Open Mic: Acoustic [With Sky Scrapur]

Storm Shadow


Euphonic sounds resonate fogging the mind on which its relates
Harmony bounds the fate that slowly define them intimate
Exquisiting art giving much pleasure to the spinal cord
Sadness is cleared when there's music and heart intercourse
Whenever the heart is weak, it withers and remains bleak
Like a barren path beneath, the soul sink deep in pain feel
Brain lingering with thoughts, it pause to examine the loss
You can only fix fault when you realize the real source
When you open the heart doors, it reveals what the art does
Sound fertilize the heart for new feelings to sprout forth
And blooming occurs whenever happiness returns
We pray thee 'oh lord' for every pain to be gone....
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When the beat cease, peace is released high above the sky
To calm all trouble storms whenever the rumble comes
We seek bliss to dismiss conflicts when the trouble strikes
You're bound to loss if the road is developed wrong.



Sky Scrapur


When the chords are hit, the impact is stronger than a crush
Once fallen for the voicings, you won't tame the adrenalin rush
That's the abracadabra behind the secrets of Grand pianists
Building tension with chords and without hating them wrists.
See, i was raised by music, safe in the shadow of her wings
So i know when tension is released, sweet like played before kings,
It relieves stress, healing inner wounds found deep within
It refreshes old skin, giving old age life a sweet meaning.
This organised noise can be sweetened with harmonic voices
Together creating mild sounds, made from sharp & rich choices
Not forgetting an acoustic weapon, strummed for grace melodies
Causin' an effect that could heal wounds like senzu beans.
Whenever i hit the chords my emotions take a dive
Deep into the fantasy world where dreams are made alive
Where the sound can take life before you even ask the knife
It's just the music world, that brought em back to life.

Storm I liked your verse here,the contents were good,your piece seemed
to have an innocence about it,i thought the title was good,as too the
subject matter you deployed also,there was a few end lines that didn't
rhyme,but that's no biggie,as the vocab for me carried me past that,i
thought this verse of yours was really Ripe,well thought and displayed,
it had a real poetry feel about it,like something you could find in a
book,your word choices were good too,I enjoyed the read,there was some
nice description going on in parts that made this piece effortlessly
tick along,thanks for the read,I thought this was Ripe..

Sky first off,i do believe you backed Storm up well with your offering,
if it wasn't for the fact your alias was before the verse,I would of
assumed this was another verse from Storm,a continuation so to type,I
also liked this piece,there were subtle differences between you both,
but as collabs go,this was Ripe,like all the things I typed for Storm,
it also applies to you,i do like your style of writing,your opening
was good,it had some sprite about it,and that pretty much sums up your
drop,it was a vibrant read,your details and wording were good too,as
to the tempo and general feel of it,good work I enjoyed the read from
yours was also,Ripe..

Overal you both did well,this was a fresh approach by you both,you
seem to complement each other well too,i liked it from the start to
end,plus I loved the concept and theme,on reading I had flash backs
to that track by Bob Marley,"when music hits you feel no pain",can't at
the minute remember the actual song title,but these drops were in
the same vein,anyways good work guys and props,enjoyable read..peace.

^^storm you don't have to go out your way to feed me,do what you do
and feed others,i do honestly get a kick out of poetry,so the pleasure
is mine...peace.

Great collab Storm bro. Thanks guys for the great feed we really appreciate.