Open Mic: I am Ecstacy

I am Ecstacy

I am hells advocate, I will keep you up for hours
I am a pill so small..yet I hold so much power
I will lead you and I will give you the time of your life
Then I will slice through your skin like a razor knife
I will relax you and give you feelings of ease
Then I will suffocate you, and not let you breathe
I will become your best friend, then turn into your worst enemy
I will suck every pinch of happiness inside of you..I am ecstacy
I will haunt you at night and never let you sleep
I will tear scars and cut wounds that run so deep
I’m superior to your strength, I guarantee
I will own your soul, and you’ll never be free
Your urges are my power, and your hunger will guide me
After time I wont look for you, but you’ll come and find ME
I am ecstacy...with me you live a life of fiction
Lies and cries, my fuel is your addiction
Your body will crave me when your common sense is lacking
I will make you do things you could never even imagine
I never fight with you, yet you always try to fight me
You cant fright me, because I make you question what might be
Illusions or reality, but to you I’m the only thing that’s real
Because I control everything, the way you move, think and feel
I am ecstacy...
I will impact your life in more ways then one
And you will struggle until you realize I’ve finally won
This horror will never be done, your weakness is slack to me
Even if I leave you alone, you still find ways back to me
I will steal your dreams and give you life of a night-mare
Be scared of me because where ever you go, I’ll be right there
Withdrawals kill, for when you come off you’ll feel worse then before
And after time I wont remain that thing you always adored
I will disorient your body and your mind will go insane
I will make you numb then give you a load of pain
I will give you permanent affects that you can’t erase
I ruin families, bring shame and act as an excuse for a disgrace
I never give up, I trade smiles for tears, I kidnap the young
I bruise, abuse, leave you chewing on your own tongue
You may think what you’re feeling, in essence is godly
But I eat up your spirits and take weight off your body
Once your in, you’ll always remain at my level
Make me a habit and you sell your soul to the devil
Teeth are clenching, heart is faster, who knows what I’m laced with
Pupils go huge, that’s when you know your staring in the eyes of Satan
You are now possessed and only have yourself to blame
You can’t quit me, I promise you... I’ll join you in your grave
..I am ecstacy..I show you what hurt is..
Just for one second question..is the high worth it?
Now your whole life is filled with tragedies that you can’t forget
All because of me...the only thing you’ll regret..
You give up on yourself after living your life as a lie
And you're all alone..When everyone you know left you to cry
You DIE..
..I am Ecstacy..

lol i will surely hit that up

oh snapz. this was actually good fa those who took the time to read it yo. stayed on topic like a MoFo...that's definetely a strong point in this. It looks long but once u get into it, it flows very smooth n that is necessary in a long piece like this. def. many quotables in this and i think that was dope way to finish it with YOU DIE...i really dont hav any prollems wit this piece...stay on the up


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This is dope, more of a poetical vibe to it but most definately worth the read, I liked the repetative parts cause its like the highs and lows you get from the buzz (not that I'd know), rhymes were cool and the read was really smooth...Liked the language u used as well, like it was simple but you never really forced anything thruout and it was a fairly long read so thats a really good thing, liked the expression as well, I'm sure if I went back and read it again I'd be able to pick out some really smart things you talked about in relation to the drug and the vibe...was a dope read, and when I got another minute I'll prolly come back and read it again...but for now, good shit Sin..

peace

i think this was really HOT its proper powerfull and simplistic at the same time, flowed extremely well and has its common ground everyone can relate themselves or someone they know to this subject well done huns :)