Open Mic: Miami, FL - [KOTM]

I'm from the city that brings the Heat,/
extra gritty and never sleeps,/
women pretty down at the beach,/
keepin it thick below the Peach,/

where you can reach all your dreams,/
or get burned by get-rich schemes,/
lose it to the city like all state teams,/
or graced and praised by millions of screams,/

where mainstream and underground go hand in hand,/
like office printers wither, we always jam,/
where supply always struggles to meet demand,/
and our weed is louder than marching bands,/

where Cubans come and chose to expand,/
till Cuba changes and leaders disband,/
my family came here with returning plans,/
but at the end Miami is what made this man,/



quick refs
Miami Heat
peach state=Georgia
Florida Marlins became Miami Marlins

Written at work

This was actually a nice piece,I liked the summery bouncy feel to this,
a pacey read on the whole with a vibe thrown in for good measure,you
also had some nice content and similes within too,I also like the fact
you showed a good side to your city,then gave a greyer area where you
can get burnt if not careful,plus the structure was good which helped
the read tick along well,you've done a job here enjoyed the read.peace.

"keeping it thick below the peach" lmao! nice!