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D.Von Doom 
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 Topic: Doom-LockJaw FreestylePosted: 11 August 2016 at 10:27pm |
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https://soundcloud.com/daofficial1/da-lockjaw-freestyle Been awhile since I dropped so I figured I'd write something real quick.
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Bruno
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Posted: 11 August 2016 at 11:30pm |
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I absolutely love that beat! I haven't herd any of your other stuff yet but your flow was perfect for me as were the vocal levels, a good listen!
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D.Von Doom
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Posted: 11 August 2016 at 11:48pm |
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Thanks appreciate it
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The Law
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Posted: 12 August 2016 at 12:28am |
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Dope beat, dope lyrics... Solid Track man. Not much else to say, something I can rock with and worth the 5 stars.
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D.Von Doom
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Posted: 12 August 2016 at 12:30am |
Thanks law lol I think you said enough |
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CSKiLLz
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Posted: 12 August 2016 at 12:38am |
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This was decent nice flow and nice beat bro. good shit
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Posted: 12 August 2016 at 12:46am |
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Dope job, great flow, lyrics, beat. Only thing I didn't care for is the "sound" of the hook at the end of verse.
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D.Von Doom
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Posted: 12 August 2016 at 12:50am |
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Yea it came out pretty low. But thanks anyway.
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Mission
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Posted: 13 August 2016 at 3:38am |
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Really liked the flow on this. That clowny line was cold. Good choice of beat, i liked this better than the original song, way better. The mixing was really good, would've liked a bit less on the low end, and maybe the vocals on -1, -2 max. They were pretty soft tho, nothing was really too harsh. I liked the hook alot. On the hook it sounds like the vocals are panned a bit too much to the left, but nothing drastic. I really liked this, great remix bro. Need details on when your new project's droppin.
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Crimson Juice
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Posted: 15 August 2016 at 12:52am |
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Damn it's official now summer is here,that's what the vibe on the
surface felt like,a nice beat with a smooth tone you had some good mic presence here (as per usual I'd say),you also had some nice subtle shots I believe,nothing to heavy,just a quick jab so to type, loved the way you stayed on beat here too,your breath control was also Ripe,as nothing seemed rushed and no sharp intakes of breath throughout,nice work or should I say Ripe work here,enjoyed the whole track..peace. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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D.Von Doom
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Posted: 15 August 2016 at 12:55am |
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Thanks crim I appreciate it.
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SELF ACTIVATE
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Posted: 15 August 2016 at 1:43am |
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Nigga this shit tough and smooth as fuck.
You already there. Somebody need to cut you a check. |
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D.Von Doom
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Posted: 15 August 2016 at 1:46am |
I appreciate that man. I'm working on some original shit I drop these when I dry spots in creativity. Thanks for the feed |
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Posted: 15 August 2016 at 1:52am |
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No doubt bro
You're talent with the music so I'm definitely gonna continue to check for you in future. |
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Posted: 15 August 2016 at 12:33pm |
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damn doom. you've come a long way my friend. mix sounded pretty good. slightly muddy, but thats life.
loved the octagon play. was slick I felt. verse was really wordplay and scheme heavy per usual. also...I dont think the hook was low per-se.. it just felt panned too much. if you didnt pan it.. then perhaps it was low..but it felt panned and a bit too wide. |
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#Bananas
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