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GDub
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Posted: 11 June 2019 at 9:17pm |
I have a video series where I record myself freestyling. This is by far my most popular freestyle vid. I changed up my rap style quite a bit during this video series.
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Crimson Juice
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OK 1st thing 1st, props for posting this joint up and sharing, for the most part
i liked it, and as this was a freestyle it's understandable you'll stumble at times rhyming words together, but you managed rather well to keep this down to a minimum, i will state that it did get a little stale past mid way through, even the switching up didn't help to break it, in my opinion you need to think about the vowels your spitting and the speed in which your delving them at, i'd would of liked you to slow it up mid way through, in fact start slow and work it up maybe, as going at it in one tempo made it sound like you wasn't to comfortable doing it to an extent, overall a real good display,i feel an audio head say Neek Doom ect ect, would give you better feed than me, still solid effort...peace |
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Essence1
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watch your levels.
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