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 Topic: New tracksPosted: 27 October 2005 at 3:28pm |
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01 Track 1.wma 02 Track 2.wma 04 Track 4.wma Here are 3 of my 4 new tunes hope you enjoy, no hate please if you dont like sumin say why but im pleased wid these Edited by frank white |
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the punching machine
bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest |
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Posted: 27 October 2005 at 6:39pm |
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First one... lol, real talk at the start huh... Well ya confidence and ya delivery are better, flow, well the beat is a lil too slow and that fucks with you a bit... sometimes it's real stop-start but at other times, like towards the end, it's pretty nice Second one... haha... the beat!!! I like this shit man... Seriously... All the quotables I've seen in ur writtens and yeah... flow is better here, delivery is definitely hype, I mean ya accent is ya accent, it's not foreign to me so that shit's cool... This is good, really like the energy u brought with it and the samples were hot Fourth one... whoooooooa this beat is OOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLDDD! Renegades again... DJ Abstrizzle dizzle on the beat! "I ain't even from Leeds" < lmfao... Jews in Gaza... Flintoff to an extent... Blackadder venemous reptile... lmao... ahhh quotables... lol, ya flow is OK, but at times strugglin' to keep up with this... lmao, question for Jada, hot shit... Likin' the lyrics here, delivery is like, low-key, oldschool-ish... SJ hahaha, flow is cool at times, delivery is straight... some cool lines here n' there too, straightforward but cool... Good shit, elevation... the first one wasn't as strong as the second two, second was def the best... keep doin it |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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frank white
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Posted: 27 October 2005 at 6:42pm |
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Thanks for the feed O the Nazi or first one is ment to be more a spoken word piece more than a flat out hip hop song but cheers for the talk of elevation.
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the punching machine
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King Jehu
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Posted: 27 October 2005 at 6:52pm |
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FUCK, SHIT, I got tourettes!
lmao The first had a real slow beat, like olion said, so you can spit it again to a faster beat and it can work. The second one, you had energy that was different than anything you've dropped before. Very hyped and aggressive. Flow did improve as well. I never like that beat, but orion loves it. On the last one, your flow was different than anything else, you rode the beat nicely on the first half of your verse. You had some nice quotables in this as well. Still improving. You show growth, which most of the established people never do anymore. Edited by King Jehu |
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Insert something rappy here
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Posted: 28 October 2005 at 9:21am |
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I liked the first one, altho its a thing a lotta people talk about its not really somethin people put on a beat, i liked it in the slow beat as well...i duno tho, it doesnt really work with the skit at the start then that verse, plus wen u sed "brutal" it sounded camp as fuk, lol, it was a decent track, plus it was less immigrants takin ya job more they had no jobs at all
lol @ the second one....rofl @ using that clip, YEHHHH!!!! I liked this man, couple lines loss the beat a little but yeh I liked this...i thought ya voice was a bit stupid wen i first herd it but its actually growin on me now, you held it down on this one, saw the lyrics and that b4 I Loved that 4-5-1 formation line, the way you spat it, real nice...Black Adder quote was GHETTO....lmfao @ recylin ya rhymes, lol lol...linford christie of this race...hahaha, sjay was pretty hot here, it kinda had an old skool feel to it, i think the lyrics went with this beat really well to be honest, the beat was hot too...old skool shit, niceness |
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Posted: 28 October 2005 at 9:41am |
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Ite heres ur Feed lol 1st track..I wasnt Really Feeling i mean it wasnt bad, just not my shit...The start was nice all the talking The beat was Cool...but waaaaaayyy to slow which made u sound like u was bored Wen spitting...Flow is cool tho, Sometimes it was choppy for a good few seconds then picked up Again..Lyrics were nice and the Delivery was Solid Overall- These are sum nice tracks, Keep it like this and ur Album shud definatly Be worth the listen -1- |
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Posted: 28 October 2005 at 4:00pm |
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lol, 1st one starts out talkin...this is betta than tha othaz i've hurd from ya (audio battles)...is slow...sounds like straight real talkin track here...flow is a bit choppy but i undastand...sounds like u talkin a poem ova a beat to me...personally
track 2, lol, starts out personal wit tha shout out to Gades, the beat is "good", lol, i caught the coldplay line as i've seen in one of ya texts...this flow is betta than the 1st. i say keep practicin n you'll keep gettin betta...at 1st i couldnt even undastand u on some audios track 4- beat's catchy,kinda old school , lol..i caught some cleva lines in this....underground line...i caught the jada line..like jada is gunna hear ur question..ha...u made ya point clear in this tho about hip hop missin tha basix... urm, some nice lines, and then some "iight" lines..this is actually a good step up...ya stay elevatin and thats whats important...1 |
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Posted: 28 October 2005 at 4:39pm |
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first track, i agree with poem ova beat, but that works wit what you talkin about sum gud lines in der, the way u said muuuney was weird but made it work, its gud u chattin with a english accent, i aint listened to 2 many audios on LA but theres alot of mcs dullin it down, a gud listen.
2nd beat better simpson line made me laugh as well as the ladies man heamaphrodite, gud lines in der, the hard like smoking cracked me 2 b, phat line, the last gotta b da best gud flow, recycle line was gud, u changed style an voice halfway through but it was alrite flowed better, im stoned an it pumped at me 2 gud shit b |
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Posted: 28 October 2005 at 7:01pm |
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since i listened i might aswell leave feed - plus ya asked me too
personally i thought these was ight, you dont sound to bad only problem is ya accent, ya cant really do much bout this, but it just reminds me of dizze rascal  really dont like the garage scenethought the lines was good, for content i liked the nazi one, the others had sum good lines in em too but part from the voice it was better than i thought they'd be  |
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frank white
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Posted: 04 November 2005 at 4:38pm |
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upping for more feed i got 4 more now as well im doing 10
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the punching machine
bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest |
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Posted: 20 November 2005 at 6:44am |
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It sounds to me like your rhythm is erratic in your verses.
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Posted: 20 November 2005 at 7:41am |
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HAHAHHAHAHAHHAA^ Oh jesus that was so funny |
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Posted: 20 November 2005 at 11:01am |
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lmfao...word
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Posted: 23 November 2005 at 4:59pm |
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Posted: 23 November 2005 at 5:11pm |
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listening to the second track.. good god Jehu is a monster...
"never know my confidence!".. " can't beat this illness ".. haha @ the yellow line, whoaaa.. " I ain't no ladies man, cause a ladies man is a hermophodite " lol.. "on the earth to change it".. "hate on my flow"... "hate it or love it, the frank whites on top, I thought I told you fuckers we wont stop " you shoulda added a diddy-esque "take that take that" to the end of the line with an adlib, woulda been sick..
take over like jay hova! .. I always come with my spurs.. lol@ using the sample. that was hot...
You had alot of energy on this one brother, I felt you should have stressed certains lines more, to give em more of an impact. Adlibs would help your style alot, adding a 'OH!" or "whoo" to the end of your punches give em more impact. If you listen to any punchline mc, its a trick they use. People will naturally mimmic something they hear, so if they hear you whooing, if they were thinking it, it'll stick more. Just some advice. I liked the joint, you an jehu made a dope team. |
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#Bananas
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frank white
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Posted: 23 November 2005 at 5:14pm |
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cheers man
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Posted: 23 November 2005 at 5:49pm |
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adlibs for self - hype like persay a Whoo Kid
like "woooooo" "DAMN!" "chea!" alawys accentuate. u are the punching machine i will give you that. vastly improved from everything you've done in the past. i thorougly enjoyed it, altho u know that accent gets me the lyrics and production held it together and worth listening. props Pusha Man |
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