Open Mic: Violence In Review ft. Sammy

Oh my, I think I actually caught a mistake from you SELF. 

It's not everyday u get feedback's from Law, ha! Thanks bro.

Self ur like the king of presentation bro! Squad up!

Thesis
inquiring minds and theory, have tried to define it
merely a state of design? a series of hatred devised?
or clearly a fate; a divine inquiry instated by higher spirits
lets take what we find. share it then shape it.
in time maybe we’ll gain a concise bearing
my take on this vice....ready???

The Mechanic of Violence
It starts with a spark..dark matter, potential energy
gathering friction. speed increases volt intensity
forcing density to burst to a fine incandescent;
A design so effective, refining efforts coursed in history
fuels from fossils form an industry born of synergy
depleting resources Pyrrhic war lost in victory
heat source converted. bursting. do we call it disaster?
as the engine roars, movement starts.. exhausting the matter

CHAOS AND VIOLENCE ARE THE FUNDEMNETAL BUILDING BLOCKS OF LIFE. We
FIGHT TO SURVIVE AND LEARN FROM CHAOS

A History of Violence
It starts with a spark...dark matter, potential energy
“let there be light!” VIOLENT discharge; celestial symphony
matters collide, space and time came to existence
quantum mechanic governs Yahweh's insane exposition
time passed....
and there came a condition
survival of fittest - became a race a consistent display of division
a game a decision of change so for instance
we’ll take what is given, let’s say...the election...
as ideas are...
grade and dissected, displayed for rejection
on stage and on network engaging in conflicting ways and perspective
abate or accept it’s the way we elect AND...
this is the ways that was set...now do we call it disaster?
perhaps a proper analytic before exhausting the matter...

Without violence, we would get complacent and innovation would have
never happened. The potential of threat of violence is what usually
causes innovation. Its a need

Necessary Violence?
There’s a method for progress,
call it necessary contest
history dictates that for every movement there’s conflict
just as fuel mixed with spark allow for movements of cars
opposing passionate views clash are rudiment, yall
whether political landscape or silence working of time...
It all starts with a spark as violence works her design



You are fucking nasty Sammy. The way you set this up was some creative shit.
It came off like spoken word and i dug the fuck outta it. You know were you stand
on a technical level. Now you show your a powerhouse with setting up gangsta ass
topicals. Thug life to you




Is violence necessary
or just a lack of enlightenment?
Does it come from within
or from a tragic environment?

Maybe it's passion
that incites and inspires it
an appetite of entitlement
that can spread like a virus when
the desires of men
ignite and catch fire
in a climate of sin.
"But why does violence exist?"
Well, the science is this,
It's a glitch in our system
no one is trying to fix!
"I won't deny that it is".
Then close your eyes and pretend
That it's an ironclad fist
that slowly tightens its grip

Violence is alot like masturbation. Sometimes we need to blow off steam or
we might off ourselves.

Around the throat of the weak
and those that meekly resist!
See our species is tempted
by primordial lust.
Instinctively seeking
to destroy and corrupt.
Just think of extinction
and all the creatures we've crushed
under the weight of our sooolesss
without an inkling of what ...

Violence isnt what corrupts. The lack of violence and chaos corrupts. If
you can normalize corruption. you lack the threat of violence and chaos



we've have done to the planet
-- such irreversible damage.
"Is all humanity cursed?"
Not if a person has chances.
If your circuits are jammed
we can rework the mechanics.
Don't be a merchant of death
or a murderous bandit.
Cos instead of more blood
let's spills some hurt on the canvas.
I see the Earth as our campus,
but we're not learning the answers.
So concerned with the cancer
we stopped researching the grander ...
truth that's involved,
tho we'll closely examine
the phantom roots of its cause.

The world is in the shape that its in because of comformity. Without
the need for change and the want, we will keep spiraling outta control.
We need more revolutions of violence and chaos to spur up industry and
innovation



Due to Newtonian Law
the fruit doesn't fall
too far from its tree ...
à la Adam & Eve
in the Garden of Eden.
Symbolically speaking,
we think that a piece
Of the apple was evil
and she swallowed its seed
then gave birth to a demon
-- the Serpent offspring
of murder and treason!
We've nurtured this thesis
for 1000s of seasons
and tho its unfounded
and cloudy in reason
The Crown & our leaders
still count on us sheeple
to deeply believe it!
Cos freedom ain't free
unless people are bleeding!
The secret of kingdoms
-- deceitful yet genius!
If Jesus came back
we'd beat em and feed em

Adam and Eve created life through their chaotic actions. If that wigga
didnt eat that damn apple. we wouldnt be here man. Fuck


To weasels and rats!
A feasible act
if you read of our past
Like Medieval France
or Feudal Japan
or the Spanish Armada
That crossed the Atlantic
to rule the "new land"
through armies infected.
That's hardly a lesson
on the carnage we've caused,
We've sharpered our weapons
and nawled off our claws,
barbaric in essence,
we're less than a dog
Yet, think that we're better ...
"Til dolphins evole
and make us their pets
for all of our flaws!"
No mazel tov ya’ll!

Evolution is the direct result of violence and the fight for survival. May
the strongest wigga pass his genes.

We did not accomplished
a semblance of peace
in the Age of Pisces,
we swam the high seas
full of sodium chloride
and salty sardines,
which affected our vision
of who we could be,
thus ignorance & violence
became our I.D.
But the time of Aquarius
has finally arrived
and if violence continues
Homo-Sapien dies

Sincerely,
The Tribal
Dystopia
Of
Tomorrow's
America




Most peaceful time in the earths history and this giph shows what happens
when we are happy with comformity.




OVERALL - You guys are fucking pyscho with this. Sammy came in with that spoken word-esque drop and got people thinking. Classic writing scheme and structure. Self comes out with a nuclear and shows us his short bar skill. Fuck sake. Content wise, im loving this type of shit. this is right up my alley. I love pieces where it has a purpose. That purpose is to promote an idea. DOPE SHIT PEOPLE

great presentation Self. Liked how the bars were broke down so the audience hangs on every line. Good ish.

Munday i will further my thought guys. Giggity

Sammy.

Thesis
inquiring minds and theory, have tried to define it
merely a state of design? a series of hatred devised?
or clearly a fate; a divine inquiry instated by higher spirits
lets take what we find. share it then shape it.
in time maybe we’ll gain a concise bearing
my take on this vice....ready???

(I loved the build up here,gave this verse of your an added layer via anticipation, plus
with the provoking questions I had a feel something (pardon the pun) cosmic was on
the horizon)

The Mechanic of Violence
It starts with a spark..dark matter, potential energy
gathering friction. speed increases volt intensity
forcing density to burst to a fine incandescent;
A design so effective, refining efforts coursed in history
fuels from fossils form an industry born of synergy
depleting resources Pyrrhic war lost in victory
heat source converted. bursting. do we call it disaster?
as the engine roars, movement starts.. exhausting the matter

(I'd love to share my thoughts on the creation of all things,and starting with the
universe's birth has to be the main focal point like here, you did well explaining this
really,it gave this segment an epic vibe/feel, (and just a quick run through I liked
to express,that the fabric of space is in sheets that vibrate and ripples,when 2 sheets
touch via the rippling event at different points an unbelievable amount of energy is
released,hence the big bang,that's why It didn't start in 1 place or point,but almost
everywhere) ,anyways sorry I got side tracked there,this is a deep in thought piece
here because also in this section you talk about how man has mimicked this harvest
via primitive methods(ie fossil fuels) for good and bad purposes, solid start..)

A History of Violence
It starts with a spark...dark matter, potential energy
“let there be light!” VIOLENT discharge; celestial symphony
matters collide, space and time came to existence
quantum mechanic governs Yahweh's insane exposition
time passed....
and there came a condition
survival of fittest - became a race a consistent display of division
a game a decision of change so for instance
we’ll take what is given, let’s say...the election...
as ideas are...
grade and dissected, displayed for rejection
on stage and on network engaging in conflicting ways and perspective
abate or accept it’s the way we elect AND...
this is the ways that was set...now do we call it disaster?
perhaps a proper analytic before exhausting the matter...

(as I've mentioned earlier your knowledge on the origins of matter is ripe,and that fact
you've mentioned a couple of creator's here too by throwing God in the mix was solid
and detailed,and again ending this section on man's imitating what he sees and does/
believes,and making use of what's available in most parts for the worst,I'm really liking
this drop..)

Necessary Violence?
There’s a method for progress,
call it necessary contest
history dictates that for every movement there’s conflict
just as fuel mixed with spark allow for movements of cars
opposing passionate views clash are rudiment, yall
whether political landscape or silence working of time...
It all starts with a spark as violence works her design

(yeah that was a nice ending there,highlighting our frailties and intellectual thoughts
which are not that advanced really as we're still on the verge of becoming a type one
civilisation,your imagery and scheme have been solid,a deep piece that forces a reader
to understand, and the fact it came full circle was a solid inclusion and a cool way to
end, really really liked this verse,ripe just ripe..)


SELF.

Is violence necessary
or just a lack of enlightenment?
Does it come from within
or from a tragic environment?
Maybe it's passion
that incites and inspires it
an appetite of entitlement
that can spread like a virus when
the desires of men
ignite and catch fire
in a climate of sin.
"But why does violence exist?"
Well, the science is this,
It's a glitch in our system
no one is trying to fix!
"I won't deny that it is".
Then close your eyes and pretend
That it's an ironclad fist
that slowly tightens its grip
Around the throat of the weak
and those that meekly resist!
See our species is tempted
by primordial lust.
Instinctively seeking
to destroy and corrupt.
Just think of extinction
and all the creatures we've crushed
under the weight of our sooolesss

(wow them short lines are really working well here, so easy on the eye that it let's the
reader digest it at their own pace without breaking flow,and damn you have some
content to take in, you almost made me feel sorry for us all and future kin, not so much
tales of woes as more truths of our woes,you highlighted man's dark primal side that if
it could be turned into creativity for the bettering of are species,we'd abolish Cancer,
Maned flight to the outer Solar System perhaps even colonies on the Moon or Mars,but
the undertones of the elite men don't want that, who would then do their bidding?, and
what good would their paper bills wealth be?,yep straight off the bat you've gained my
attention..)

without an inkling of what ...
we've have done to the planet
-- such irreversible damage.
"Is all humanity cursed?"
Not if a person has chances.
If your circuits are jammed
we can rework the mechanics.
Don't be a merchant of death
or a murderous bandit.
Cos instead of more blood
let's spills some hurt on the canvas.
I see the Earth as our campus,
but we're not learning the answers.
So concerned with the cancer
we stopped researching the grander ...
truth that's involved,
tho we'll closely examine
the phantom roots of its cause.
Due to Newtonian Law
the fruit doesn't fall
too far from its tree ...
à la Adam & Eve
in the Garden of Eden.
Symbolically speaking,
we think that a piece
Of the apple was evil
and she swallowed its seed
then gave birth to a demon
-- the Serpent offspring
of murder and treason!

(where the fuck is that pulpit?,dude you school us with your sermons.. lol, i liked the
linking man to the liking of Cancer,which in an ironic way we are to Mother Earth,so much so that at this present time I'm happy we can't traverse the Stars and spread
our morality around,plus a real fresh take on the whole apple scenario was ripe
(pardon the pun), very creative this..)

We've nurtured this thesis
for 1000s of seasons
and tho its unfounded
and cloudy in reason
The Crown & our leaders
still count on us sheeple
to deeply believe it!
Cos freedom ain't free
unless people are bleeding!
The secret of kingdoms
-- deceitful yet genius!
If Jesus came back
we'd beat em and feed em
To weasels and rats!
A feasible act
if you read of our past
Like Medieval France
or Feudal Japan
or the Spanish Armada
That crossed the Atlantic
to rule the "new land"
through armies infected.
That's hardly a lesson
on the carnage we've caused,
We've sharpered our weapons
and nawled off our claws,
barbaric in essence,
we're less than a dog
Yet, think that we're better ...
"Til dolphins evole
and make us their pets
for all of our flaws!"
No mazel tov ya’ll!
We did not accomplished
a semblance of peace
in the Age of Pisces,
we swam the high seas
full of sodium chloride
and salty sardines,
which affected our vision
of who we could be,
thus ignorance & violence
became our I.D.
But the time of Aquarius
has finally arrived
and if violence continues
Homo-Sapien dies

Sincerely,
The Tribal
Dystopia
Of
Tomorrow's
America

(your description of death via bleeding being the release and gaining true freedom is an
interesting one,and serves as a claim/cause/reason of our species,but those killing do
it like 2nd nature knowing or unknowingly because every action has reaction,but with
agendas for some and blinkered vision for others it's not a good environment to be in
overall,and then came the end,where we are ultimately heading,our extinction by our ignorance and own hand,how pitiful eh,this was a truly enjoyable read, it stimulated my
left brains hemisphere..RIPE..)


Overall a highly enjoyable collab that brought a starting point via Sammy, and the
consequences brought by SELF,,truly a ying and yang duo by you both,tremendous
read,thanks for sharing..peace.