Assassins vs The Dynasty: Frank White vs. ExoDuzt |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
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Posted: 22 November 2006 at 3:12pm |
Dynasty: ExoDuzt
Assasins: Frank White Blind drops to Scotty32 (Me) Verses due Sunday, Dec 10 14-20 lines each battle |
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Exoduzt
Superior Member NaCl Joined: 08 April 2006 Location: Long Island Status: Offline Points: 5331 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 41-7-5 Form: WWWWWW |
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im ready
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
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Frank White:
Fuck ExoDuzt battling im bringing so much heat im tropical get this dude on have i got news for you he needs to stay topical Ive got no respect im just here representing my hood and my crew look at the first part of your name and you know that ive dumped you By the time youve lost this battling yourll ask what the fucks going on i look at your record the thing you can add to it is lost to frank white.com My punchlines are dope i know im ill i dont even have to question it you shat yourself thats why you had to ask for feed before you posted shit ExoDuzt enjoy the ride i give you props you turned up and tried But lyrically you died dwag give up even karma aint on your side Youll ite but rhymerukus should of stopped there migration You've been in a dead Dynasty ever since they lost New Generation We aint friends playa we aint never going to be breaking no bread The only reason you "Duzt" is most my punches go over your head I aint a geek i dont hang around with loosing teams how can u be hard when u substitute punches for Rhyme schemes This aint real beef the dynasty they just dead cattle ExoDuzt you got no flair your the Claude Makelele of the rap battle Expos: Ive got News for you topical news show hese far better at topicals. ex as in ex girlfriend. hese has three wins www.get it, he had a thread asking for feed from his crew on his verse, on his old site rhymerukus they have a Karma system he had -1,000,000,001 karma. Claude Makelele is a chelsea player all his does is niggle and annoy he never tries to score. ExoDust Fuck you and the assasins i'll sever you bitches... your skills are juss like the holacaust, they never exsisted... the dynasty? we have a rite to stand and boast... frank your the laughing stock of this board i should thank this joke... the only kid in la history to have his fucken rank revoked... this is a masscre, you should of been training to stop this... you fuckin jew youd back out of this juss for the change in my pocket... ya penny pinchin faggot, this battle is somethin im lovin... fuck it ya nothin... the difference between you and a pizza? pizza dont scream when its stuck in tha oven... fuck this jew bag im prepared ta stab and damage ya... this hebrew hammer was once pro but demoted back to amateur... ill take the ways of the church and hop in the confessional... "franks been here since the beginning and hes still not a professional"... no skills no holacaust juss a bunch of diminished fables... ima win this before christmas while this bitch spins his dradle.. Edited by Scotty32 - 11 December 2006 at 4:23pm |
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Demonic
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Frank: Nice verse liked it alot actually... your humour was on point i thought ...turned up and tried bar was well funny had a good flow too...frank white .com was nice... Karma personal was nice too...overall one of the better Frank White drops
Exo:flowed nice all the way through...The jew shit is played out... but i understand that ya new ish so ... opener was mad nice thr rank revoke shit was also dope... but is it true? i cant remember that .......anway closer was decent too... Overall this battle was mad nice... and mad close... Ima vote frank ... On the fact that he had more personals... serious other than that there wasnt much seperating shit in my opinion... |
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Fatal
Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
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Yeah...when the s4r first started, the original judges gave him pro...then they changes they minds and made him an ama
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Demonic
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ha...i didnt know that my bad...
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Kay B
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Uppin for votes....
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G-Pfeif
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1-0 Frank...
uppin for votes |
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"I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks" |
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Senor Perfecto
Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3272 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL |
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Frank... typical spit... Poor flow and simple rhymes... Punches were ok... with some original wordplay if badly worded...
Exoduzt... some concepts were repeated during the spit... but overall... an aggressive verse with good punches... Flow was severely disrupted by the three-line rhyme near the start but picked up again afterwards...
Vote: Exoduzt...
Adios...
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mcwoods
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vote Frank
frank - liked ur verse alot, good flow throughout, had alot of original stuff. ie .com ... not played stuff, makelele line was v good and i felt u tried more to have original and harder hitting punches, had less filler stuff
exo- liked ur verse aswell, althought punches ( besides rank revoked ) didnt hit too hard for me, some filler ie. " this is a massacre" , " ya fuckin jew" "fuckin pinch penny faggot", too much of that for me, and not enuff clever insults, holocaust stuff wasnt too bad.
so vote for Frank
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Kay B
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^ lol all the 'bad' lines u highlighted were personals yet u say they aint clever?....
Obviously u look for 'canibus beat around the bush' punches rather them 'em straight to the point' shit...but whatever man |
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mcwoods
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lol, yeh there personals, and i dont tink theyre clever, i dont want sumone to just go " ur a fuckhead"- any one can do that, it seperates the pros from everyone else, like i say stuff lik that, coz i can think of nothing betr lol, and reading a talented persons rhymes, i wud expect betr.
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ProFound
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In my opinion it wasn't even really a question who won.. but thats my opinion...
Frank White : I thought it was a pretty simple//generic verse.. like some of the lines.. add your lost to frank white.com < in my opinion I thought that was stupid.. I don't think ya verse flowed all that well when I read it.. Im sorry but I think it could have been much better
Exo : good verse, I like the rank punches//personals they were nice, flow was good.. I thought you easily took this, I though your verse was much more complex then Franks..
Vote : Exo
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frank white
Veteran First Audio Battle Winner Joined: 23 April 2004 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 1556 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #13 Stats: 28-63-3 Form: LLNWWL |
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2 All laugh at generic they was all personals
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the punching machine
bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest |
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U.N.L.M.
Standard Member Joined: 19 December 2006 Location: USA Status: Offline Points: 1955 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 23-15-0 Form: WWWWWW |
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Frank White- Verse was pretty good...i liked the .com punch and the karma one too.....Claude Maklele one was okay, dump you/ex punch was also okay, you had some personal stuff in there and i thought you did a pretty good job....overall you had an okay flow but your rhymes were a little simple, but all in all it was a nice drop
Exo- Flowed nicely throughout...and the verse seemed like you were aggressive which was nice..... some real nice punches(revoked rank) and some of the jew shit was played out but you had good punches and overall it was a nice drop too...
I'm gonna give my vote to ExoDuzt...it was close but ExoDuzt seemed more aggressive in his punches and i thought that made his punches more effective and made me pick him slightly over frank's verse
V/Exo
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