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    Posted: 20 April 2005 at 9:33pm


May as well Son another 1..


Open mic not really my style, champs lay in the fields
I heard ya sexuality wild, new Gayde members get shields (fag)
YEP I do want it with u...u a son ov bitch jehu
Whose pops knocks him around wid the heels on his shoes
He only 2faced, cus i slapped him that many times
And who the fuck he KO?? wid open MIC rhymes
U tripped, fell, cryed, moaned and died by my lines
And im SMALL?? name 1 single KING that is 5 foot nine (WTF)
U aint Owned nothing! big matches u cant do it
U was singing SHOOOWWDOWN but ya Own ya fuckin' blew it
An BSD.. from day one he been cool wid me
He dont slither in ya grass but i can MO ya dome for free
U Didnt give ILLSTARRR a chance, HA u begged for rap religion
Cus u know i crucified 'CATS' like a 'DOG' Christian
Belair realer than ya whole click u pissed cus he calls u JULI
And I merked the lawler soon to be, what he gon do.... SUE ME?
Imma street cat, plus music my life an ambitions
Jehu such a Bitch the priest cummed on him for his christen
U moaned at O for LOW BLOWS so im ya worse nightmare
Cus ill print ya to the street so every1 wears u like NIKE AIR
He really shit ... not equipped wid fists
I stated the obvious in 1line u came back wid a diss???! (huh)
I keyed this while playin xbox cus u a gimmick a game
Cus u think ur big but no1 even knows ya name

Je-who?











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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 April 2005 at 9:36pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 April 2005 at 9:46pm

It's       JULI ALRIGHT 

Where's juli at wit his reply should be tight...PROPZZZZZ

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 April 2005 at 9:47pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 April 2005 at 11:03pm
O was like "chill, let shit go" but I'm dousing the fire
You only "aight" lyrically so stay in your house and retire
How you gonna diss me wrong and try to be right?
The same one you gave props to said my reply would be tight!
Seems like he's gettin a clue, the one sweating is you
I heard O helped you rhyme for "showdown" and I'm bettin it's true
One hot hook and you think you can throw down?
riders with their nose brown, you're the wackest member that O found
yeah, I never KO'd illa, wack niggas came to save this guy
cover your face and sigh, please give up and wave good bye
Big matches? take your battles too seriouly and you'll fall, bitch
You had to ADD your own battles as classics, they all shit
You're a street cat? nah, son, you a stray puss trick...
and you're winning undeservingly... the way bush did
really, I expected bad from you, but you brought worse shit...
I was gonna flip your verse but didn't find a line that was worth it!

Who was the last major record signing of a battle rapper? Jin...
He didn't even go gold, so no one cares about his wins
Don't fuck with my open mics, I'm a lyricist first
You're only a battle dude with simple rhymes and wack shit in your verse
dogs and cats and christians, what are you on? I'm sinking you next
The idiots don't get your verse, so they think it's complex...
You simple minded, unclever rookie-skilled fake vet
If you came any wacker, they're all gonna think that you hate text
so is it a coincidence only young ones don't believe that you're wack?
you didn't have real punches there, we can see, it's a fact
I only thought you were dope as a newbie, now I pee on your raps
You don't want another lyrical beatdown, so just leave it at that
Insert something rappy here
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 April 2005 at 11:06pm

Haha i see it got to u then...

GOOD

Job done... leave it thur

*an yeah we'll just say u won*











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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 April 2005 at 12:08am
Lmao...Some Good Shit From The Both Of You...I've Been
Gone For Awhile... ...What The Fuck Happened...Why Is
ILLA Beefing With Jehu?...And Why isen't he a renegade
anymore?..please inform me ya'll
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 April 2005 at 1:29am

Cot Damn...

no more
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 April 2005 at 1:33am

Well I could say something bad but I'll go back to my old ways...


If your happy and you know clap your hands

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 April 2005 at 5:31am

Yo ILLA, why you need to make everything you post an announcement to make it look more important than other shit (I know this is unpinned now, but it was an announcement before). And why you gotta lock a diss @ you jus' 'cuz you didn't like what was bein' said. That's shitty abuse of power.

Another thing... You said in the other thread, when you locked it "If I have to hear this shit again..." well Mary, if you don't wana hear it over, tell people to stop askin' me over - as if I'M the one who got explaining to do. lmao

It's all there for everyone to see anyway, the shit you did and why you were kicked from the crew, you even admitted to it right there in the thread "yea... I said all of that"... And you even admit right here to bein' Belair's homie even tho whilst u were in the crew u tried to make up excuses for why you talked to him, lol, is he like the ugly girlfriend you're ashamed to tell people about huh. You lied about things then ya been made to admit it later... Shit is pathetic, end of story.

This ain't even about you needin' dickryders to beat me, because that's beyond obvious to me. If people haven't noticed the pattern in all of your big battles then they either haven't been here long enough, are stupid, or are one of your "special" friends and would therefore never admit to it.

I tell it like it is. I've told u when shit is weak and when shit is hot whether you were in Renegades or not...

Showdown, I Ain't No Rookie, still hot... When you beat IceC and Lawless, I voted for you, I really did think you won, but only because they completely half-assed it. And you've wasted a few less dope people recently like Nox, Senor, a few others, some good verses...

So yea you got a lil better when you got in Renegades, didn't pull so much shit, but when shit got hard the bullshit went down, I heard you basically puttin' words in Abstrakt's mouth to vote for you. The battle with Stalin where you 'bout to lose then three homies popped up and bam, you win. Then shit may not go your way once in a while, like... Lyrical Warfare, you lost to Jehu, and by coincidence also you weren't online whilst people were votin'... hmm.

We accepted you into the crew 'cuz we figured those days were over, and that you were ready to man up about shit... but little by little you been pullin' the same shit anyway, and basically callin' the entire crew dickryders/haters to the leader wasn't exactly the smartest thing to do, then you go an' act like "WTF why have I been kicked?!"

^ So I ain't the bitch here. You aimin' all this shit at ME, but I helped you a LOAD with text as well... don't deny that shit, the period before you joined Renegades I helped you structure loads of ya shit, and help you rhyme shit to this day. I'm real about this, face it or don't, your choice.

Your boy NOX tho, appears to be ya new best buddy, dude comes to me all the time sayin' ILLA is bein' a bitch, ILLA is annoying me, ILLA this, ILLA that... and that's the one you rollin' with now, the one that jus' tells you what you wanna hear but talks shit when you ain't around... Like for like I guess.

Oh, and, the point of this thread... feedback... Overall ya diss was aiight, some good shit (the 5'9 flip, a couple other bits aight), but then you had "gay" punches, newbie shit, and forced shit... and Jehu flipped it like a motherfucker. Sorry. I guess you're gonna wanna lock this one now too.

And that's real.



Edited by -Orion-
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 April 2005 at 8:17am

Originally posted by King Jehu King Jehu wrote:

Who was the last major record signing of a battle rapper? Jin... 

theres been plenty more after Jin

Desert Storm
Papoose
jim Jones
Stck Bundle
Cashmere

Then from 106
Backlandz

Didnt Brother Ali get his deal through battlin at Scribble Jam?

 

Other than that Nice verse..personals mixed well with the punch..Flow was solid..Nice Creative shit props



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 April 2005 at 8:43am

Oh so u notice his shits filla now ^ ... and O please STFU... I dont wana read those 'bigass fuckin boring, im tryna get me to look good, it wasnt my fault, bullshit lawler to be explains'....  i really DONT CARE what u think an im pretty sure no1 else those.

But 1 point if i forced abstrakt to vote... abstrakt speak for ya self and tell peeps i did if thats the case. Yeah u helped me wid an odd word or saw cus maybe i couldnt think or my mind was on other things big wow i dont claim to be perfect. As for Nox well not just him alot ov peeps u have no idea about have Pm'ed me and said ya whole clicks bullshit an its wrong how u did me and  at the end they'll say 'I GOT YA BACK ILLA'..

Thats the Fam i need..


Its over... no more disses i only dropped that  to piss jehu off an it worked

he forced sum rhymes an filla together u jumped on his dick again and said it was betta for a change lol.. when he doesnt even get punchlines??!

Drop it



 











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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 April 2005 at 8:55am

No one "did" you, you "did" us. And my "big ass lawyer prove you wrong shit" just does exactly that... completely proves you wrong. Any of ya "fam" who can't see that either ain't bothered to read all the bullshit I exposed 'cuz there's so much of it, or they could be jus' hatin' on what they can't be part of, or, of course, they just love you.

You can talk to the thread now.

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 April 2005 at 9:54am

agree's wit O...
and i read it all... *bored in klass*

on the real tho, Illa, you had some nice lines,, bout tha first half yah verse.. then it fell off majour!!! yer punches were weak!, if yer gon diss some1 atleast make it ova medicore!!.. theres no doubt about it, you have some skills,.. but word of the wise "don't bite off more then you can chew"...

jus wanted to give you some feed back on yah shit.. j flipped some of yah lines which if this was a battle would have easily clinched the win!!

doesn't matter tho.... but props to both....

Itz Simple....I'm Better Then You!!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 April 2005 at 9:56am
Dont Bite off More then i can Chew..

Comin from u LMFAOOO










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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 April 2005 at 10:37am
nice diss illa
Orion=So I ain't the bitch here.

yes you are u brought this shit on



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 April 2005 at 10:44am

Oh I FORCED abs to vote did i??

YO..... ILLSTARRRR says:

damn.. u told orion i forced u to vote for me

Jez says:

nah

YO..... ILLSTARRRR says:

WTF is he on about then

Jez says:

in that stalin battle

Jez says:

'there was no way stalin could have lost'

YO..... ILLSTARRRR says:

what u mean?

Jez says:

lol

Jez says:

nah man forget that shit

Jez says:

im not guna say u did ..

Jez says:

cus u didnt ..

Jez says:

lol




Sorry i just had to clear that up... peace

P.s Lyin lil renegade snakes



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 April 2005 at 11:10am
Originally posted by ~~BRIGGZY~~ ~~BRIGGZY~~ wrote:

Originally posted by King Jehu King Jehu wrote:

Who was the last major record signing of a battle rapper? Jin... 

theres been plenty more after Jin

Desert Storm
Papoose
jim Jones
Stck Bundle
Cashmere

Then from 106
Backlandz

Didnt Brother Ali get his deal through battlin at Scribble Jam?

1. My shit is not filler... (Eminem being the exception) Battle rappers don't have to much commercial success, or ever put out a good album and other than Jim Jones (who I didn't know battled, cause plainly, he sucks) Jin was the last one to release an album...

2. He says true champs prove it in the battlefield, but this punch simply proved that he takes his battles too seriously and doesn't focus too much on his songs and shit... "Ain't No Rookie," "Showdown" (the original, cause illa sucked in the remix) was hot. That hook was crazy heat and on point. "My Words" had a fucked flow at times, but the beat was so hot and the lyrics were tight. Notice, the less you battle, the better your shit is. This is also why I said to quit battles.

3. Everything I say in my verse is there for a reason. I don't do filler. Point out another line in my verse and I'll explain it to you. Yes, Everything I write is intentional and calculated.

4. I respect Illa's love for this rap shit, and I know if he went to me and O for any help, it's because he knows we know what we're doing, and he wants to elevate. We all wantr to elevate, so I gotta respect that, even though it felt like he just used the renegades. We ain't gotta be best buddies, we ain't gotta be in a crew, you don't have to respect me. I simply respect your love for hip hop like I respect perfecto's love for it, regardless of whether we're cool or not. That's where it ends.



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 April 2005 at 11:22am
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 April 2005 at 1:17pm
Originally posted by Demonic Demonic wrote:

nice diss illa
Orion=So I ain't the bitch here.

yes you are u brought this shit on

You're a fucking dickryding idiot.

Stop it.

Me and ILLA were talkin' about the battle, I was arguing why you and Nox are idiots, he was arguing why you weren't... that was it, this was something that would be over when the battle was over and we'd all get over it. It changed when he started cussin' the fuckin' crew... READ WHAT'S BEEN POSTED ALL OVER THE BOARDS YOU GEEKY LITTLE MORON, before poppin' off ya stupid motherfuckin' mouth. I didn't "bring that on", he jus' started cussin' the crew (go read the convo), and I immediately said "that's not cool" and I jus' wasn't prepared to listen to anythin' he had to say after that.

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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