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See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego
inner demon violent beast so
warn the mother fucking people
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[URL=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=45rk61hZHHI]T.R.T.V[\URL]
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inner demon violent beast so
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slip, tube is the code, not url bro. and it doesnt need the equal sign, just the open and close brackets.


as far as the verse, I liked it. im not sure who this dragon character is, but the style was fresh.

dope to see you dropping bro.
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Form: LLLWLW 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Slip Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 May 2017 at 3:00am
The Dragon is day dizzles character in the illad series it was a verse I wrote for the topical twist against sammy
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Dopeness. This had good flow and ill lyrics. Sounded like some live battle rap shit I would not want to be on the receiving end of. I would love to hear what you sound like on a beat, but for an a capella, All I felt like this needed was a bit more space to let your words breathe. The rhymes and punches come so quick it's hard to keep up a bit.
Insert something rappy here
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This was entertaining to watch and listen to... Like Jehu said, in parts it was a bit hard to keep up with at times, and the delivery would have been great if the pace was a bit smoother and if you allowed some room for each bar to digest in to the listener, but you delivered this drop in a cool way despite that and I got a nice vibe from it... Keep it up.
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Form: LLLWLW 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Slip Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 May 2017 at 1:26am
Appreciate the feed back I'll try and slow the next one down a little
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uH -- Kool for an off the top, but eh- type of thing enjoyed when with in the moment.

(feel no way as I tell you I'm not with it)

Not much to say about this
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Form: WL 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote SELF ACTIVATE Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 May 2017 at 3:02am
Imagery. Crazy
Scheme. Liquid
Flow. Nice
Delivery. Animated/entertaining   

Damn, bro you gave us bars and a concert. I like how your lyrics matched your facial expressions. The fact we could see just how much you enjoyed spitting what you wrote brought even more life to your story.

Yeah, this was pretty dope. It would be even doper with a beat tho. However, sometimes spitting a capella and still being able to captivate an audience with your presentation, while not having the luxury of masking any flaws within the mix of an instrumental is pretty impressive. Props. This was pure theatre.
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