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S Dubb 
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 Topic: Poor Guy! Left Out?? LP dissPosted: 03 January 2017 at 12:39am |
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Bro, Your coming up short like Midget Olympics...
Your more pussy then Livin' wit' Ten Chicks... You reply to a diss that don't even Mention your Name... Okay, it's simple really... L.P, Listen, your LAME... Split this Weakling in Two! Watch as blood Leaking out You... The only time you can battle is if we are Speaking of Food...(mostly does food battles) Fat Ass! L.P lackin' like emcee's with Wack Raps... Replaying a cd the only time L.P Track Laps... Jenny Craig? Nutri-system? or Diet Pills? Fat camp losing meal time, the only way he'd know how a Riot Feels!!! I'll Hurt this Whore! STD spits is how his Words get Sores...(Herpies on his lips) 12 is enough because this cheap slut isn't Worth Anymore.....
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Posted: 03 January 2017 at 1:16am |
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i like it ,aggressive in yo face facts with flow that stings
Fat Ass! L.P lackin' like emcee's with Wack Raps... Replaying a cd the only time L.P Track Laps... that was nice^^
Edited by Slip - 03 January 2017 at 1:22am |
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See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego
inner demon violent beast so warn the mother fucking people |
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Posted: 03 January 2017 at 8:54pm |
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Thanks for the feed bro, anyone else?
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Posted: 03 January 2017 at 9:25pm |
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Yeah I'll jump on this one
And I won't Slip up on the constructive side either Cos impartial honest feedback it's good for us all 1. Straight up generic with a played out feel overall 2.So LP Lame ...... Because you said so?, In a Lame kind of way! = What 3. I really shouldn't be helpful here considering our 1st round Royale match that I have to find time to write for your ridiculous ass for, Not to mention your ridiculous OM calling me out from so far below..Plus I only got 3 hours to get my Topic in or Cuba gone hit me with the User Twist.....See what I mean you cunt, plus I ain't had dinner yet... you fucker But I wanna help you so back to number 3. It was shit! 4. Obviously played, with the added insult to the reader that it didn't even have an angle 5.Oh just stop already this has nothing 6.Yes you are right here at least 12 is fucking enough, Nathan's again I tell you this to help you brother Nothing more Keep on |
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Posted: 03 January 2017 at 9:34pm |
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Well, spume is right
Ya know this felt kinda rushed and generic, don't think I'll be breaking down a verse which you yourself didn't pay much time to! Compared to that initial diss of yours this was nothing. You shouldn't be posting half assed shit just for the sake of it! Having said that get rid of those dots, makes your verse look ridiculous. Spume has already said pretty much everything else. Honestly bro you have written better so this was a let down. |
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Posted: 03 January 2017 at 10:24pm |
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^^Agree with both spume and axy, this was a quick key, nothing more...... The basis of these past open mics were simply to get activity going on this site....
spume = a raw text battler and a well deserved win to become champ L.P = Only sent this because you dropped one at AE Axy = Never had any beef, never even had a conflict wit' ya Beans = Fun
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