Audio Mic: DTK Lyrical Report Finished

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Finished this track and I beilieve its my best yet, obviously its not perfect but large steps are being taken in the right direction. Any and all feed is appreciated as it seems hard to come by nowadays

Cheers

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DressToKill Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote DressToKill Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: DTK Lyrical Report Finished Posted: 28 May 2017 at 12:32am
	https://soundcloud.com/user-206308494/dtk-lyrical-report Finished this track and I beilieve its my best yet, obviously its not perfect but large steps are being taken in the right direction. Any and all feed is appreciated as it seems hard to come by nowadays Cheers
	The original comeback kid

Cheeseburger Eddie Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 08 February 2014 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 499 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-0 Form: WL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Cheeseburger Eddie Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 28 May 2017 at 2:56am
	Delivery was very clear and your flow was solid through out. You finished very strong and lyrically your multis, vocab and themes were hitting strong. A few lines felt more wordy than smooth especially in the hook around 1:04, and early it felt a bit swingy in the flow but you kicked out of that pretty quick so I'll write that off as a choice I felt didn't work than a critique. Otherwise I loved everything. Other than the mixing. That didn't work for me, too harsh and filtered(?). Really good drop. I agree, it was a huge step forward in delivery, well done. I can tell you took the takes and reps it deserved.

King Jehu Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote King Jehu Report Post Likes(1) Quote Reply Posted: 28 May 2017 at 5:46am
	Your flow matched the old school beat well, and the hook was perfect for this type of beat. Took it back to the 90s. Wish you didn't EQ the highs up so much. Every S sounds like a stab in the eardrums at high volumes. The multis starting at 1:37 were incredible. Hook should be a little louder. Large steps being taken into the right direction indeed.
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DressToKill Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote DressToKill Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 28 May 2017 at 11:04am
	I literally never edited this track at all. Cubase has a "hip hop" pre set that I use because I have no idea how to edit yet. I've gotta sit down and learn the software more Thank you both
	The original comeback kid

Crimson Juice Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Crimson Juice Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 28 May 2017 at 9:01pm
	Yep i liked it,your vibe/tone had a summery bounce attached to it and your delivery/ presence was good,i really do like to hear scratching on a beat so that worked for me,and the piano had a surprise sound running throughout this track which i also liked,your contents were nice,your multi's/same sounding vowels was a plus in the flow department also,and in truth the beat did lack bass,but it didn't hamper the track overall,even your similes were solid,yeah good work enjoyed this..peace.
	"You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance".

DressToKill Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote DressToKill Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 29 May 2017 at 1:38am
	Thanks a lot Crim, good looks dude
	The original comeback kid