Audio Mic: DTK - Family Due's (Freestyle)

Went down and wrote/recorded this tonight to get some shit off my chest. Any feed is appreciated, I'll try to return feed as well I've just been busy with IRL.

Thanks Que, you're always looking out. Sorry to hear your brother as well, stay up.

Lord Puente wrote: I've never had this happen before but it won't play here and when I go to sound cloud it says that it can't be played in mobile. Weird, I've never not been able to play anything off my phone.

No shit? Can you click the link below, it's direct..just wondering if that works

I honestly think the beat was a distraction.... just the vocals alone makes this a good listen. Very strong sincere vibe, most definitely relatable content. I'm not gonna really give feedback cause this seems like a track needed to be done, and heard, not broken down and analyzed , I think you accomplished what you set to, elements aside , sometymes shit just needs to be said aloud and that's what makes this dope. Keep at it.

I liked this, the meaning/message/lyrics and the flow was pretty close to being in pocket. Def an improvement from the last things. Overall this was good, but you know Ima give you a critique to improve. For this one my biggest advise, is to play with your delivery. Not that it didn't have emotion, it did, but I would have played with the sound of my voice a bit more. I feel as if there was a tad bit of too much aggression in the voice and by changing your sound a bit the message would bleed thru the song to the listener.

Thanks all, I sincerely appreciate it

Downloaded the app..i loved it bro..i just like when u say how u feel..its a couple things that vould have been worded better..but as long as u said what u wanted to say..im rockin with it..good shyt

I really liked this,the start came off as moody and eerie plus the beat was nice and
simple,which was a good thing as it made the listener concentrate in the lyrics 1st,
In a weird way it made what you said more profound,you had good content within
here,questioning the father and son relationship,and the adding of the other sibling
and the effects on him was a solid inclusion,a track that has replay value stamped
all over it,in which i will reolay too as soon as i've finished up here,solid track bro.
peace.