Open Mic: 2020 Keystyle

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   There's some shade in brothers scene I seen it swayin' up in leaves
But see I ain't succumb to beast I mean I came to sun the thieves
Through blame or blundered treason G. Don't fuckin' preach to me
I ain't no cousin leechin' peachy. Rather eat a peach

Don't start, I'm after secret keys I'm huntin' catchin' unawares
Blunt 'n' snatch in underwear in hatches up the stairs
Ain't fuckin' laxin' up in here we come to tax this upper chair
This motherfackin', cuck-infested, pack of unprepared

Go suck a fat one Uncle Fester if you ain't about the remedy
Say or shout an anything while you're layin' down on every dream
Prayin' out to heavenly all like "hey I found out everything"
Your face is gout like very green, you're just makin' out all scary g

What you say is nowt to merry me, I been raxxxin' from 'em riches
I been smackin' up temp'ratures, feedin' smack to hotter bitches
Readin' MAD since I was britches, I seen man 'n' op get diff'rent
Matter fact it's what you listen to that matters not the written

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Rapper T Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 25 November 2013 Location: NZ Status: Offline Points: 1402 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 21-27-0 Form: LLLLWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Rapper T Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: 2020 Keystyle Posted: 01 November 2020 at 11:35am
	There's some shade in brothers scene I seen it swayin' up in leaves But see I ain't succumb to beast I mean I came to sun the thieves Through blame or blundered treason G. Don't fuckin' preach to me I ain't no cousin leechin' peachy. Rather eat a peach Don't start, I'm after secret keys I'm huntin' catchin' unawares Blunt 'n' snatch in underwear in hatches up the stairs Ain't fuckin' laxin' up in here we come to tax this upper chair This motherfackin', cuck-infested, pack of unprepared Go suck a fat one Uncle Fester if you ain't about the remedy Say or shout an anything while you're layin' down on every dream Prayin' out to heavenly all like "hey I found out everything" Your face is gout like very green, you're just makin' out all scary g What you say is nowt to merry me, I been raxxxin' from 'em riches I been smackin' up temp'ratures, feedin' smack to hotter bitches Readin' MAD since I was britches, I seen man 'n' op get diff'rent Matter fact it's what you listen to that matters not the written

Red-B Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 09 January 2014 Location: FL Status: Offline Points: 383 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-0-1 Form: NW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Red-B Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 03 November 2020 at 5:31am
	Sheesh... bro the rhyme schemes are absolutely insane! Super dope drop i would love to hear you on some audio tracks brotha! Also the multi-syllabic rhymes are on point. Keep dropping!

Alien365 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 31 December 2020 Status: Offline Points: 5	Post Options Post Reply Quote Alien365 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 02 January 2021 at 9:04am
	This was a dope little freestyle. The flow is great and seems like it would be pretty good on audio. It has a good structure of multisyllabic rhyming and doesn't err on that point. Overall good piece

emcee squared Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 08 August 2015 Location: usa Status: Offline Points: 39	Post Options Post Reply Quote emcee squared Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 14 January 2021 at 6:26pm
	dope flow and rhyme scheme 3rd stanza was the hardest when i tried audio, but all the stanzas are butter