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    Posted: 07 April 2005 at 3:18pm

jst a short peace show ya sum shit im bout. feedback wud b graciously accepted.one.....

 

My souls bin victimised by the torturing souls of the blinded and deceased/

I fret to believe in such sanctity of living, as my life doesnˇ¦t agree with peace/

Yet my future holds higher above my errors and wrong doings of the past/

So I strive to achieve goals in which inhibitions do wrong, therefore come last/

Think of it as a complaint, a sediment to the acidic torture we receive/

When godˇ¦s will has us provoked to live gracefully, but never results in peace/

As my book of well-being has lost numerous pages over many years of writing/

I have conquered one way to unleash my demons of courage: lyrically reciting/

 

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yo it was straight, it sounded more poetic than flow...nice...one love
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yeh i went for more of a poetic type flow. many styles. i just prefer to go deeper in freestyles. more chance to express wat your about
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