Audio Mic: Gek Diss (On my lunch break)

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...you really ain’t a fucking king 
Can’t bare the tones you so dramatic let it fucking sing
Water down flow on uproar like a fucking sink
Thirsty for attention, Bill Cosby ya fucking drink
KG retired tryna cook on the Net
You old & washed but don’t look like a vet
Got’em shook but barely kept the hood on his head
All the yelling only gonna put you to a tech
Gek look lost like what to do on the bench
Body in the trunk like what to do with the stench
No one cares about them guns you be aiming
We all want you to turn it around to where your face is
Squeeze the trigger to blast and leave you faceless 
Angie searching for Geks mug like she misplaced it 
All that loud barking is just fake strength 
Extendo magazine longer than ya girl waist length
To say I’m dope is vain but it’s all intravenous
Claiming I’m racist is false and it’s just weak shit 
We’re separated by talent, bars verse the weakest
Top tier my Trump card and the wall in-between us
And I’ll punch through to grab you by the neck
Real men use fists and bitches grab for the tech
Hang you by your hair like a punching bag for some reps
You’ll be live twitching from this body bag from a text head 
You disrespect but you haven’t been passionate yet
iLL a killer emotionless like you rapping a set 
Call these punches Azreal how I’m handing him death
You don’t up your credit by mismanaging debt
To tempt a lion all you gotta do is dangle a leg
iLL a goat at your throat with this strangle like Strep
One way ticket to Up, Fandango the dead
Dressed for his funeral but his apparel a mess
When I drop a bomb nothing is left 
Another 50 minute video of a damsels distress 
It’s whatever homie I got a pair for your chest
Lift the site will have lifted by bearers instead
This is the only attention you’ll receive
Veterans told me I should left him with his weed
Even your buds know your smoke is measuring as weak
A king bows for no man but watch him bending at his knee

Edited by iLL ScriptureZ - 03 February 2019 at 1:21am

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iLL ScriptureZ Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote iLL ScriptureZ Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Gek Diss (On my lunch break) Posted: 03 February 2019 at 12:42am
	https://soundcloud.com/ill_scriptz/gek-diss https://soundcloud.com/ill_scriptz/gek-diss ...you really ain’t a fucking king Can’t bare the tones you so dramatic let it fucking sing Water down flow on uproar like a fucking sink Thirsty for attention, Bill Cosby ya fucking drink KG retired tryna cook on the Net You old & washed but don’t look like a vet Got’em shook but barely kept the hood on his head All the yelling only gonna put you to a tech Gek look lost like what to do on the bench Body in the trunk like what to do with the stench No one cares about them guns you be aiming We all want you to turn it around to where your face is Squeeze the trigger to blast and leave you faceless Angie searching for Geks mug like she misplaced it All that loud barking is just fake strength Extendo magazine longer than ya girl waist length To say I’m dope is vain but it’s all intravenous Claiming I’m racist is false and it’s just weak shit We’re separated by talent, bars verse the weakest Top tier my Trump card and the wall in-between us And I’ll punch through to grab you by the neck Real men use fists and bitches grab for the tech Hang you by your hair like a punching bag for some reps You’ll be live twitching from this body bag from a text head You disrespect but you haven’t been passionate yet iLL a killer emotionless like you rapping a set Call these punches Azreal how I’m handing him death You don’t up your credit by mismanaging debt To tempt a lion all you gotta do is dangle a leg iLL a goat at your throat with this strangle like Strep One way ticket to Up, Fandango the dead Dressed for his funeral but his apparel a mess When I drop a bomb nothing is left Another 50 minute video of a damsels distress It’s whatever homie I got a pair for your chest Lift the site will have lifted by bearers instead This is the only attention you’ll receive Veterans told me I should left him with his weed Even your buds know your smoke is measuring as weak A king bows for no man but watch him bending at his knee Edited by iLL ScriptureZ - 03 February 2019 at 1:21am

Xces Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 21 February 2015 Location: Vancouver, BC Status: Offline Points: 143	Post Options Post Reply Quote Xces Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 03 February 2019 at 10:43pm
	This isn't bad. It's also not great, there isn't a whole lot of creativity, like you go for a while but none of these punches are something that would make me be like "Wait a minute" It's more feeling rushed than it is something impactful IMO That's not to be like "OMG SO BAD", more so. This could be better if you realistically gave a shit to do so.


The Rap Daemon Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 05 August 2015 Location: Purgatory Status: Offline Points: 1108 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-14-0 Form: LWLWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote The Rap Daemon Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 04 February 2019 at 1:50am
	I agree with Xces tbh. No mishaps at all, but I felt you could've gone harder. I liked the track, but not mainly for the lyricism, which is the one thing I want to feel the most in a diss track. What I did feel is the flow and the nice editing. The first 8 bars were really nice to listen to, especially with that emphasis toned on the end rhymes. Dope production, just that it's doper than the lyrics, which aren't as POWERFUL as I wanted them to be.
	Faggot

daydizzle89 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote daydizzle89 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 04 February 2019 at 1:49pm
	I think you both are smoking crack. Easy to judge this as ehh when you dont know the context.

iLL ScriptureZ Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote iLL ScriptureZ Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 04 February 2019 at 4:48pm
	I feel like most of the punches were over your heads. Thanks for the listen nonethless.

Loose Logic Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 03 November 2018 Status: Offline Points: 28	Post Options Post Reply Quote Loose Logic Report Post Likes(1) Quote Reply Posted: 05 February 2019 at 9:47pm
	I enjoyed this... lot of personals... i liked the fandango the dead line... longer than ya girl waist length ... body bag in the trunk.. what to do with the stench ... there are others.. and i know im quoting out of order lol... quality was cool.. not super clean but not bad.. the dubs could have been lined up better in some spots tho.. flow and delivery was on point for sure... i thought this was nice and to the point... good shit man... keep doing audio!

Essence1 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 27 December 2018 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 57	Post Options Post Reply Quote Essence1 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 06 February 2019 at 5:27pm
	I can understand why some cats wanted something more live for a diss track, I particularly enjoyed the wordplay in this and the way you changed up your flow every now and then We’re separated by talent, bars verse the weakest Top tier my Trump card and the wall in-between us And I’ll punch through to grab you by the neck Real men use fists and bitches grab for the tech Hang you by your hair like a punching bag for some reps You’ll be live twitching from this body bag from a text head You disrespect but you haven’t been passionate yet iLL a killer emotionless like you rapping a set I feel like that may have went over heads, it's not a punch to a gut or anything but I think writers can really appreciate what you're doing here.