Open Mic: SELF - SERVIN'

Hit you wit them bars that'll crack ya fuckin' skull
I'm the sickest wit these lyrics wat I'm spittin' is a cold
No prescription for the dope, if you listen ya exposed
'Til ya senses overload and ya itchin' fa sum mo'
I'm as holy as the Pope when I bless ya wit a quote
I'm a legend to the cults that be reppin' the occult
Cos the messages & codes in the letters that I wrote
Are il•leg•ible to most ... but the RO-Setta Stone
Is embedded in the flow, press the pedal to the flo'
If them devils wanna go, make 'em wrestle in the snow
Melt the glaciers at the poles,'til the ocean overflows
And the ancient Eskimos ... start escapin' on the boat
That was frozen long ago ... back when Noah had to float
Yeah, you know I had to gloat, I be flexin' on them hoes
You be desperate & you don't, cos ya thirsty like a throat
In a desert full of smoke ... this election was a joke
Had us stressin' over votes now we mad at the result
Cos it's just the status quo & it's neva gone change
'Less we bang or we revolt like the Haitians on the coast
When they had to overthrow ... the French from the throne
Napoleon went broke ... lost his grip up on the yoke
I can spit that Espanõl, mixed with venom, and Creole
Santeria when I flow ... here's some Voodoo fa ya soul!
Prolly spook a fuckin' ghost just fa lookin' at me wrong!
Have 'em cookin' from the chrome when I light the microphone
I'm like Michael in the post, middle fingers to Malone
If I shoot it, I'ma swish it, I ain't never missed a goal!
My percentage is the biggest, but I split it wit my woes
All the bitches at my shows, they be drippin' wit the liquid
Have 'em slippin' on the foam... from my sexy syl•la•bles
Did I mention I'm the slickest, with this diction, on the low
Picture Christmas in the Slopes ... I'm a Yeti & I'm deadly
Cos I'm so Abominable, fuck ya Mummy she's a hoe
Break them Walls like Jericho, cos she's fuckin' wit the Bull
From the Land of Derrick Rose, I'm a Pharaoh from the 'GO
Mississippi I'm the Goat, spent some time in M.I.Yay
Got acquainted wit the coke, gettin blown in Costa Rica
Smokin' reefa by the "O", if that chica is a keepa I'ma freaka
Like J. Lo, even tho she kinda old, like a decade overdue
But that ass still phat at the age of 42 ... but that bitch is 47!!!
That's some marinated cooch! But I serenade and soothe 
Every crevice wit my flute, make me barricade the coupe
Cos they aim'n fa my roof, cos they hate to see me win
When they bettin' I'ma lose, it's a "Catch 22"
Cos they catch 22 ... bullet holes to the dome ...
From these brass .22's ... if they actin' like a fool
Crackin' atoms after school, cos them teachers
Couldn't reach me, I was Nietzsche in my youth
If the money is the ROOT... of .. every .. single .. evil
Then the Ego ... is the FRUIT, see this Eagle and salute
Put ya hands on ya heads like a military troop
Got sum literary proof ... the Messiah was inspired
By the fire I produced -- when the climate wasn't blue
But the nitrogen consumed every corner of the sky
& there was life inside the Moon ... back when Isis told Atum
That the Christ was comin' soon, I plugged a mic up to the womb
And give him life in sonic booms ... ~~KABOOM!!!!







Edited by Cuba - 15 December 2016 at 8:44pm

This is why you're one of my favourite writers on this site. Your verses are always varying in terms of approaches. I just loved the schemes you employed here, it was an incredibly smooth read. I'd love to hear a recording of this tbh. The historic references were very well incorporated. You also got me at Nietzsche. It seems simple but I think it has a great depth to it. The Atun reference was another highlight, along with your closing line. Thanks for sharing. 

swag bars with swag flow with agressive swag smacking a swag delivery. Perfect length packed with content, wordplay, laughs and other shit. This was nice my friend. The beginning started off good. And you never let go with thr delivery. This was dope brutter. Im liking this judo flow man. Its pop bam

This was a cool read with balanced rhyming troughout the verse and u said so many different things that I couldn't imagine if I was writing. I liked reading your verse it was fun to read.. keep it up

"If them devils wanna go, make 'em wrestle in the snow 
Melt the glaciers at the poles,'til the ocean overflows
And the ancient Eskimos ... start escapin' on the boat
That was frozen long ago ... back when Noah had to float"Santeria when I flow ... here's some Voodoo fa ya soul!"I'm like Michael in the post, middle fingers to Malone"All the bitches at my shows, they be drippin' wit the liquid
Have 'em slippin' on the foam... from my sexy syl•la•bles
Did I mention I'm the slickest, with this diction, on the low
Picture Christmas in the Slopes ... I'm a Yeti & I'm deadly 
Cos I'm so Abominable, fuck ya Mummy she's a hoe
Break them Walls like Jericho, cos she's fuckin' wit the Bull
From the Land of Derrick Rose, I'm a Pharaoh from the 'GO"When they bettin' I'ma lose, it's a "Catch 22"
Cos they catch 22 ... bullet holes to the dome ...
From these brass .22's ... if they actin' like a fool"

That flow was insane top to bottom straight out rhyming,lol fuck hype this was making
a statement damn,I said all along you got fire in the pit of your stomach so to speak,
and then you just dropped it on us to deal with,this was a solid display of your abilitys
as a writer, you have many strings to that bow you wield,and the diversity you bring is
always top notch too,it did in a fashion catch me off guard some,with its layered
approach and subtle plays depth you had popping here,plus coulpled with in parts
fables and facts,just made this piece stand up and out,I really got a kick out of read
here,and to be fair quite amazed at the scope and range of your work..RIPE,real Ripe and a pleasure to read..peace.

Yooooooo this shit was fire!

'm as holy as the Pope when I bless ya wit a quote
I'm a legend to the cults that be reppin' the occult
Cos the messages & codes in the letters that I wrote
Are il•leg•ible to most ... but the RO-Setta Stone
Is embedded in the flow, press the pedal to the flo'
If them devils wanna go, make 'em wrestle in the snow
Melt the glaciers at the poles,'til the ocean overflows
And the ancient Eskimos ... start escapin' on the boat
^^^^^ ..... This part here was sick! The way you flow seems to effortless and seamless throughout the entire verse. Damn

This was a long verse, but you pulled the reader in. That j lo part was some funny shit lol honestly there is way to many parts to even quote. This felt like a freestyle and not in the way of it felt rushed it just was you spitting heat and hitting on random thoughts but executing it flawlessly. Shows how well rounded of a writer you are...

Dope verse man.

@Crim: I always look forward to reading your replies. They're always thoughtful and insightful and usually give me a general idea as to the quality of a particular piece. Thus, I am stoked you enjoyed this joint so much. Your opinion is one that is greatly valued. Thanks for the read, fam.

@Intrikit: I'm glad you like this piece my dude. I'm also happy you got a kick out of some of those lines. As for the Nietzsche reference in particular...well, in the spirit of philosophical thinking I prefer to leave it open for interpretation because there are several different ways to view that lines if you're familiar with the person. Thanks for the nice breakdown.

@T3: You hit the nail on the head. It was just my version of a flex piece. Sometimes writing standard topicals gets boring and you just wanna spit some actual rap shit. So this was that. Always a pleasure to see you drop in on one of my pieces. Respect.

this was dope bro...