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    Posted: 29 December 2016 at 4:35pm

ok, this was my personal attempt at mixing using the guide that elite posted (mind you, I don't use fruityloops, so I couldn't just follow his instructions to a t either.) also, this piece is meant as a flow/scheme flex.

 
  
 
 

lyricism mastermind, I'm blastin' rhymes in half the time
my patterns like mad hatter five times as high as the highest pine
my standards are the factor these bastards hatin' on my design
the only fact that matters, I splatter matter that's God divine

 
 

ask me all your questions, I got the answers, I never lie
bring your papers later, ill write my number, my bottom line
feed my need for greed and Lord P will sign, by dotted line
you can keep the fame in the game my g, don't wanna shrine

 
 

man this flow is cancerous, its dangerous, its hazardous
after death still have my breath my pit is of the Lazarus
gunnin' for the mavericks, I'm nothing but an anarchist
colder than cadavers sit, I'm frozen in this swagger spit

 
 

got you hooked when I go cook and this drug is unanimous
writing words on cutting boards, these schemes are so damn saporous
litmus for the cannabis, I write this on this papyrus
rhythmic mathematics, like my mind came with an abacus

 
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by Lord Puente - 29 December 2016 at 4:41pm
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Beat is super ill.
Getting used to your voice Lord Puente.
Your character was held well.
I little slurry with the word enunciations but it added to the atmosphere.
Content is funny
Over dubs are tastefully done.
Very good kind a like this one
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thanks for the feed
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Beat is pretty decent actually. Def better than i expected after reading what you said.
That super multi style you employ gives your flow, a bounce, if you will. I do think it could be a bit more polished up towards the end of your bars.
As far as lyrics, its clear you care, its clear you wanna try and fit the multi scheme heavily. Just dont let it hinder you from opening up your style a bit. 


"bring your papers later, ill write my number, my bottom line
feed my need for greed and Lord P will sign, by dotted line"
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These bars right here tho, HEAT!!!!!!!
I know its only one song i heard, but this is what i can gather from this joint.
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Thanks man
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can I get a little more feedback from anyone?
this was my attempt at mixing this myself btw. any advice would be appreciated (on the flow/schemes/mixing and what not)
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Don't stop here, keep going.
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The beat definitely worked for the way you approached this. I can't say shit about mixing and all that because that ain't what I know. But lyrics and flow.. the flow I thought was solid in this, and the rhymes were very good. That beginning part did it for me. That shit was nice as hell. I'm looking forward to seeing you get more into it. You had the presence and you had some showing of attitude in it if you know what I mean. Keep it up.
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bruh, i just realized your from FL. what part man?

anyway, i know this is my second listen. im not sure why i would listen and not leave feed, but im retarded like that yo

anyway, this beat is cool. very animated, bouncy. . kinda silly. . i dig it. flow is good, pronunciation is tough to make out at times, text takes care of that though. lyrics are dope as hell actually. you have a bit of that nasal tone, i always liked that type of voice . . sort of like b-real cypress hill type ish. and its over. . a bit short, but this was a dope little kick man. i enjoyed it 
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I really appreciate the feedback Stalin and rhet, I've been working really hard on improving my delivery of lyrics and shit. Thanks guys!
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The beat is dope, I have a certain affinity for beats that have that...punch? Well whatever it is it's dope. The lyrics are on point, you really showed off your vocabulary which is refreshing. The flow was for the most part solid, maybe a part or two could be touched up such as "by dotted line" this is an opinion of course but "on the dotted line" MIGHT sound better I'd have to try to know for sure. Other than that I don't have much to say. Honestly I'm super impressed by this board...I'm on a few across the net trying to find one I like and this seems to be the spot. I digress...I hope to see more from you sooner than later. Good work.
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Flow was dope af good rhymescheme as well. You slurred some of your words but for the most part you kept the flow solid. The mixing wasn't bad but here's what it needs. Less high end, more low end, the part that makes it softer and bassier rather than harsh and bright.also add a touch of reverb to the vocals so they are as dry. if you use something like reaper, use the stereo plugin and push the audio out farther so they sit on the beat better, this was a dope verse tho. Good stuff.
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I appreciate the feedback Jerome. and yea, I feel ya, it doesn't sit right there, I hear it everytime as well.
 
and mission, I really appreciate the feedback on the mixing, as I got like no clue what im doing. I think maybe next time I need to listen to a song on my headphones that is somewhat similar in the vocals, and try to match what they do. and yea, I use reaper but no clue what im doing. the reverb especially is where im extra lost, so im pretty sure there isn't any on this.
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Hit me up on facebook @ZJ Mission, I use reaper i can give you some good tips and presets I use. I've pretty much pimped it out to where i can make any song sound good now.
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Dope shit here Lord. That flow was sick and the delivery was retro. Im feeling this shit brudda. Defo worth the listen.
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thanks dizz, glad you enjoyed it. hopefully ill be dropping hotter shit in the future!
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I love the beat man it came out great. You have some good lines and rhyme too. Overall your flow is good, there were a few parts at the end where it seemed to drop off but overall is was on point. I think the mix was good, the vocals could have been a little more forward up in the mix but im listening to it with cheap headphones right now so I could be wrong. Good Job man.


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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Point Blank Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 January 2017 at 9:03pm
Interesting... you have a decent style that could work well on audio, the rhymeschemes were pretty solid but at times on the mic you seem to be cramming one too many rhymes in in places. If the verse weren't written out in front of me I wouldn't have caught what you said at times. Having said that, the first four lines in the audio were giving me Big Pun vibes, obviously not on the same scale as him lyrically or charismatically, but you got the potential there to become a decent audio head. As a stand alone verse this wouldn't have been that great due to the lack of hard hitting or memorable content, but if you sharpen your lyrics up you could be one to keep an eye on.
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SICK MAN LOVE YOUR FLOW AND THAT BEAT IS NASTY...AND U RIPPED IT TO SHREDS
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