Open Mic: The Anthem of Souls.

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   Twirling down the bottomless pit of lost memories
Emotions enflamed as I embrace endless entities
Enemies seize my fortresses of hope and wonder
Burning our prayer rugs and propeling us under
To the palms of purgatory, what a pitiful disarray
As the devil laughs in our faces, forcing judgment days
But he still has no remorse for coarse harassment
Preparation for death.. is that what the past meant?
Are we breathing daily for humor.. is heaven a rumor?
Cause the devil's selling labor.. and we're the consumers
We buy this temptation, forget about our salvation
Creation's a total lie and God's just a fabrication
Let's undress the situation, church is our obligation
But what about the people that practice meditation?
They have a god, don't they? stop the medication
Let's not diminish their reputation, remember revalation?
Focus on trust and love instead of despair and hatred,
Face it, we're all gonna die one day, why be anxious?
Concentrate on education, forget stress and depression,
Bible school's full of Atheists driven by heresy and oppression.
The lessons? be blessed and keep aggression to a minimum,
Why burn churches, when you can torture the souls that live in them.

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Sinbolik Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 12 January 2006 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 147 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-0 Form: LWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Sinbolik Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: The Anthem of Souls. Posted: 19 January 2006 at 9:40am
	Twirling down the bottomless pit of lost memories Emotions enflamed as I embrace endless entities Enemies seize my fortresses of hope and wonder Burning our prayer rugs and propeling us under To the palms of purgatory, what a pitiful disarray As the devil laughs in our faces, forcing judgment days But he still has no remorse for coarse harassment Preparation for death.. is that what the past meant? Are we breathing daily for humor.. is heaven a rumor? Cause the devil's selling labor.. and we're the consumers We buy this temptation, forget about our salvation Creation's a total lie and God's just a fabrication Let's undress the situation, church is our obligation But what about the people that practice meditation? They have a god, don't they? stop the medication Let's not diminish their reputation, remember revalation? Focus on trust and love instead of despair and hatred, Face it, we're all gonna die one day, why be anxious? Concentrate on education, forget stress and depression, Bible school's full of Atheists driven by heresy and oppression. The lessons? be blessed and keep aggression to a minimum, Why burn churches, when you can torture the souls that live in them.

King Jehu Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote King Jehu Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 19 January 2006 at 12:40pm
	This was cool, it has a nice message to it, there a lot of lines here a lot of people should pay attention to. The last line left me a bit confused though... and it used a lot of suffix rhymes (-ation, etc) tho it used them well aside from maybe "remember revelation." other than that, it was a very good piece. I likes it.
	Insert something rappy here

Sinbolik Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 12 January 2006 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 147 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-0 Form: LWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Sinbolik Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 January 2006 at 8:41am
	thx king

Sinbolik Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 12 January 2006 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 147 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-0 Form: LWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Sinbolik Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 23 January 2006 at 9:12am
	show me love

Sinbolik Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 12 January 2006 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 147 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-0 Form: LWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Sinbolik Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 30 January 2006 at 9:40am
	where is the love