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    Posted: 27 May 2017 at 11:43pm


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(I)Fuck with your soul like Ether
(Will)You a BITCH so it's SHETHER
(Not)No you can't behead me
(Lose)I'll prove you loss already

Whose the loser behind the computer up to mischief 
calling doom ghetto when you can't afford equipment 
Fuck trizz and those little piss poor diss poems
Had Borrow punches from beans for you to get going 

You froze in your moments and had the nerve 2 streak diss
Knowing you flinch and dip at the thought of pinkslips 
A Bitch, you be acting like a female dog 
Won't key a single bar if neek is involved

Speaking of pinkslips you openly ran from SwordedStylez
First he sonned then killed you like an aborted child
You wasn't important then...you're not important now

Hook

 Nothing's forgiven never look to kids for wisdom
Cuz when shit pop they flip-flop like mission
Im gunning for respect when im bussing hit the deck
Slap fire out a sample when going at ya neck

So Fuck what trizz say trizz gay with no lee way
Even If i stabbed a back still wouldnt wanna betray

You a switch hitter lying about ya figures 
Similar to bitches posing in instagram pictures 

How you dissing the god who excutes you are not the truth
Surrounded by a fire squad the only way   trizz in a booth

Reload the pen and shoot.... i trigger treys when its crunchtime
No wonder dudes a fruit cuz punch runs in his bloodline


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 how you diss cuba and then have him come to ya aid
Cuz you couldn't handle personals using ya real name
You a bench player shouting at a hall of famer
knowing you cant win but hoping to score a lay up
But i won't spot you infrared dot you those disses are not you

I offer simple salvation, put it to his temple tell em trump it like he miles davis
Delete your avi ruff riding aint your nature
Why he going out his way to disgrace jada

I offer you this casket in the form of a favor
6 figures and still coming up short on paper

I got stronger over time you can say what you like 
In 2013 you was getting chased off the site
Acting like you all tight when you the type to type

Negro please... you no mustache having with whiskers like a rat compared to beans you wack

Arthur asked you about orion and then you quit the flexing
How you pressed over the net tryna duck the question


Yo 

Im kicking that shit that you need to learn though 
That ether the shit that make ya soul burn slow

Get off that ego trip you need to check the symptom list
gotta be pissing fire as much as dizzles on ya dick 


Plus rutter killed you on your own shit
You a text riding faggot you love the attention
Lions den ran you niggas thats a fact not opinion 


Empire click get gunned up and clapped quick
Trizzy......tre get gunned up and clapped quick
Anybody who jumps in get gunned up and clapped quick

From looking at shit talking to looking like shit walking 
Fuck tre he can rest in peace after i spit in his coffin

EXPO:
"No You Can't wait behead"-He named his "The Beheading of Zin)
Common knowledge he's known for disappearing when it gets real I.E.:SwordedStylez and Orion


Edited by D.Von Doom - 28 May 2017 at 12:38am
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Bruh, this is OD my nigga. Murder, I wish the vocals had been a little louder tho. My only complaint, I love the line when you played the original Nas lyrics behind your own. "COMPARED TO BEANS YOU WACK" Lmfao, smh. I'm fucking dead. I fucks with it bruh. You know how I feel about text to audio. Went back and forth a lot and in my opinion they will never balance out. A well dropped audio will crush a text verse. This is a fucking fire ass audio drop. Text just won't cut it. You make a nigga wanna run that Den back. 
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Thanks @Elite and @Ch3kk...that bitch is dead
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Hey D,

so I made the choice to listen to the verse without the lyrics because I believe you should be able to listen to an audio and understand it without a sheet to read off of. First off you got a real nice voice and feel on this beat dude, very nice flow and comfort here. I found early in the recording I couldn't make out all the words you were saying but I mean it was minor. Overall I like the punches and the length, most people are struggling to write a 16 and you are dropping a full track. Overall I dig it, nice to see an audio diss as well instead of a text response.


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well bro, I have great news and better news..

the great news: this shit was dope. I loved the 90% factual stats.. that shit was beyond real. the be tre line was hard and the short on paper was grande fuego. nail in the coffin most definitely. but im just a hater so...



better news: he wont be blowing up your inbox begging you to body somebody at bloodlines. youre officially on the cant play in his sandbox list.

I dunno why you chose to use the worst beat ever created, but salute for making it work lol.


this is the part where Michael Buffer hollers and still.
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Originally posted by Neek Neek wrote:

well bro, I have great news and better news..

the great news: this shit was dope. I loved the 90% factual stats.. that shit was beyond real. the be tre line was hard and the short on paper was grande fuego. nail in the coffin most definitely. but im just a hater so...



better news: he wont be blowing up your inbox begging you to body somebody at bloodlines. youre officially on the cant play in his sandbox list.

I dunno why you chose to use the worst beat ever created, but salute for making it work lol.


this is the part where Michael Buffer hollers and still.

LMFAO Yea it was hard to work with the beat but Nas gave the effect i was going for. AND FUCK BLOODLINES! I only care about the ch3kk and slip match. Appreciate the feed bro
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Speaking of pinkslips you openly ran from SwordedStylez
First he sonned then killed you like an aborted child

how you diss cuba and then have him come to ya aid
Cuz you couldn't handle personals using ya real name

Those lines were killer man..

Even If i stabbed a back still wouldnt wanna betray

I loved the wordplay right there..


Overall dope diss, I think the vocal could've been adjusted more, that's a tough beat to match with though. But at times the beat overpowered the voice. I'm just a text head though, so I can't speak too much on that.
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Originally posted by Stalin Stalin wrote:

Speaking of pinkslips you openly ran from SwordedStylez
First he sonned then killed you like an aborted child

how you diss cuba and then have him come to ya aid
Cuz you couldn't handle personals using ya real name

Those lines were killer man..

Even If i stabbed a back still wouldnt wanna betray

I loved the wordplay right there..


Overall dope diss, I think the vocal could've been adjusted more, that's a tough beat to match with though. But at times the beat overpowered the voice. I'm just a text head though, so I can't speak too much on that.

I appreciate that Stalin and yea I'm not quite an expert at mixing yet but the beat was pretty difficult to tame. got it done though
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This was cool..

But in sheer desperation and panic you dusted off the takeover beat for help?



...and the words?



...ok...
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To the last line dope. Really liked how you played with Nas homages throughout without biting. Very well done.
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Damn the dead can still speak??? And also dumbass its ether not the takeover beat smh.
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Originally posted by Cheeseburger Eddie Cheeseburger Eddie wrote:

To the last line dope. Really liked how you played with Nas homages throughout without biting. Very well done.


Thanks cheese
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Originally posted by Neek Neek wrote:



I dunno why you chose to use the worst beat ever created, but salute for making it work lol.


I hated when Nas used it, I hated when Remy used it, and I hate that this terrible beat still exists. But you killed this. As far as the actual beef, I'm


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In my opinion this was fucking pretty hard.  Not just the personal lyrics but the flow you connect to the ether beat.  I mean you pretty much executed it perfectly except for a few long bars..  The compared to beans ya whack voice over was fucking clever.  Really nice on that one.  I mean shit this was mean.  your delivery and flow was dope.  This was a real dope audio diss.  D Von good shit.  

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Fuck trizz and those little piss poor diss poems
Had Borrow punches from beans for you to get going 




this is a fake personal... Anyways i fuck with the ether beat. deff a hard beef beat. Thought the rest of your verse was cool. some played personals on him some cool angles. that aborted child joint was hard. i fuck with the betrey shit to. anyway props
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Originally posted by Beans Beans wrote:

<div style="text-align: center;">Fuck trizz and those little piss poor diss poems<div style="text-align: center;">Had Borrow punches from beans for you to get going <div style="text-align: center;">
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<div style="text-align: center;">this is a fake personal... Anyways i fuck with the ether beat. deff a hard beef beat. Thought the rest of your verse was cool. some played personals on him some cool angles. that aborted child joint was hard. i fuck with the betrey shit to. anyway props


That's your boy and he died so i expect you to cape for him so i won't trip lol appreciate the feed
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dope von...this had some nice personals and hits in here...didnt listen to the track but i know how the instrumental goes so i was able to still catch the flow of it. Nice response to trizz diss as well. betray line was flames...all in all good diss
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