Open Mic: D.von. DUMB

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    Posted: 14 July 2017 at 5:55am
Hey D.von your written's are wack you'd be better
Off taken a few steeps back. In fact rewind your
Whole life homie and jump up into that womb and
Stay cozy.
You act like a tough guy well show me cause all
I see is a fucking bully. Your an internet troll
Instead of breaking bread you eat the shit hole.
Was it yummy?
Are you full ya need to wipe your face Them
doodoo stains is outta control.      
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....but why even post this? I'm not being rude just being brutally honest. There's no possible way you wrote this and thought it was a good idea to drop this. Especially against a respect audio head on this site. 

C'mon man.
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Hahaha! Ur lucky doom probably don't even noticed you haha. Hi-Z I feel like I've read ur stuff before. This was pretty bad bro. I mean..."yummy"??? Worrrddd???


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Caption: Tre confused when he didn't get the DQ win

Definitely a head scratcher as to why you even dropped this. Aside from the fact that the technical aspect is poor and there are no real shots towards D.Von in this. What reason did you have to go after him the first place? 

I see you drop a ton of OMs from time to time so just keep dropping and improving the craft. I just don't think this was necessary to drop for both the reasoning and the quality of it. 
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