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    Posted: 27 January 2016 at 2:19pm
Originally posted by ch3kkgame ch3kkgame wrote:


at the end of the day. it's a text to a audio. I didn't have to try hard. the statement is made. 
for every text verse yall drop. I'll drop a track. regardless the effort I put into it. 
I make light of it because it is lite to be honest. it's like being cute on the club cause mafuckas 
don't know how to be chill and kick it.
Bruh, it took me 8 minutes to write that for you. Fucking 8, with picking the beat. 
If you piss me off enough I'll take more time. I promise you don't want that. 
The Barry Special can be done. I just like the fact somebody over there got some balls. 
Even with your text bruh. you'll get the same treatment as the rest of these Lil niggas. 
Look at my spot and glance at yours. they don't match for a reason.


Originally posted by ch3kkgame ch3kkgame wrote:

Lets take score for a second..Add insult to injury. 
US = A Mixtape, Plus about 3 to 4 other tracks. 
Them = A text verse by Concrete. I didnt forget anything. Thats literally all they have. Lol.
Truth be told, I guess the current members didn't see anything worth getting killed for.
They'll just play the ( I have a real life outside of LA) which is 
what I hear a lot after one of you have bitched up.
Oh yea, I'm still talking shit. 
Lions Den Mafucka...




Ch3ckk how he got the bitch-o-meter in hyperdrive
the lions are roaring, so gotta kill em with tiger style
fighting wild, I tried reasoning with this crying child
so much for a lions pride, the Den is where liars hide
don't try deny, your rap was useful, but lyrics fruitless 
none care bout used mins, stop with stupid excuses
this unit is a nuisance, how they been declaring war
but a request for fair crew-battle? was clearly ignored..


settling scores? claiming you murdered SYN is retarded
cos my crew was dead way before any beef even started!
and you feel honored? with actions like punks ambushing
tell me this, are you a pack of lions, or a bunch of pussies?
it's fun to push this, Ch3kk failed to counter the agression
I said this cat was stray.. and surely he couldn't adress it
still hating on texting, however it's obvious he's faking
cos if anyone keyed a Zin diss, he would fucking praise it!


now, my ol' crew might be gone, I won't stop roasting
going out solo like Pacino and bury these cockroaches!
LD's ferocious with "a mixtape, plus 3 to 4 other tracks"
against my one verse fronting back, still something lack
yall can't dodge this fact, observe my keys spell trouble
Lions Den made all that noise, but not a single rebuttal!
fuck being subtle, time to take all courtesy of the shelf
cos much like your trickery, text is an artform in itself!


all you entitled audioheads, stop discarding the truth
yall basically studio gangsters, acting hard in a booth
charging dudes, to grab a michophone and make flows
but right now yall should pick up a pen, and take notes
study how to lyrically break foes, within rhyme schemes
think you smoked Crete? that just another pipe dream
it might seem, that audios automatically maim writtens
so imma fill my pen with the heavy lead, aim at victims


want us to listen? aight then, let's hear it clearly
you rap severly, but what is your actual merits?
what do you make yearly? I got a career that pays well
do tell, have you ever produced anything that may sell?
well? eventually that neglect's gonna end self-respect
forget the MIC tests.. soon you'll need welfare checks!
do you even care ch3kk? acting like a really spoiled kid
prepare for demeaning role shifts, aka cleaning toilets!


watch me uncoil this, it's time you come back to earth yall
you're catching a beatdown if someone calls out worldstar!
it's hurts huh? just take that undue pride and swallow it
wallow in it, who gonna bring dollars in? your 8 followers?
ain't conqured shit! if you ever make a career, believe me
I'll will take of my brand new era cap - and fucking eat it
this is just too easy, since the beef is beginning to drag on
hoping to last long with lil kids jumping on the bandwagon


more damn nagging, a former SYN, aint that bittersweet
by now peeps realize that Elite equals a synomyn for deceit
just check his sheets, see how many partners he leaves
quitely manipulating teams, not surprised he dis-creete
bitch please, nothing you state can ever be hurt me
and I bet once LD is desolate, Elite's gonna desert it
so H4ze asserted, he WALK over concrete or some nonsense
no offence kid, but that's only GOING for a played out concept!


I see children in conflict, these kids safety is shaky
it's quite gravy, Ch3kk's been acting shady lately
making hasty raids crazy, waiting for SYN to bust back
gaining rep for being an attention whore on Zins nutsack
plus that -  "it's like being cute on the club" quote
I was all like; "What the hell did Ch3kk just wrote?"
and once again.. mr. google is not your friend
cos the results helped explain what you ment
what I found in your town Atlanta is waaay fucked
as it turns out, Lions Den is actually a gaaay club!



I bet you lame fucks gonna keep up that lame yapping
make tracks spin, but it's just same shit - same rapping
fact is, the depths of your shadiness is actually abysmal
never gonna make it official, ya simply lack the charisma
I dismiss ya, C can never be frightened by some whores
tight to the core, my pen is mightier than your chords
fighting against the Lord! I strike this squad with assaults
if you manage to rebuttle all of this, even God will applause
just pause, coming to damage your verses didn't do squat
fuck yall guys for now, next verse is reserved Ridley Squat! 


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Yeah,
 
This was a really well written diss. Straight forward with no bullshit. Came at multiple people with straight shots. You shitted on these people. Text or Audio, it doesn't matter. the content is here. The flow is here and the punches are here also. This was dope. A long verse but you kept the momentum going with just straight shitting on bitches. Nice work Here Crete
 
 
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Hmmm wonder if you're shooting at the whole click now instead of ch3kk....mind enlightening me??
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Damn!! After Ch3kk made that "Message to LA" that riled up whole damn site (don't blame those for getting offended, by the way) and now this diss, all I can say is this is getting very interesting. But to the diss, this was straight. You were straight to the point (which I like), and you stated alot of things
people were probably thinking (alluding to the studio gangstas line). Way to defend the text heads, Crete.

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Smh, I figured. Good shit tho none the less you texted. You know it's no pressure with this right? Until you get on a mic bruh. Sit down and stop keyboard flexing. I'll give you the half grin. Good effort lil guy.
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This was a solid round up con. I think the best part was full of truths. You managed to touch base on loads of things. The haze dissing you, elite turning on syn, the trying to diss a dead crew,, studio gangsters, not giving a platform for a battle. You just clowned end the whole beef n showed how ridiculous it was.

It was a long drop and not every part was doing damage but it carried things over to the parts that did nicely. The flow and execution was solid stuff and it all read nicely. I liked how your saying what everyone thinking but most are scared to say, props.

Good shit.


Nice feedback d von, showing ya class there dude. Expect more of the same from the rest.
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Originally posted by D.Von Doom D.Von Doom wrote:

Hmmm wonder if you're shooting at the whole click now instead of ch3kk....mind enlightening me??

Not reallly, I mentioned by name who this was aimed for. If you're in DN but don't have a problem with me, I don't have a problem with you. 
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Originally posted by ch3kkgame ch3kkgame wrote:

Smh, I figured. Good shit tho none the less you texted. You know it's no pressure with this right? Until you get on a mic bruh. Sit down and stop keyboard flexing. I'll give you the half grin. Good effort lil guy.

We heard enough of this already and it's been adressed properly in both my disses towards you. It's time you come up with a new angle now. Please don't argue back and pollute this thread with more bickering, PM me if you wanna discuss it further.


Thanks for those who's feeding, I'm gonna do some more feeding myself here. I see this came out quite long but there was an endless amount of material to take on here. Writing 100 bars for LD is easier than writing 16 for Ridley Squat.DeadLOL
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since I posted Feed in audio mic section,I've been
reading all comments made,and now this Diss,which
I'll leave comment on soon,seems ppl don't like or
want to read it when criticism is offered,yet it's
needed by us all,but finally the back m forth has
been closed now we have this verse,(thankfully)cuz
it was getting out of hand,one guy even came across
like he had armour on,saying I'm doing it for the text
heads here,maybe,but ppl have opinions,and living in
the west we are allowed to express them,plus what I got
from he's audio when I listened was this,he said he
will achieve he's goals no matter what...but this is
only my take on it...


It's true this Diss was well thought out,it was to the
point also,I liked it,your contents were directed well
as was your approach,even your punches were present,it
was also easy on the eye to read,still didn't get why
you went after other ppl,but hay,more the merrier right,
anyways good job...enjoyed the read...peace.


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This was a dope response Con...a little to long but dope none the less. You had some hard hitting personals and witty crafted punches. The opening quotes were a nice touch...


don't try deny, your rap was useful, but lyrics fruitless
none care bout used mins, stop with stupid excuses
this unit is a nuisance, how they been declaring war
but a request for fair crew-battle? was clearly ignored..
^^^^^^......this was tough bruh..lol liked it

LD's ferocious with "a mixtape, plus 3 to 4 other tracks"
against my one verse fronting back, still something lack
yall can't dodge this fact, observe my keys spell trouble
Lions Den made all that noise, but not a single rebuttal!
^^^^^^..... This was a solid few lines. Liked the All That Noise play

charging dudes, to grab a michophone and make flows
but right now yall should pick up a pen, and take notes
study how to lyrically break foes, within rhyme schemes
think you smoked Crete? that just another pipe dream
it might seem, that audios automatically maim writtens
so imma fill my pen with the heavy lead, aim at victims
^^^^^.....dope flip here! Raw shit


Real hard diss here, solid response. I laughed at the Lions Den being a gay club in his hometown. Nice personal shit..


Overall this beef has brought out some dope work on both sides. Been interesting to watch it unfold and push each sides to lyrically up their game. Nice verse.


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Easy to read, fantastic flow, great rhyme schemes and very effective/clear points. That's a fantastic verse, props.
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^^ Hey thanks for the feed guys it's appreciated.

I might add that this is not an attack against audioheads in general, stay busy with it.
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Final bump to debunk any theory out there that says Ch3kk killed SYN.
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No need to debunk FACTS bruh. Syn is dead. While yo ass trying to throw rocks at the sun fucking with me. You let Ridley run up in yo ass raw. Lmfao, stay in ur lane cause trying to play with the big dogs got u all fucked up. Congrats on the L Ridley about to give yo ass. 

Oh yea, let me feed the verse.


Wack shit.

Done.



Lions Den Mafucka....
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Originally posted by ch3kkgame ch3kkgame wrote:

No need to debunk FACTS bruh. Syn is dead. While yo ass trying to throw rocks at the sun fucking with me. You let Ridley run up in yo ass raw. Lmfao, stay in ur lane cause trying to play with the big dogs got u all fucked up. Congrats on the L Ridley about to give yo ass. 

Oh yea, let me feed the verse.


Wack shit.

Done.



Lions Den Mafucka....

Once again showing you class here. I told you countless times to PM me directly instead of polluting threads. Let's be real here Ch3kk, right now you're acting like a straight up drama-queen. Syn is currently dead yeah, but obviously not because of you, that was kinda the point, dumbass.
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