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BRIGGZY
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Posted: 27 July 2005 at 6:48pm |
it didnt have a 3rd verse Last time but its done Comedy Track from Redemption mixtape.. basically its about a Guy who gets so drunk he robs a traditional English Cornershop...3rd verse needs finishin off beat-Shadowpump-The Buck stops here Intro. (drink,Hittin Bar) Ahhh,Damn.....get on the Ground Put em up..Where u going Huh? (gun shots) Verse 1. Its was Early 6am,When i Rose From the Bed.. Hook x2 Stick ur Hands Up,Raise em high in air.. Verse 2 i was Sat at the Counter,With my Head in my Palms..(yawn) Hook x2 Stick ur Hands Up,Raise em high in air.. [Verse 3]. now the Coppa's in the house..hes lookin about.. Stick ur Hands Up,Raise em high in air.. |
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Ryder
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nice briggz...shit is tight...the rhyming was good and you kept to the story very good...i liked this one...last bar was funny man...lmfao...props
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ILLSTARRR
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Hmmmm
Ur a good writer, keep it up |
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I-kontinue
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i jus' actually took the time to read this...i dont think i read it b4 ( u said u had dropped the 1st two verses earlier), but yeh, it was worth tha read...the 1st two verses corresponded better tho...its prolly cuz u wrote em together, and waited a bit before u wrote the 3rd? good spit cus i kno not many people can tell stories in rhyme on a beat, usin the degree of complexity u used
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20theTruth
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^ agreed. nice tsory telling, had funny parts and nice imagery
i wan hear da finished product |
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no more
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BRIGGZY
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Goodlookin on the Feed, Hopefully it will be complete soon |
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-Orion-
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Sorry but in what universe are you a complex MC? This was ok but it's not what I would call "complex"... it's not what I would call "simple" either so I ain't dissin you... it was straight... one of ya better pieces recently... and no I'm not dissin you cuz you're in Front Line I'm jus givin you feedback... but then you're an intelligent human being so u knew that already... Look forward to seein n hearin it all finished up... feelin the story definitely easy Edited by -Orion- |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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-Orion-
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And I know ShadowPump... he's dope
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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I-kontinue
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I said: good spit cus i kno not many people can tell stories in rhyme on a beat, usin the degree of complexity u used
thats y i added the word "degree" in there...for tellin a story its complex...most would use simplier rhymes when tellin a story is basically what i was sayin |
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BRIGGZY
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I love the Beef Yummeee lol |
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My bad, if u had said it like that to start with I'da got it...but even so I misread BEEF |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Scotty32
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personally i liked it
and would like to hear it as an audio so if sumone could let me know if/when its posted oh and its nice to see ya can insult ya self |
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BRIGGZY
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lol
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