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Blood Eclipse
Groupie Joined: 21 April 2017 Location: South Africa Status: Offline Points: 58 Crew: Pending Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-4-0 Form: LLLL |
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Posted: 24 April 2017 at 5:08pm |
It's time for a heat attack, what are the odds you'll expand./
Psycho! I will freeze the essence!/ I will go to extreme and pleasant degrees to seize this peasants./ Where are the heavyweights? I see nothing but steak and tendons, that could be seen and mentioned in the meat section, of a grocery store./ Opposing me more? We will see a change in scene showing me kicking you near the ovaries of your whore./ Overly formed poetry, to measures of death, and sorcery,/ Literally I morbidly stomp these rotten heads to forty pieces accordingly./ Eclipse is absorbing heat! The air balloon ain't in the sky, I launch rockets higher than the layers astronauts can find/ Nobody can catch the serrated edge from my razor mind./ I will Invade the times, shorten your shot clock to a violation./ Your time has flown faster from a steroid penetration,/ Causing more inflation making your frame claim statements./ I swear your face is disgraced to say that your shirts are too tight to make it./ In the tension we, can bring the heat, so I could leave you with more shells than Venice Beach,/ Where the heat is unbearable, and God's appeal lacks./ The heat leaves you with more welts like beats from hot wheels tracks./ I shoot dopies harder than addicts, But not as a Serum, B,/ Then upon relapse, I release when crossing swords with Ron Jesremy./ This Eclipse a better parody, Every crime act involving me ain't just a rumour./ My birth was Devil's sense of humour/ Giving your bitches tumours for tits, which explains the lack of nipples,/ And the distance between my D and these whores tits, lesser than an inch, I get em sagging like soggy ripples./ I will cripple this nipsey hustles, you couldn't hustle what your nips see./ Your nips see darkness. no hustle where your nips be./ I'll form more molecular heat waves, when we change from mediation./ I'll start my levitation then bring pain like planetary Devastation./ I'll wreak havoc upon your village, then pillage your family,/ Tragically having thee's mom and dad yelling non- ecstatically,/ Gradually feeling heat casually,/ Burning like the castles we had to burn down with casualties./ |
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Sammy
Site Moderator Beacon of Light Joined: 24 October 2015 Status: Offline Points: 2223 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-1 Form: LNW |
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hey bro only cuz ur new and all and u seem like a stand up dude but, yeah usually ur drops/feed ratio should be about 1/3. you've dropped like 3 verses already but only fed once which is the complete opposite lol. its just a common courtesy to extend feed to others, nah mean? that way they can do the same for you. This piece will likely be sitting at zero feed unfortunately. and its a pretty good verse too.
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Blood Eclipse
Groupie Joined: 21 April 2017 Location: South Africa Status: Offline Points: 58 Crew: Pending Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-4-0 Form: LLLL |
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I'm no really sure if I get what you mean there. . But word up bro
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Endeavor
Senior Moderator Wiggle wiggle said the bun that jiggle Joined: 03 April 2009 Location: Your kitchen Status: Offline Points: 10000102 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-4-0 Form: WWLWLW |
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What's he's saying is to give people feedback in order to receive feedback. It's not rocket science.
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#Bananas
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Neek
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feeding flames sounds like combustion to me. |
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#Bananas
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Blood Eclipse
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Ooh!!! Ayt..I get it now
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