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I see you....


Most concepts and angles you just used in your diss came from biting those 3 verses towards me...

Then in sheer panic and desperation you dust off the most classic diss track for help....and dick ride all the words? Even the title you picked wasn't original, biting the bridge is over.


You uncreative piece of shit.....



Yo..


My last diss buried you, he couldn't have rebound worse...
Body Doom again? Shit, I'll need to dig'em outta the ground first!
This clowns words frail, ur shots? Bitch u can't gun...
U stole all my opponents attacks, so I'll Finish Him like Shang Tsung!
How come u Shadowboxing? Landing punches is essential....
u also took Nas classic beat, fitting all I felt was the instrumental!!
Doom's bars be gentle, a tough track yet fragile words coming...
Only time ur hands land on Tre, ... is repeatily hitting the search button!!
What's coming? Hit'em Up track with Orion's verse? Go look back bitch...
Ur average with all replies given were fill-in-the-blanks n ad-libs!!
We all laughed kid, when 2013 verses u searched, ...that's tight pal...
But my shits more relevant when i'm actually bodying you RIGHT NOW!!
Is it Ether ......"type of shit to make your soul burn slow"...?
I think it's the type of diss you bit concepts and none of it you wrote!
Use "Compared to Beans you wack" pharse? That line seemed major...
To bad but I've already knocked out Beans ...........I'm a Dreamchaser!!
you catching feelings Von? I thought text didn't amount to shit...
2 replies in got D sweating more then Ch3kk hyped about a Slip!
Zero booked shows? No label interest ....so LA he's still around...
When you lack the "It" factor, proving its always easy to kill a Clown!
What I've found is you've got no real music career, he doesn't sell...
Fuck radio play, Doom couldn't put a Wave over LA if it was 2012!!
Ur punches wasn't felt!! Tre never scared to bury his rivals...
This your "Highlights Of A Downfall" without Zin mixtape titles!
I'll have to address ur false auto ratings too, ...Doom I'm daring ya...
Ur audios hide behind a fake Star Shield more the Captain America!!
Starting beef with text? Crossing over I'll make ur head hurt..
At the end of this verse, got'em Crossing Over next with John Edwards!!
Von death lurks, the Reaper says 'u lost this beef Doom, let it go'...
By the way one last message, tell a few of my dead relatives I said hello!!





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Nice quick responce here. Thought everything was worded smooth. deff some nice personals. the knocked out beans joint made me think about the tag tourney :)... anyways this was deff hard with those personals screen shot.

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Lol thanks bro, you know its all good..

But my reference is to our only head to head battle my friend.

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you and von are making this beef very interesting for the readers/listeners...this was a good and timely response to von...the images definitely helped with your personals here and you had some good punches too....fucks with the dreamchasers line. all in all, this was a nice response diss 
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The images really went with the verse and nailed the personals.

My last diss buried you, he couldn't have rebound worse...
Body Doom again? Shit, I'll need to dig'em outta the ground first!
This clowns words frail, ur shots? Bitch u can't gun...
U stole all my opponents attacks, so I'll Finish Him like Shang Tsung!"----Damn!  MK reference that hit hard.   Nice fucking personal.  Very clever. shit was insane. 

"  Is it Ether ......"type of shit to make your soul burn slow"...?
I think it's the type of diss you bit concepts and none of it you wrote---this really was a hard fucking personal punch.  This was hard hitting.

Ur punches wasn't felt!! Tre never scared to bury his rivals...
This your "Highlights Of A Downfall" without Zin mixtape titles!
I'll have to address ur false auto ratings too, ...Doom I'm daring ya...
Ur audios hide behind a fake Star Shield more the Captain America!!
Starting beef with text? Crossing over I'll make ur head hurt..
At the end of this verse, got'em Crossing Over next with John Edwards!!
Von death lurks, the Reaper says 'u lost this beef Doom, let it go'...
By the way one last message, tell a few of my dead relatives I said hello!! ----the captain America could have been worded better I wasn't really feeling that.   but these lines I quoted were fucking dope.  The whole John Edwards shit was a very nice play. 

This was fucking strong  Trizzy.  Punch wise I give you the edge.  When it comes to personals I mean your past is your past.   Shit is always going to be brought up no matter what.   It's about how the opponent flips it is what really matters.  Doom went searching for previous shit.   I find nothing wrong with that.  I'll search for my opponents shit all day if I have to.  BUT...When I find what I'm looking for I will throw my own spin on it.   I think you may have exceeded that more than Doom.   Then again its audio vs text....Either way this diss was fire...You came back quick and you came back hard.   

I'm loving this back and forth...

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Nice counter verse indeed, as said the images put his attacks in another context. As for the verse, per usual you bring a steady mix of tricks, punches, slaps, comic relifef, etc.  Overall pretty dope tho

Is it Ether ......"type of shit to make your soul burn slow"...?
I think it's the type of diss you bit concepts and none of it you wrote!
Use "Compared to Beans you wack" pharse? That line seemed major...
To bad but I've already knocked out Beans ...........I'm a Dreamchaser!!

Was probably the hardest hitters

Anyways, nice dispute you going tho I see no clear winner.. yet.


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Yo tre
Body Doom again? Shit, I'll need to dig'em outta the ground first!
That punchline was fresh as fuck
And then that hittin the search button play
Was another solid hit
And have em sweating like check lmfao
A lot of good plays here but people like doom who have no respect for text
Will never admit it's good , but this was aight bro
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inner demon violent beast so
warn the mother fucking people
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Thanks for the feed fellas... Glad you were feeling it.
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You are one punchy cunt nugget bruh. That opener was dope. One thing you have is word placement and setups. Your punches are damn near perfect because how generic and in your face you setup your bars. This shit seems easy to you and no doubt, you know how to piss alot of the right people off. Difference between you and some others is you bite back regardless. Dope shit here. You keep your bars relevant.

you catching feelings Von? I thought text didn't amount to shit...
2 replies in got D sweating more then Ch3kk hyped about a Slip!
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Thanks Diz..

This was the grave digger.

After I posted this verse in response Doom posted up that stupid thread, then deleted it, cuz he looked like a moron and didn't post a verse... I knew it was over for him....









...but I wish a Doom woooooooooould.....





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Lol funny how doom claims he clearly won
While also claiming he never read this I was enjoying the back a forth
But I guess you got the last word in
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Originally posted by Slip Slip wrote:

Lol funny how doom claims he clearly won
While also claiming he never read this I was enjoying the back a forth
But I guess you got the last word in



Funny shit..

You get the last word in, when you close the casket on a beef.
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DeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDead

...d-i-s-r-e-s-p-e-c-t-f-u-l...


...he need some milk...

The punches landed and they landed hard as fuck. Idk how I feel about the whole text vs audio thing though. I guess I am more of a traditionalist that one person should either go audio or come to text to settle it. And with that I lean towards handling it via audio, however, text is the easiest route. Reason being is, for most, audio is the next natural step in progression and the "end all be all" when it comes to this. Some people don't want that and just want to write. I see both sides. Getting into you diss you really did not stop. It was one of the best overall disses through and through I've read on the site since I have been here. Kudos man.. you handled yours.
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Originally posted by iLL ScriptureZ iLL ScriptureZ wrote:

DeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDeadDead

...d-i-s-r-e-s-p-e-c-t-f-u-l...


...he need some milk...

The punches landed and they landed hard as fuck. Idk how I feel about the whole text vs audio thing though. I guess I am more of a traditionalist that one person should either go audio or come to text to settle it. And with that I lean towards handling it via audio, however, text is the easiest route. Reason being is, for most, audio is the next natural step in progression and the "end all be all" when it comes to this. Some people don't want that and just want to write. I see both sides. Getting into you diss you really did not stop. It was one of the best overall disses through and through I've read on the site since I have been here. Kudos man.. you handled yours.



Best diss you've read on the site, thanks man. Appreciate that..

I feel what you're saying iLL. I couldn't give two shits about him and his nonexistent music career. I really couldn't careless. So he disses me completely unprovoked, which is odd for an audio champ to do, but hey I welcome any beef. So I bodied him. Period.


Doom's been lookin real suspect after this...
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Originally posted by Trizzy Tre Trizzy Tre wrote:

Doom posted up that stupid thread, then deleted it, cuz he looked like a moron and didn't post a verse... I knew it was over for him....


If this is referencing the la depreciation thread, then it ain't on doom at all. I have an explanation for that.
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As far as the verse, the flow, rhymes and punchlines were consistent.

Loved the opening bar and you kept it going from there. I liked the search button, check hyped, and 2012 lines especially.. overall a nice reply.

Would like to see some more of these verses between the 2
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I could have sworn I had commented on this already! This was dope trizz, y'all had a good little exchange and you didn't miss a step. Punchline wise, you brought the bars. Solid solid job on this. You had nice setups and punches throughout the piece with minimal filler. Nicely done. I would have liked to see a little more back and forth between you too, but this drop served its purpose. Good job
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Originally posted by Lord Puente Lord Puente wrote:

I could have sworn I had commented on this already! This was dope trizz, y'all had a good little exchange and you didn't miss a step. Punchline wise, you brought the bars. Solid solid job on this. You had nice setups and punches throughout the piece with minimal filler. Nicely done. I would have liked to see a little more back and forth between you too, but this drop served its purpose. Good job


Thanks for the feed Stal and LP...

As for more back and forth between me and him, I'm ready if he gets the courage. But its impossible for Doom to respond when he's buried 6 feet deep...
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Quote U stole all my opponents attacks, so I'll Finish Him like Shang Tsung!


Lol...I was just playing this. Clever punch.

Quote How come u Shadowboxing? Landing punches is essential....
u also took Nas classic beat, fitting all I felt was the instrumental!!
Doom's bars be gentle, a tough track yet fragile words coming...
Only time ur hands land on Tre, ... is repeatily hitting the search button!!


Nice boxing/fighting scheme. I'm digging the wording and your setups.

Quote Is it Ether ......"type of shit to make your soul burn slow"...?
I think it's the type of diss you bit concepts and none of it you wrote!
Use "Compared to Beans you wack" pharse? That line seemed major...
To bad but I've already knocked out Beans ...........I'm a Dreamchaser!!


Damn, Tre. You came for blood. The only thing that would have made that punch doper than it already is .. is if you would have dropped it a few months back. Still relevant and still dope nonetheless. Props!

Quote When you lack the "It" factor, proving its always easy to kill a Clown!


That was decent and pretty clever. Also, given the recent IT reboot fairly relevant.

Quote What I've found is you've got no real music career, he doesn't sell...
Fuck radio play, Doom couldn't put a Wave over LA if it was 2012!!


That was hard as fuck! Made me chuckle a bit.

Quote Von death lurks, the Reaper says 'u lost this beef Doom, let it go'...
By the way one last message, tell a few of my dead relatives I said hello!!


Lol...beast.

All in all, this was nasty bro and hit on all cylinders. Be it punches, personals, or pure mechanics. You did your thing bro. I fucks with this.

Peace...
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Thanks for the extensive breakdown Self...much appreciated..
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