads...
Drop'n heat - None sweat! No matter a Deadline We got Keys On Deck!
I'll breach all threats & the fall? I'll stomp & pound
Rockin Clowns, No joke it didnt take Key stabs for me'ta Lock it down
Clockin rounds, in time, I'm Kickin fucks in the dick & nuts..I'm sick as fuck
If you felt ma'hate, You know I aint Welter Weight, but Woodly W/the swingin punch!
foolish chumps, Taking lifes a given. my lines snipe W/Precision
Young audio Heads never made it in this - they Inspired taking advise from Mission!
What I mean is my Meaning is Right, 84 fights, meaning I'm Mean W/The rights..
kids Just a KEY feeding in sight. if Anything Raw Meats W/Beans I cut'em to Shashimi & Rice
beleive beans is nice, my lethal lyrics leaving you weak hoes
Bleeding an seeking hope like Neeks speaches when he 3 deep in Keystones
yall fake fucks get in my face Till my knife scrapes & rakes guts
The Lord is key & hes In empires chambers so jus Praise Us


I GOT THE KEYS KEYS KEYS.....
I GOT THE KEYS KEYS KEYS.....


{Trizzy Tre}

A keying monster crafting destruction on pathetic lame fucks...
Call me Frankenstein how bodies create my genetic make-up!
Trust my claims of Rap Royalty off the top, you know my key's...
I've always stayed loyal to L.A...guess i got those Kobe genes!!
Roasting feens power hungry cuz they can't stop be bitch...
Tre's brolic fists resemble Lee Harvey, kill'in men over politics!!
It's obvious some kids can't key, no showing's an easy fact...
Like Zin.....got more N-words on his Record then an Elite track!!
Matter fact who had ur back? Fake Moves just a Con tho...
One swing from Tre ended ur 'Wave' like I'm retitling The Life Of Pablo!
YOU RAN BRO!! Man tho, it's a battle but he's the type to fear it...
Beat me? You've got a better chance of Smoothtung writing lyrics!
Ur time ghosted cleared us of ur bitchness more then enough...
He's such a Faggot .....he was found shot dead at a Florida club!
....Ur just a punk!!
He begged for a rematch then ghosted, u remain a fraud...
cuz I've put more Light to his Face then exposing Charlamagne Tha God!



I GOT THE KEYS KEYS KEYS
I GOT THE KEYS KEYS KEYS
I GOT THE KEYS KEYS KEYS


STOP..............BITCH PLEASE............
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Bean Bizzle - this was fairly good chap. the meets with beans, keystones and inspire lines were highlights for me.


Tray Trizzle - this was fulla punches. the make up, r/r/LA/kobe shit was really well played. and the wave bar was a nice highlight as well.

in the end, this was a nice crew cut.. definitely got me hyped for crewsades. I think ya'll ready. good shit.
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Beans - Nice smooth verse. lol @ the mission bar and the sashimi & rice bar was real dope also. 

Tre - Opening two bars were killer. lol @ the little zin and smooth fires. 

Both of ya'll had real consistent, aggressive verses. Definitely something that may get some people in the writing mindset after reading it. Also, I Co-sign what neek said about the getting hyped for Crewsades. 
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Beans- Liking the opener. flow is smooth throughout this piece. I really liked your internals and your multi end rhymes. Helped the flow drastically. Transitions rhymes were all nice in some areas. Mission line was funny.

Trizzy Tre - Right off the bat i loved the choice of vocabulary. You always have a really punchy delivery and its unique. The LA meta with Kobe, it was dope and well worded here. That Zin/ Elite line was funny and hit pretty hard. Dope shit. Overall, great references, great delivery and nice choise of vocabulary throughout my friend. Good work



Overall - Nice collab people. keep it up
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I'll drop a more detailed review on this later. Overall good job to both of you.

Altho, beans, there was part of a line that really kinda messed up the start for me. Maybe I misinterpreted the meaning, but if that's the case, it's something you need to be sure doesn't get misconstrued.

"Drop'n heat - None sweat!"
To me this is saying that you are dropping heat, but when you drop your heat it ain't hot. No one sweats literally/ also no sweats your drops.
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It's no sweat to drop heat. Idk I keyd this lol


Thanks for the feed yall
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Beans you came with it man.

What I mean is my Meaning is Right, 84 fights, meaning I'm Mean W/The rights..
kids Just a KEY feeding in sight. if Anything Raw Meats W/Beans I cut'em to Shashimi & Rice
^^^^^^..... This shit right here was fire


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Beans

This had that raw grime feel to it I dig how you illustrate shit the flow here was dope and Pretty smooth I like how you Use a solid set up approach to them keys nice work

Trizzy

Mad respect to the high intensity of tension in these bars here the heat wave reference was unbelievable lol the smooth tung diss was funny too the flow was also smooth

Nice collaboration here fellahs liked the work
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a lot of shots fired in here fellas.

Beans crazy run of schemes in this. i like that the flow and the content weren't at all weighed down by the volume of repeat rhyme sound. takes a steady hand to pull that off. each turn of phrase had a really fresh feel to it too.

Tre. some people really served notice in this one. some scathing attacks on Zin et al. these are sone hard ass shots to weather. you were hiring from all angles, liked the lee harvey oswald ref...like you had 8 shooters on the grassy knoll...

well done guys...just an all around solid effort. impressive as fuck.   very imperial.

I'ma check this again in a day or two.

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Originally posted by Droidian Droidian wrote:

a lot of shots fired in here fellas.

Beans crazy run of schemes in this. i like that the flow and the content weren't at all weighed down by the volume of repeat rhyme sound. takes a steady hand to pull that off. each turn of phrase had a really fresh feel to it too.

Tre. some people really served notice in this one. some scathing attacks on Zin et al. these are sone hard ass shots to weather. you were hiring from all angles, liked the lee harvey oswald ref...like you had 8 shooters on the grassy knoll...

well done guys...just an all around solid effort. impressive as fuck.   very imperial.

I'ma check this again in a day or two.



Check back in a day or two? Is there something you're expecting to happen??


Medic, glad you picked up on the Life Of Pablo punch, wasn't sure everyone would get it. lol
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Beans - Your delivery went well, the aggressiveness well felt. Coming down to your rhyme scheme, you went really good at this point even with some internals. Btw, i won't pretend to understand your verse(i'm not really familiar with most things). Would have added more if i understand it.




Trizzy - Your first bar was insane man, it was really good. I also dig the Kobe aspect. And the Zin? Heh, he was clearly the main focus. I like the way you first started with self hype before going into delivering some punches towards him.
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Thanks for the look Storm.

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Shit guys only just saw this..

Beans done what Beans does,this was good man i liked it,to say you
keyed this it was impressive really,the shots were good and aimed
well,that Mission bar was witty,the contents are better than some
ppl's writtens,this piece had a statement feel to it like some things
needed to be pointed out and said,the tempo was also good,it bounced
along in an effortless fashion,plus the vocab and plays seemed to
back up what your typing,good shit here I believe...peace.

Trizzy you got at a few members here too,like Beans you came with a
verse that acted like a statement also,that Zin bar made me smirk for
real,plus not an ounce of subtleness either,straight into firing off the
shots,this was a good alround drop,your contents and direction were
well aimed and your punches we're present too,this was a good collab
on the face of it,plus I feel it's purpose has been served too,i liked
it..peace.

Overal this was a decent collab,your verses were battle orientated,but
that just helped to back up what you guys wanted to be read,there were
some real highlights to be had from both pieces here,plus I like the
way your crew just rolls up and draws the line for ppl to cross,if they
wish too that is,you guys do March as one as crews go,that I find kind
of refreshing really,you have each others backs,Ripe work guys..peace.

"You need to learn how to make an exit,before you can make an entrance".
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Thanks Juice. Always respect your feed and detailed breakdown...

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thanks for the feed yall
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Ok, I wanna break this down but ıma need a laptop for that. Check back in a few hours and ıma edit this post. Smh, been sleeping on this.
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oh yeah and for the record...i did get stabbed with car keys back in the day. 4 times. theres a personal for yall
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Originally posted by Beans Beans wrote:

oh yeah and for the record...i did get stabbed with car keys back in the day. 4 times. theres a personal for yall


LOL

Outstanding Beans, outstanding.

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My bad guys, completely forgot lol.

LEGGO!

 

Beans n Dip:

 

Quote I'll Free TOP Text, All raw hits, Jus watch Beans Off heads...

Drop'n heat - None sweat! No matter a Deadline We got Keys On Deck!
I'll breach all threats & the fall? I'll stomp & pound
Rockin Clowns, No joke it didnt take Key stabs for me'ta Lock it down



Pre-post, the last line of this segment went over my head... But I got it now lol. You really got stabbed with keys, eh? Talk about that Khaled dedication lol. Fire flow.



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Clockin rounds, in time, I'm Kickin fucks in the dick & nuts..I'm sick as fuck
If you felt ma'hate, You know I aint Welter Weight, but Woodly W/the swingin punch!



I liked the scheme here, second line *feels* wordy but lo and behold, it actually works!



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foolish chumps, Taking lifes a given. my lines snipe W/Precision
Young audio Heads never made it in this - they Inspired taking advise from Mission!



I like how you worded the punch here. Real effective blow forreal.



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What I mean is my Meaning is Right, 84 fights, meaning I'm Mean W/The rights..
kids Just a KEY feeding in sight. if Anything Raw Meats W/Beans I cut'em to Shashimi & Rice



Ha, last segment of second line is mad fire. Food bars bruh!



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beleive beans is nice, my lethal lyrics leaving you weak hoes
Bleeding an seeking hope like Neeks speaches when he 3 deep in Keystones



Bodybag. You win. Especially where you said NEEK.



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yall fake fucks get in my face Till my knife scrapes & rakes guts
The Lord is key & hes In empires chambers so jus Praise Us



Pretty potent closer, was hoping for something more scheme heavy as the entire verse was filled with that but we can't have it all right?



Overall: I liked the verse a lot.





Trizzlefish:



Quote A keying monster crafting destruction on pathetic lame fucks...

Call me Frankenstein how bodies create my genetic make-up!



Okay... You're not playing here, eh? Flow was extra smooth here bruh!



Quote Trust my claims of Rap Royalty off the top, you know my key's...

I've always stayed loyal to L.A...guess i got those Kobe genes!!

Word, I like this right here. Nice play on Lord Kobe too.

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Roasting feens power hungry cuz they can't stop be bitch...
Tre's brolic fists resemble Lee Harvey, kill'in men over politics!!

Disliked this one the most. First line wording is weird and the second is a bit of a stretch for me. But that's because I don't believe ya'lls FBI.

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It's obvious some kids can't key, no showing's an easy fact...
Like Zin.....got more N-words on his Record then an Elite track!!
Matter fact who had ur back? Fake Moves just a Con tho...
One swing from Tre ended ur 'Wave' like I'm retitling The Life Of Pablo!

I liked the section right here. Some personals and any Ye reference is always good.

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YOU RAN BRO!! Man tho, it's a battle but he's the type to fear it...
Beat me? You've got a better chance of Smoothtung writing lyrics!

Lmao....

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Ur time ghosted cleared us of ur bitchness more then enough...
He's such a Faggot .....he was found shot dead at a Florida club!
....Ur just a punk!! 

Sheesh, that was brutal. 

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He begged for a rematch then ghosted, u remain a fraud...
cuz I've put more Light to his Face then exposing Charlamagne Tha God!

PUT SOME RESPEK ON IT! Dope closer.

Overall: Really solid verse with a lot of punches. I've enjoyed this piece gents!
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Thanks Endeavor.

Outstanding breakdown as always bro...
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