Open Mic: War Path

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   Ayo,
full clip or no clip, i spit with knives
i got no clip bitch, i disintergrate lives
slice optical nerves and damage the brain
grab a mic and manage to liquefy ur frame
i desect your body like i disect bugs
fuck a bulletproof vest get repelant for them slugs
i scratch the surface of laws
and the surface of jaws
i lost my mind so im takin over urs
spitting metaphors with no pause
and similes, i lyrically choke u to death
evil spirits diminish u to ur last breath
ill pass the last test
u aint passed the fist
i travel through time and witness jesus' birth
i curse with every verse
and im lettin it show
poisonous stings from a venomous flow
a venomous rhyme
travellin through time, u feelin my wrath
Breeze n Syko on this fuckin War Path

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Breeze Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 05 May 2006 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 14 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L	Post Options Post Reply Quote Breeze Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: War Path Posted: 08 May 2006 at 5:40am
	Ayo, full clip or no clip, i spit with knives i got no clip bitch, i disintergrate lives slice optical nerves and damage the brain grab a mic and manage to liquefy ur frame i desect your body like i disect bugs fuck a bulletproof vest get repelant for them slugs i scratch the surface of laws and the surface of jaws i lost my mind so im takin over urs spitting metaphors with no pause and similes, i lyrically choke u to death evil spirits diminish u to ur last breath ill pass the last test u aint passed the fist i travel through time and witness jesus' birth i curse with every verse and im lettin it show poisonous stings from a venomous flow a venomous rhyme travellin through time, u feelin my wrath Breeze n Syko on this fuckin War Path
	Breeze The Lost Soul

Mackie Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 20 August 2005 Location: MK Status: Offline Points: 1504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 45-38-4 Form: LLWLNW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Mackie Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 13 May 2006 at 3:49am
	dope.. i like the way you rhyme.... stay up.

NepentheZ Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote NepentheZ Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 13 May 2006 at 4:57am
	Sorry, but i wont be as nice as mack, the rhymes in this are quite poor, a lot of shit didnt flow well, and the general sotry of the topic was ass, it wasnt relly punchlines, but there also wasnt a plot, it was pretty much just a perfect example of bad filler. Some shit was average, its not like it was awful, but pretty much i simply didnt like it.
	I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...

Breeze Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Joined: 05 May 2006 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 14 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L	Post Options Post Reply Quote Breeze Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 15 May 2006 at 11:59am
	aight man, thanx 4 tha feed ill work on ma shit
	Breeze The Lost Soul