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Rudeboi
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Posted: 07 April 2005 at 3:18pm |
jst a short peace show ya sum shit im bout. feedback wud b graciously accepted.one.....
My souls bin victimised by the torturing souls of the blinded and deceased/ I fret to believe in such sanctity of living, as my life doesnˇ¦t agree with peace/ Yet my future holds higher above my errors and wrong doings of the past/ So I strive to achieve goals in which inhibitions do wrong, therefore come last/ Think of it as a complaint, a sediment to the acidic torture we receive/ When godˇ¦s will has us provoked to live gracefully, but never results in peace/ As my book of well-being has lost numerous pages over many years of writing/ I have conquered one way to unleash my demons of courage: lyrically reciting/
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hate it or love it...50's heart gon' stop. quit ridin 50.....
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Fatal
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yo it was straight, it sounded more poetic than flow...nice...one love
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Rudeboi
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yeh i went for more of a poetic type flow. many styles. i just prefer to go deeper in freestyles. more chance to express wat your about
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hate it or love it...50's heart gon' stop. quit ridin 50.....
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