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Concrete
Standard Member Joined: 02 September 2013 Location: Oslo Status: Offline Points: 1418 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 33-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
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Posted: 27 January 2016 at 2:19pm |
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Ch3ckk how he got the bitch-o-meter in hyperdrive the lions are roaring, so gotta kill em with tiger style fighting wild, I tried reasoning with this crying child so much for a lions pride, the Den is where liars hide don't try deny, your rap was useful, but lyrics fruitless none care bout used mins, stop with stupid excuses this unit is a nuisance, how they been declaring war but a request for fair crew-battle? was clearly ignored.. settling scores? claiming you murdered SYN is retarded cos my crew was dead way before any beef even started! and you feel honored? with actions like punks ambushing tell me this, are you a pack of lions, or a bunch of pussies? it's fun to push this, Ch3kk failed to counter the agression I said this cat was stray.. and surely he couldn't adress it still hating on texting, however it's obvious he's faking cos if anyone keyed a Zin diss, he would fucking praise it! now, my ol' crew might be gone, I won't stop roasting going out solo like Pacino and bury these cockroaches! LD's ferocious with "a mixtape, plus 3 to 4 other tracks" against my one verse fronting back, still something lack yall can't dodge this fact, observe my keys spell trouble Lions Den made all that noise, but not a single rebuttal! fuck being subtle, time to take all courtesy of the shelf cos much like your trickery, text is an artform in itself! all you entitled audioheads, stop discarding the truth yall basically studio gangsters, acting hard in a booth charging dudes, to grab a michophone and make flows but right now yall should pick up a pen, and take notes study how to lyrically break foes, within rhyme schemes think you smoked Crete? that just another pipe dream it might seem, that audios automatically maim writtens so imma fill my pen with the heavy lead, aim at victims want us to listen? aight then, let's hear it clearly you rap severly, but what is your actual merits? what do you make yearly? I got a career that pays well do tell, have you ever produced anything that may sell? well? eventually that neglect's gonna end self-respect forget the MIC tests.. soon you'll need welfare checks! do you even care ch3kk? acting like a really spoiled kid prepare for demeaning role shifts, aka cleaning toilets! watch me uncoil this, it's time you come back to earth yall you're catching a beatdown if someone calls out worldstar! it's hurts huh? just take that undue pride and swallow it wallow in it, who gonna bring dollars in? your 8 followers? ain't conqured shit! if you ever make a career, believe me I'll will take of my brand new era cap - and fucking eat it this is just too easy, since the beef is beginning to drag on hoping to last long with lil kids jumping on the bandwagon more damn nagging, a former SYN, aint that bittersweet by now peeps realize that Elite equals a synomyn for deceit just check his sheets, see how many partners he leaves quitely manipulating teams, not surprised he dis-creete bitch please, nothing you state can ever be hurt me and I bet once LD is desolate, Elite's gonna desert it so H4ze asserted, he WALK over concrete or some nonsense no offence kid, but that's only GOING for a played out concept! I see children in conflict, these kids safety is shaky it's quite gravy, Ch3kk's been acting shady lately making hasty raids crazy, waiting for SYN to bust back gaining rep for being an attention whore on Zins nutsack plus that - "it's like being cute on the club" quote I was all like; "What the hell did Ch3kk just wrote?" and once again.. mr. google is not your friend cos the results helped explain what you ment what I found in your town Atlanta is waaay fucked as it turns out, Lions Den is actually a gaaay club! I bet you lame fucks gonna keep up that lame yapping make tracks spin, but it's just same shit - same rapping fact is, the depths of your shadiness is actually abysmal never gonna make it official, ya simply lack the charisma I dismiss ya, C can never be frightened by some whores tight to the core, my pen is mightier than your chords fighting against the Lord! I strike this squad with assaults if you manage to rebuttle all of this, even God will applause just pause, coming to damage your verses didn't do squat fuck yall guys for now, next verse is reserved Ridley Squat! ... |
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daydizzle89
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Yeah,
This was a really well written diss. Straight forward with no bullshit. Came at multiple people with straight shots. You shitted on these people. Text or Audio, it doesn't matter. the content is here. The flow is here and the punches are here also. This was dope. A long verse but you kept the momentum going with just straight shitting on bitches. Nice work Here Crete |
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D.Von Doom
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Hmmm wonder if you're shooting at the whole click now instead of ch3kk....mind enlightening me??
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IsaiahtheGreat
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Damn!! After Ch3kk made that "Message to LA" that riled up whole damn site (don't blame those for getting offended, by the way) and now this diss, all I can say is this is getting very interesting. But to the diss, this was straight. You were straight to the point (which I like), and you stated alot of things
people were probably thinking (alluding to the studio gangstas line). Way to defend the text heads, Crete. |
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ch3kkgame
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Smh, I figured. Good shit tho none the less you texted. You know it's no pressure with this right? Until you get on a mic bruh. Sit down and stop keyboard flexing. I'll give you the half grin. Good effort lil guy.
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Rutter knows best
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This was a solid round up con. I think the best part was full of truths. You managed to touch base on loads of things. The haze dissing you, elite turning on syn, the trying to diss a dead crew,, studio gangsters, not giving a platform for a battle. You just clowned end the whole beef n showed how ridiculous it was.
It was a long drop and not every part was doing damage but it carried things over to the parts that did nicely. The flow and execution was solid stuff and it all read nicely. I liked how your saying what everyone thinking but most are scared to say, props. Good shit. Nice feedback d von, showing ya class there dude. Expect more of the same from the rest. |
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#bananas
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Concrete
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Not reallly, I mentioned by name who this was aimed for. If you're in DN but don't have a problem with me, I don't have a problem with you.
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Concrete
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We heard enough of this already and it's been adressed properly in both my disses towards you. It's time you come up with a new angle now. Please don't argue back and pollute this thread with more bickering, PM me if you wanna discuss it further. Thanks for those who's feeding, I'm gonna do some more feeding myself here. I see this came out quite long but there was an endless amount of material to take on here. Writing 100 bars for LD is easier than writing 16 for Ridley Squat.
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Crimson Juice
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since I posted Feed in audio mic section,I've been
reading all comments made,and now this Diss,which I'll leave comment on soon,seems ppl don't like or want to read it when criticism is offered,yet it's needed by us all,but finally the back m forth has been closed now we have this verse,(thankfully)cuz it was getting out of hand,one guy even came across like he had armour on,saying I'm doing it for the text heads here,maybe,but ppl have opinions,and living in the west we are allowed to express them,plus what I got from he's audio when I listened was this,he said he will achieve he's goals no matter what...but this is only my take on it... It's true this Diss was well thought out,it was to the point also,I liked it,your contents were directed well as was your approach,even your punches were present,it was also easy on the eye to read,still didn't get why you went after other ppl,but hay,more the merrier right, anyways good job...enjoyed the read...peace. |
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Trizzy Tre
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This was a dope response Con...a little to long but dope none the less. You had some hard hitting personals and witty crafted punches. The opening quotes were a nice touch...
don't try deny, your rap was useful, but lyrics fruitless none care bout used mins, stop with stupid excuses this unit is a nuisance, how they been declaring war but a request for fair crew-battle? was clearly ignored.. ^^^^^^......this was tough bruh..lol liked it LD's ferocious with "a mixtape, plus 3 to 4 other tracks" against my one verse fronting back, still something lack yall can't dodge this fact, observe my keys spell trouble Lions Den made all that noise, but not a single rebuttal! ^^^^^^..... This was a solid few lines. Liked the All That Noise play charging dudes, to grab a michophone and make flows but right now yall should pick up a pen, and take notes study how to lyrically break foes, within rhyme schemes think you smoked Crete? that just another pipe dream it might seem, that audios automatically maim writtens so imma fill my pen with the heavy lead, aim at victims ^^^^^.....dope flip here! Raw shit Real hard diss here, solid response. I laughed at the Lions Den being a gay club in his hometown. Nice personal shit.. Overall this beef has brought out some dope work on both sides. Been interesting to watch it unfold and push each sides to lyrically up their game. Nice verse. |
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Cheeseburger Eddie
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Easy to read, fantastic flow, great rhyme schemes and very effective/clear points. That's a fantastic verse, props.
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Concrete
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^^ Hey thanks for the feed guys it's appreciated.
I might add that this is not an attack against audioheads in general, stay busy with it.
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Concrete
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Final bump to debunk any theory out there that says Ch3kk killed SYN.
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ch3kkgame
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No need to debunk FACTS bruh. Syn is dead. While yo ass trying to throw rocks at the sun fucking with me. You let Ridley run up in yo ass raw. Lmfao, stay in ur lane cause trying to play with the big dogs got u all fucked up. Congrats on the L Ridley about to give yo ass.
Oh yea, let me feed the verse. Wack shit. Done. Lions Den Mafucka....
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Concrete
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Once again showing you class here. I told you countless times to PM me directly instead of polluting threads. Let's be real here Ch3kk, right now you're acting like a straight up drama-queen. Syn is currently dead yeah, but obviously not because of you, that was kinda the point, dumbass.
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