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Unforgiven
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Posted: 03 October 2005 at 6:15pm |
changes in hip hopcrisy, ghost writers n authors be, i dunno, just flow'd ryte off the top of my head!! |
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dalinquent
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it a nice lil decent drop. i see you had some nice multi's in there too, but i didn't really favor it. You did the two bar rhyme scene and i just don't like how it switches that much, at least not in this senerio. Other than that...decent drop
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